Suprise! bonus chapter translations 3

Started by Eff Efferson, April 15, 2018, 08:05:21 PM

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here are two chapters I did for y'all today!

Dr Clay gets a vague (and hard to translate) offer from his prison guard

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/04/gxp-12-chapter-1.html


Ryo-ohki comes home from jurai and washu demonstrates why she shouldn't help in the kitchen

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-8-chapter-1.html
for all my tenchi work go to
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Pdfs and audiobooks:
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Quote from: Fap_fapperson on April 15, 2018, 08:05:21 PM
here are two chapters I did for y'all today!

Dr Clay gets a vague (and hard to translate) offer from his prison guard

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/04/gxp-12-chapter-1.html


Ryo-ohki comes home from jurai and washu demonstrates why she shouldn't help in the kitchen

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-8-chapter-1.html
Thanks a lot.

Quote from: Fap_fapperson
"Sorry, Mr. Washu. we have instruction to remain and lowkey as possible until returning to the earth ... "
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-8-chapter-1.html
And here I thought it was just Naja that had gender identity issues.  :smug:

Quote from: Fap_fapperson
" Ryoko and Ayeka's fights sure have matured."  
the two often bumped heads but Ryoko was fond of Sasami and Ayeka fond of Ryo-Ohki.
This chapter is full of awww moments, especially how everyone takes turns comforting a teary Ryo-Ohki after her long trip return.  :soqoot:
I've also quietly theorized that over time Sasami's (and to a lesser degree Ayeka's) bonding with Ryo-Ohki telepathically rubbed off on Ryoko's subconscious in how she viewed the Princesses.

Quote from: Kuugen on April 16, 2018, 03:29:54 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on April 15, 2018, 08:05:21 PM
here are two chapters I did for y'all today!

Dr Clay gets a vague (and hard to translate) offer from his prison guard

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/04/gxp-12-chapter-1.html


Ryo-ohki comes home from jurai and washu demonstrates why she shouldn't help in the kitchen

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-8-chapter-1.html
Thanks a lot.

Quote from: Fap_fapperson
"Sorry, Mr. Washu. we have instruction to remain and lowkey as possible until returning to the earth ... "
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-8-chapter-1.html
And here I thought it was just Naja that had gender identity issues.  :smug:

Quote from: Fap_fapperson
" Ryoko and Ayeka's fights sure have matured."  
the two often bumped heads but Ryoko was fond of Sasami and Ayeka fond of Ryo-Ohki.
This chapter is full of awww moments, especially how everyone takes turns comforting a teary Ryo-Ohki after her long trip return.  :soqoot:
I've also quietly theorized that over time Sasami's (and to a lesser degree Ayeka's) bonding with Ryo-Ohki telepathically rubbed off on Ryoko's subconscious in how she viewed the Princesses.

Y I K E S thanks... i haven't been rereading these once i finished  cause i don't plan to till im done with all of them so  if you notice any errors just lemme know ill fix em... google loves to gender bend


also makes sense ryoko tried to reach out an olive branch once ryo bonded with ayeka but ayeka was still under the impression yosho was dead....  im glad that ayeka now only affectionately fights ryoko now that the story's revealed ryoko didn't kill him or act of her own will and that ayeka wouldnt have been able to marry yosho anyways
for all my tenchi work go to
tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com
Pdfs and audiobooks:
click here

Quote from: Fap_fapperson on April 16, 2018, 03:53:45 AM
im glad that ayeka now only affectionately fights ryoko now that the story's revealed ryoko didn't kill him or act of her own will and that ayeka wouldnt have been able to marry yosho anyways

Quote from: Fap_fapperson
Ryoko, saw the Ryuuou on the monitor of Ryo-Ohki as it burst out of the dock it was harbored in. She felt there was something different about it.
"Well now, That ship seems much stronger, ... I guess I can take a moment to play with them."

...

Ryoko was taking it easy on her. She was playing with her. Numerous energy bullets were fired from Ryo-Ohki and approached Ryuuou.
Ayeka's ship blocked then with its Light Hawk Wings again, but one bounced off and hit Ayeka's favorite garden.
"That was my favorite garden! I won't forgive you for that, you space pirate!!"
"Your favorite, huh? Hahaha"

Ryoko deliberately concentrated her attacks on the garden. The plants and trees in the garden were turned to ash instantaneously.

...

Ryoko remembered Ayeka who acted very angrily towards her on Jurai.
"That girl was nice. She made me smile."
It had been long time since she last smiled.
she soon found herself laughing

From what I gathered of the Yosho novel, Ryoko led a pretty empty and soul-less existence early on as Kagato's puppet. Would it not be accurate to say that her initial encounter with Ayeka on Jurai was one of the first moments of significant true joy she had experienced? It is said up until this point that other forms of stimulation did little for her and her short skirmish with Azusa was similarly unremarkable.

That's about right.
Ryoko pushes emotional buttons, Mihoshi presses physical ones. ;)
"Growing up leads to growing old and then to dying,and dying to me don't sound like all that much fun."