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Anime => Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki => Topic started by: Eff Efferson on May 07, 2018, 11:12:38 AM

Title: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 07, 2018, 11:12:38 AM
edit 1:

first chapter down.
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/11/gxp-17-chapter-1-machine.html



GXP 16 is done, I skipped one chapter, but its litteraly a hey everyone lets gather and watch tv chapter which is followed by a second chapter of gathering around and watching tv... so naturaly nothing important is lost.

https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-16-index.html

17 will not be  fully translated. sorry but its bad Its hard for me to read in later parts, and I just don't want to anymore. I'm done for the year my dudes. maybe next year when i do the ova 5 novel.
I might do some detailed summaries but not for a while.
here's the summary of what i rememeber

the second seina is nana, the cat thing on the cover, a half goblin shapeshifter who's also actually a boy, he's barigaru's pet,

seina's philospher stone becomes a sentient waifu names natori (a billion) because she's a billiontimes better then nana (seven)
her apearence is all the girls and airi mixed together with washu.

They find out that magic is supposed to be compatable with technology but there was some sort of error and now it isn't.

Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: oreo on May 09, 2018, 10:47:59 AM
how long do you usually finish TLing 1 chapter, because GXP 7 chapter 7 is taking longer than it usually does in uploading, not to mention I'm eager to read GXP 8 and 9 as well, since I'd prefer a chronological order type of reading the LN instead of reading the TLed part in a random fashion, but i'm not telling you to change your TLing habits since it helps out in the long term when you finish TLing the missing parts of the earlier chapters/volumes
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 09, 2018, 02:11:47 PM
Quote from: oreo on May 09, 2018, 10:47:59 AM
how long do you usually finish TLing 1 chapter, because GXP 7 chapter 7 is taking longer than it usually does in uploading, not to mention I'm eager to read GXP 8 and 9 as well, since I'd prefer a chronological order type of reading the LN instead of reading the TLed part in a random fashion, but i'm not telling you to change your TLing habits since it helps out in the long term when you finish TLing the missing parts of the earlier chapters/volumes

I'm actually working on that today. someways i just have it and get through about two or three... others i barely get through half.  my tranlations are really being held up because the past week I've been working on GXP 15 which is not only filled with names i have to manually cross reference the japanese version to find  (and usualy the reading isnt given the first time they show the name)  but GXP 15 is poorly google translated and its the size of 2-3 other novels.   and the other thing ive been working on is paradise war which is a bunch of new settings and places as well... 

but I'm working on GXP 7 today :P
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 10, 2018, 06:45:22 PM
two new updates today
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 13, 2018, 02:43:16 PM
seina meets azusa misaki and funaho.
yuzaki gets her debut
seina gets an unexpexted new waifu
mahma masaki shows up for the first time since ova 2.
seina meets neiju

all this and more on tenchi ball z
www.tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-7-chapter-9-short-version.html?m=1|tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-7-chapter-9-short-version.html?m=1
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 19, 2018, 12:11:39 AM
and another one down

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-7-chapter-10-short-version.html
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 19, 2018, 07:22:14 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-7-chapter-11-short-version.html

another novel down!
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: oreo on May 21, 2018, 11:47:09 AM
when will the TL for the missing Vol.8 chapters start, some people prefer a bit of content on the TLs, aside from not including the non-important parts
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 21, 2018, 03:04:18 PM
volume 8 will probably start next week  im taking it easy this week. im in between jobs so right now so im just taking a mental health break. i just spat out a chapter every other day for 2 months lol im a bit drained.  but its next book 15 and paradise war are just side dishes for when i get frustrated with the main course
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 22, 2018, 09:42:53 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-10-chapter-1.html

not a big update but still
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on May 23, 2018, 12:04:54 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on May 22, 2018, 09:42:53 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-10-chapter-1.html

not a big update but still

Much appreciated!!
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: antvasima on May 23, 2018, 06:15:58 AM
Yes. Thank you for the help.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Valmer on May 23, 2018, 01:09:54 PM
tnxs for u hard work fap
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 24, 2018, 03:13:54 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/04/gxp-13-chapter-3-short-version.html

