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"No Greater Love" version 2
« on: April 13, 2013, 04:37:37 AM »
 

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 Sasami peered through the crack in the doorway, her eyes wide. This was a special treat for her. Often she got to see one of the two women bathing or undressing, but to see them together was not something that happened often for her. As she watched the women in the scissor position (a favorite for Sasami), her hands were between her own legs, rubbing furiously.

“Sasami, what are you doing?” a voice called out from further down the hall.

Sasami glanced up to see her sister, Aeka, staring at her wide-eyed. A moment passed between them before Sasami yelped in embarrassment and ran off down the hall.

In the bedroom, the two women paused as they heard Sasami’s cry. One of them knew all too well what had just happened, and that a secret could be kept no longer.

                                              * * *

“Aeka, I really think you’re overreacting.”  Kiyone replied.

“But, you don’t understand! This isn’t an isolated incident. I’ve seen Sasami peeping in on her in the bath and while she undresses. Sasami didn’t realize that I saw her,and I was too embarrassed at the time to say anything. I think she’s really in love with her. To think her own....”

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“Look,’ Tenchi chimmed in, “I really don’t see why you think this is so unusual, at least not by Juraian standards. Don’t forget, Aeka, that not long ago you intended to marry your own brother. Is this any more unusual than that?”

Aeka paused to think for a minute. She didn’t know which surprised her more, the fact that Tenchi of all people was okay with this, or by the fact that he had such insight into Juraian culture.

“Furthermore,” Tenchi went on, “we know that Tsunami and Sasami are close to being fully merged in both body and mind. And considering that we know Tsunami’s relationship with her, it should come as no surprise to any of us that Sasami would end up feeling the same way.”

As Aeka and Kiyone took in Tenchi’s words, none of them realized that somebody else had been listening in the whole time.......

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“You knew about this, didn’t you?” the woman asked.

“Yes.” Tsunami replied with a sigh, “I didn’t want to say anything, because I wanted her to be able to express her feelings in her own way when she was ready to do so. I didn’t want to force her.”

“I’m going to talk to her myself” the woman said.

“But....” Tsuanmi attempted to say before the woman explained further.

“You don’t understand. It’s not that I want to force out her feelings. But, the truth is that I feel the same way about her, and now that I know what I know, I can’t keep my own feelings secret any longer.”

Tsunami understood.

“Very well, then. However, you understand by now that you’re not alone in this. There are others that Sasami has feelings for, and whom love her in return. I believe that if you are finally going to express your feelings, it may be time for everybody else to do so as well.”

The woman smiled at Tsunami’s declaration, and then embraced and kissed her lover.

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Sasami sat out in the woods crying to herself. She had no idea what to do now. Now that Aeka knew her secret, soon everybody would know, and after being heartbroken by the discovery that Aeka didn’t return Sasami’s feelings, Sasami didn’t know how she’d handle the hurt of this rejection she was certain was to come.

As she buried her face in her knees, she felt the warm surge of energy pass through her that she knew all too well. She was being transported aboard Tsunami. She looked up and recognized her main bedroom at the heart of the ship. There were two familiar women standing in the room, familiar not only because she knew them both well, but also because looking at them was almost like looking in a mirror.

“Mommy, Tsunami....” Sasami said nervously. She was afraid that she knew what was coming, but she was suddenly more at ease when she saw the warm looks on both their faces.

“Oh, Sasami!” Misaki cried out with tears of joy in her eyes as she hugged her daughter. Sasami noted that Misaki’s hug was much different from her usual over-affectionate glomps. There was a sense of tenderness to this. Sasami understood, with some disbelief, what this implied.

“Oh, sweety,” Misaki went on, “I know how you feel, and I want you to know that I’ve always felt the same way about you!”

Sasami was too stunned for words. Tsunami then broke the silence.

“Silly girl. Did you really think that your mother would be in a relationship with me for so long, but not be in love with you too? You and I will be as one, after all.”

The tears swelled in Sasami’s eyes.

“Mommy, I’ve loved you for so long. But, after finding out that Aeka only loved me as a sister, I thought that you would only see me as a daughter.”

Misaki then took Sasami by the hand and began to guide her to the entry of the room.

“Come, now, little Sasami. Tsunami and I have an extra surprise for you.”

As the three of them left the room and stepped out into the open field outside, Sasami was greeted by more than a dozen faces. She knew them all. Friends and family that she had come to be so close to. Tenchi and Kiyone were there. So were Ukyo and her family, Misao, Bron and Apatty, Suwatee and Shuree, Ryoko Asakura, Michiru and Makoto, Akasha and her family, Sekky the shark girl, and even feisty Ramia.

“Wha....what are you all doing here?” Sasami asked weakly.

“Tsunami brought us all here to tell you something.” Kiyone said with a smile.

“Everybody here is somebody whose heart you touched in a big way.” Tenchi explained. “We all know how you’ve come to feel about us, and we want you to know that we all feel the same way.”

“WE LOVE YOU, SASAMI!” the group said in unison.

“I....I don’t know what to say....” Sasami replied, the tears now streaming down her eyes.

“All you have to do is answer us this one question,” Misaki said, “will you marry us?”

Sasami didn’t hesitate.

“Yes! I want to spend the rest of my life with all of you!”

The group cheered and then gathered around Sasami, each one taking their turn giving her a kiss and a hug. Akasha did a little more by giving Sasami a nice little bite on the neck as well. But, after it all, there still seemed to be something troubling Sasami, and Tsunami knew all too well what it was. She moved in close to Sasami and whispered in her ear.

“I know that there’s somebody missing from this group. The pale-skinned beauty from your dreams. I want you to know that she’s out there, and you will be together with her someday. She will make your soul and your family complete.”

With Tsunami’s words, Sasami felt more at ease. For all the tragedy and hardships she experienced in her life, she knew now that she was loved, and the best days were just over the horizon.


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Note: If you think that's a big harem, that's just the beginning. Expect more girls to be added to this harem :smug:
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Re: "No Greater Love" version 2
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2013, 05:55:37 AM »
 

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Re: "No Greater Love" version 2
« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2013, 06:11:04 AM »
 

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Forcing someone to suicide is not a crime ? BTW, good story but I wonder if people you didn't talk about could understand.
 

Re: "No Greater Love" version 2
« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2013, 06:17:10 AM »
 

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Forcing someone to suicide is not a crime ?

The only crime against humanity here is this fic.
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Re: "No Greater Love" version 2
« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2013, 06:19:19 AM »
 

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Forcing someone to suicide is not a crime ?

The only crime against humanity here is this fic.

I like the fact Jibril read fic she apparently hates.
 

Re: "No Greater Love" version 2
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2013, 06:26:05 AM »
 

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I like the fact Jibril read fic she apparently hates.

How do you come to dislike some movies?  By not watching them?  Oh wait, you watch the Nostalgia Critic and have him tell you what to think <.<
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Re: "No Greater Love" version 2
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I like the fact Jibril read fic she apparently hates.

How do you come to dislike some movies?  By not watching them?  Oh wait, you watch the Nostalgia Critic and have him tell you what to think <.<

You read many Zigra's fanfiction and each times you said you didn't like so why do you continues read an author you doesn't like. This is  like I decided read all K'thardin's stories even if after read a few chapter wrote by him I found that was crap.
 

Re: "No Greater Love" version 2
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Edit: I should note, Gaston, that I generally don't leave reviews on FFnet for Ziggy so as not to sway anyone. :emot-iiam:
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Re: "No Greater Love" version 2
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