I wanted to finish this chapter i started a while back ... I'm working on gxp 15 and 8 chapter 2 next
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 26, 2018, 03:18:59 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-8-chapter-2-short-version.html?m=1
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 26, 2018, 05:37:52 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/6-invitation-to-mafia-mr.html


another one woo
Title: Re: GXP 15, 7 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 27, 2018, 03:28:30 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-15-chapter-4.html

this took sooooooooo long
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 28, 2018, 09:10:14 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-9-chapter-1.html
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Kuugen on May 29, 2018, 01:52:38 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on May 28, 2018, 09:10:14 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-9-chapter-1.html
Thanks for the hard on-going work. Seeing that illustration of Fuku's scary expression always gives me chills. I immediately think of how horrifying it would be if her Astral memory as Widow relapsed and she resumed a murderous rampage while in cabbit form.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 31, 2018, 02:14:37 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-8-chapter-3-short-version.html

airi gets worse and worse every time shes mentioned...
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Kuugen on May 31, 2018, 05:03:16 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on May 31, 2018, 02:14:37 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-8-chapter-3-short-version.html

airi gets worse and worse every time shes mentioned...
I'm starting to believe having her escape from Airai was a mistake..
Thanks for another chapter, the integrated foot-notes are really helpful.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 31, 2018, 08:50:06 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-9-chapter-17.html

happy 700th post to meeee
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 01, 2018, 12:59:07 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-8-chapter-4-short-version.html

not gonna lie i blamed half the lines in this chapter and this is super loosely translated.
i got like 6 chapters left in this book and i dont like any of them so....
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 04, 2018, 12:00:41 AM
two mini updates gxp 8 is killing me with its chapter lengths
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 05, 2018, 12:27:07 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-9-chapter-11.html?m=1

i did this and another small chapter
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 06, 2018, 09:49:22 PM
all of epiosde 14 is now done. .... i dont want to do gxp 15. its just fuku being neglected for a whole episode...

the only real take aways from it are that she ran away to find ryo to learn how to dodge better to protect seina.

and that mashisu had her face blown off in a battle and reconstructed and thats why her face looks the wya it does....

also she was adopted by seto after all and now the chobimaru is a royal tree ship
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Kuugen on June 06, 2018, 10:23:10 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 06, 2018, 09:49:22 PM
all of epiosde 14 is now done. .... i dont want to do gxp 15. its just fuku being neglected for a whole episode...

the only real take aways from it are that she ran away to find ryo to learn how to dodge better to protect seina.

and that mashisu had her face blown off in a battle and reconstructed and thats why her face looks the wya it does....

also she was adopted by seto after all and now the chobimaru is a royal tree ship
Thanks for finishing this part up. Reading the machine version of GXP 15 with Fuku being treated like a really expensive version of Clippy for Microsoft Word the Kamidake was extremely distressing, more so than the anime depiction. They really drove home how much she yearns for Seina's embrace and for him to spoil her, as well as the importance of the blanket's scent acting as his substitute for her loneliness. It made me almost as upset, personally, as the first time Seina encountered Tarant.   :brit
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 08, 2018, 11:55:47 AM
one more chapter till episode 16 is done... im going to really rush out what i can at this point. partialy due to lazy partialy due to the text not being easy for me to read heavy details. i mean its basicly a this is more or less what is going on level of detail accuracy at this point now that i have most of the plot hwavy chapters out of the way but if i get any i didnt do they will be done heavilyer obviously but... meh.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 08, 2018, 11:57:53 AM
also the tarrant chapters genuinely get me too... im half hesitent to do the fuku episode in full detail partialy also becuase of how upsetting im sure it is too. if im going to do it i got to be in the mood for translating all that.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 09, 2018, 03:45:12 PM
ok so  bear with me. i have a theory and im not puting it in the translations... but ive theorised for a while that commander balta is taiyo... or taiyos father... and ryoko baltas father is taiyo and janis.

black hair. shank guild thought thwy wiped out him and his family. ryoko has special transformation abilities... kind of like kei.  not that its ever going to be relevent to the plot. but it would be a nice touch
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 11, 2018, 08:04:34 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-10.html

TRY NOT TO CUT YOUR SELF ON THE EXTREME EDGE OF THIS CHAPTER
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 12, 2018, 03:25:18 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-14.html

literally the only mention of the first fleet commander ever since kamidake onsen 5
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Kuugen on June 12, 2018, 12:28:40 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 11, 2018, 08:04:34 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-10.html

"THEN WHY DID YOU USE MR. SLIMEY  #3' ..."
   in Amane's temple, a blood vessel was emerging clearly.
  "Oh, why Amane  do you want me to show  Seina the video i took of you being analysed by it? you looked stunning in it."
   she took video partially to keep them from doing anything to her and partially because she wanted to, and also
  (one day I have to remember to give seina a copy as a gift)

I wonder if she used the same camera which she secretly filmed Ryoko trapped alone crying in her lab overnight with that one time.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 12, 2018, 08:07:00 PM
Quote from: Kuugen on June 12, 2018, 12:28:40 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 11, 2018, 08:04:34 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-10.html

"THEN WHY DID YOU USE MR. SLIMEY  #3' ..."
   in Amane's temple, a blood vessel was emerging clearly.
  "Oh, why Amane  do you want me to show  Seina the video i took of you being analysed by it? you looked stunning in it."
   she took video partially to keep them from doing anything to her and partially because she wanted to, and also
  (one day I have to remember to give seina a copy as a gift)

I wonder if she used the same camera which she secretly filmed Ryoko trapped alone crying in her lab overnight with that one time.

haha i think so too
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 15, 2018, 03:51:11 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-18.html?m=1

almost done with 9 just like 4 more chapters to go but im being very slow about it. very busy lately.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Kuugen on June 16, 2018, 08:26:43 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 15, 2018, 03:51:11 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-18.html?m=1

almost done with 9 just like 4 more chapters to go but im being very slow about it. very busy lately.

Thanks, some minor nitpicks:
Quote
"Go home, Onii-chan, Fuku-chan"

"Welcome(?) home, Onii-chan, Fuku-chan"

"Hey, if your not doing anything, we should play gether too."

"Hey, if your not doing anything, we should play together too."
A very fun chapter, I pictured Seina piloting ZINV to battle a giant Fuku-zilla rising out from the ocean of Tokyo bay.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 16, 2018, 07:28:36 PM
Quote from: Kuugen on June 16, 2018, 08:26:43 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 15, 2018, 03:51:11 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-18.html?m=1

almost done with 9 just like 4 more chapters to go but im being very slow about it. very busy lately.

Thanks, some minor nitpicks:
Quote
"Go home, Onii-chan, Fuku-chan"

"Welcome(?) home, Onii-chan, Fuku-chan"

"Hey, if your not doing anything, we should play gether too."

"Hey, if your not doing anything, we should play together too."
A very fun chapter, I pictured Seina piloting ZINV to battle a giant Fuku-zilla rising out from the ocean of Tokyo bay.


thanks for the feedback. ill go back and fix it really quick to orrow. once i am done with all the chapters im going to head back and proofread and fix up the formatting for gxp 6 7 8 and 9
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 17, 2018, 03:59:43 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/paradise-war-chapter-1-part-4.html


so is anyone interested in more of paradise war now that episode 1 is done?
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 17, 2018, 06:36:04 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-13.html

fuku and ryo go on a road trip
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Kuugen on June 17, 2018, 11:48:00 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 17, 2018, 06:36:04 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-13.html

fuku and ryo go on a road trip

  "good. well at least every one's safe  this time...."
  "Don't worry I have been watching over them"
   Suddenly, Washu dissolved her optical camouflage to reveal her walking around with a camera.
  "Waaaaa Washu-chan?"
  "Hhuhuhu! I'm titling this"a walk to find your master"! guhuhuhuhu! I was able to take such good footage."
   Washu issued a V sign with a full smile.


Again, that camera...
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 17, 2018, 12:15:41 PM
Quote from: Kuugen on June 17, 2018, 11:48:00 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 17, 2018, 06:36:04 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-13.html

fuku and ryo go on a road trip

  "good. well at least every one's safe  this time...."
  "Don't worry I have been watching over them"
   Suddenly, Washu dissolved her optical camouflage to reveal her walking around with a camera.
  "Waaaaa Washu-chan?"
  "Hhuhuhu! I'm titling this"a walk to find your master"! guhuhuhuhu! I was able to take such good footage."
   Washu issued a V sign with a full smile.


Again, that camera...

I wonder where she got it from... how long has she had it... do you think she keeps her videos backed up in the cloud lol
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Y_Anthony_Who on June 17, 2018, 09:08:35 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 17, 2018, 03:59:43 AM
so is anyone interested in more of paradise war now that episode 1 is done?

I am! Sorry I'm not caught up with all your translation work, but I will be!
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Tenchi Ryu on June 18, 2018, 12:19:41 AM
Finally gonna start catching up to the translated novels

Really appreciate the work fapperson
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 19, 2018, 01:18:19 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-16.html
Mihoshi get's scolded
Mitoto get's scolded
tenchi scolds some chicken in a hotpot
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: oreo on June 19, 2018, 10:52:09 PM
GXP 9 chapters 7-8 when? Can't wait for GXP 10 - 14 to be finished as well
Also, Is GXP 14 completed? The page looked like it's still not yet completed :rad:
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Ricin on June 19, 2018, 11:05:15 PM
Fap is going as fast as he can. But please remember that he is only one man and is doing the best he can to do these translations.

I thought 14 was done though as that was one of the first he gave his attention to as the ending in the anime was shit
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 20, 2018, 01:00:13 AM
Quote from: oreo on June 19, 2018, 10:52:09 PM
GXP 9 chapters 7-8 when? Can't wait for GXP 10 - 14 to be finished as well
Also, Is GXP 14 completed? The page looked like it's still not yet completed :rad:

7 is coming tomorrow hopefully im over half done with it. the content of 7 and 8 made me put it at low priority,  I know i've been really flittering about this book but it helps when your as adhd as me.

I CANT WAIT TO DO GXP 10

its the imuim interview ark, they compleatly redo what happens

seina is given a vacation on imuim a tropical planet filled with sexually stimulating plants to make up for breaking his vacation to test him against the goodluck fleet, and also secretly because they fear he might be assasinated,

there he interviews the girls and learns more about them and his feelings towards them, its an "interview" for crew members of the kamidake, but its really more or less a marriage interview.

seina learns why amane acts the way she does.
kiriko appologizes to seina
karen tells seina the truth about where she is from.
ryoko reveals how erma and her feel about him.
its a very nice ark if you always wanted to about the characters more.
oh and seina gets bitch slapped by one of the seto scouts for playing dumb to her feelings. that makes me laugh every time.


14 is done, i seem to have accidentally deleted it from the page fuk thank you for bringing that to my attention

originally i released 14 was semi completed around the time i did 1-4 with the last part poorly summarized but when i went back and revised the true tenchi and gxp 1-4 i actually revised it too and finished it.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 20, 2018, 01:02:57 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2017/03/gxp-14.html
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 20, 2018, 02:35:54 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-7.html
I'm going to go back and proof read all I've done as sooooon as i do the next chapter because i did it to this one and it WAS A  MESS... im so sorry guys but that's just how i work.  please bear with me. yeeeesh this was bad i had a lot of sentences i forgot to delete it was a mess....
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 23, 2018, 08:41:48 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/paradise-war-final-episode-part-1.html

the first part of the last episode of paradise war
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: oreo on June 24, 2018, 04:56:39 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 23, 2018, 08:41:48 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/paradise-war-final-episode-part-1.html

the first part of the last episode of paradise war
By episode you mean Volume? You really got me confused with that phrase, and when you say last episode you mean Volume 3 (Final Volume) of the Paradise War Novel?
Also Suggestion: when you finished TLing the last part of a Volume put an [End] next to it so people wouldn't be spending time thinking whether or not there might still be more even though all 10 chapters of - let's say - Volume 1 have been TLed (e.g. Volume 1 - Chapter 10 [End] (including the afterword/author's comment))
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 24, 2018, 03:58:18 PM
Quote from: oreo on June 24, 2018, 04:56:39 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 23, 2018, 08:41:48 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/paradise-war-final-episode-part-1.html

the first part of the last episode of paradise war
By episode you mean Volume? You really got me confused with that phrase, and when you say last episode you mean Volume 3 (Final Volume) of the Paradise War Novel?
Also Suggestion: when you finished TLing the last part of a Volume put an [End] next to it so people wouldn't be spending time thinking whether or not there might still be more even though all 10 chapters of - let's say - Volume 1 have been TLed (e.g. Volume 1 - Chapter 10 [End] (including the afterword/author's comment))

thats not a bad idea for these individualy chaptered ones
and i mean its the last chapter of the last book
kaji sorted them by 9 episodes instead of by chapter and so those books have giant fucking chapters
Title: Re: GXP 15, 8 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 25, 2018, 09:05:08 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-8.html

GXP 9 is all done! and i will be grammer revising it over the next few weeks

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/05/gxp-9-chapter-1.html

now with a handy dandy link to the next chapter at the bottom of each chapter
Title: Re: GXP 15, 10 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: antvasima on June 26, 2018, 12:31:39 AM
Thank you for doing this for the Tenchi community Fap.
Title: Re: GXP 15, 9 and and paradise war discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 30, 2018, 03:51:00 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-10-chapter-11.html
tenchi muyo gxp novel 10-11 "the interview" with kiriko's team,

one of my fave parts of the gxp novels cause it really gets into the deep psyche of the girls.one of my fave parts of the gxp novels cause it really gets into the deep psyche of the girls.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on July 01, 2018, 03:06:21 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-11-chapter-3.html I'm tempted to translate all of 11 first ... but who knows it's not a very important section but again... gxp 10 is important and yet 15 or so chapters...
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: oreo on July 01, 2018, 12:03:09 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on July 01, 2018, 03:06:21 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-11-chapter-3.html I'm tempted to translate all of 11 first ... but who knows it's not a very important section but again... gxp 10 is important and yet 15 or so chapters...

Watch some motivational vids first or do a short meditation/rest before you TL Vol.10 to get the mood going

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Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on July 01, 2018, 02:03:22 PM
Quote from: oreo on July 01, 2018, 12:03:09 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on July 01, 2018, 03:06:21 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-11-chapter-3.html I'm tempted to translate all of 11 first ... but who knows it's not a very important section but again... gxp 10 is important and yet 15 or so chapters...

Watch some motivational vids first or do a short meditation/rest before you TL Vol.10 to get the mood going
rest sounds good i just need to take a vacation from it but i keeo finding myself going back to it when im bored... yet im too bored of doing it to concentrate well and i keep making a bunch of really bad grammer n spelling errors. hmm i just need to chill.. ive done alot this year and im at my limit.  im pretty stressed right now i got alot going on and yet nothing all at once
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on July 02, 2018, 01:50:14 PM
Try nature walks, exercise, and meditation music. It tends to work for me.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 07, 2018, 04:19:00 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-8-chapter-7.html
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 13, 2018, 07:40:23 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-15-chapter-5.html

this chapter sucks
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 16, 2018, 06:34:25 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-15-chapter-7-abridged-version.html

GXP 15 continues to be a talkathon.... ugh...

almost to the Zinv / HIMC battle though
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 19, 2018, 08:11:55 PM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-15-chapter-8-super-abridged.html

meep
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: oreo on August 20, 2018, 01:16:51 PM
Volumes 10-13 are still fragmented in its TLs fap, people will hardly read TL novels when previous Volumes/chapters remain unTLed, focus man
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Ricin on August 20, 2018, 06:15:54 PM
Please let fap do what he wants.  He is putting in tons of work for no compensation. We should be thankful for everything he has done so far.

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 20, 2018, 06:28:39 PM
Quote from: oreo on August 20, 2018, 01:16:51 PM
Volumes 10-13 are still fragmented in its TLs fap, people will hardly read TL novels when previous Volumes/chapters remain unTLed, focus man

gxp 15 + is a completly different monster then the rest of gxp. im half assedly  summerizing it so where up to snuff with whats going on  they will take me atleast another week to finish but honestly if iw as doing this full effort all day it would take me ... a day to finish this book in this way...

so just wait till i get done with it. i got to do this for the rest of 8 anywas
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: oreo on August 21, 2018, 04:48:50 PM
I know, it's just that last week I picked up a WN about a certain spider character after reading the manga adaptation. took me almost a week to read it all the way up to the latest chapter (which is also TLed) it's why I suddenly appeared in this place to check out the progress.
But I will try to find things to busy myself while waiting for Fap to finish TLing the series, the LN about a certain skeleton character is taking too long to release for one, the same thing for Parallel Paradise as well, so i'll have to find new things that can actually catch my interest aside from playing vidya
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 21, 2018, 08:19:57 PM
Quote from: oreo on August 21, 2018, 04:48:50 PM
I know, it's just that last week I picked up a WN about a certain spider character after reading the manga adaptation. took me almost a week to read it all the way up to the latest chapter (which is also TLed) it's why I suddenly appeared in this place to check out the progress.
But I will try to find things to busy myself while waiting for Fap to finish TLing the series, the LN about a certain skeleton character is taking too long to release for one, the same thing for Parallel Paradise as well, so i'll have to find new things that can actually catch my interest aside from playing vidya
ive bern busy playing botw n mario myself lol
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Dr.Soviet on August 21, 2018, 10:16:41 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on August 21, 2018, 08:19:57 PM
ive bern busy playing botw n mario myself lol

Video Games? Nerd :son:
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 22, 2018, 02:58:24 AM
GXP 15 should be done by next week luckly...  im on the last two chapters and honestly the first chapter is not important  cause its all from sorens sisters perspective so it's last... then back to the last few of GXP 8 and ... i will try to keep 10 breif... its got a lot of my fave dialog though... luckly 11 is actually 3/8ths done already... so these last few novels should be a breeze
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 22, 2018, 04:35:41 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-15-chapter-9-super-abridged.html

this is the big fight chapter

ZINV VS HIMC round 2... even if you don't keep up with the rest of the book this is the chapter to read.


the next few chapters are important too, even without all the action seina connects to some strange astral presence with the philosophers stone and it says something about the seed project... also he gets poisoned by goblins... so that's a thing
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on August 24, 2018, 06:44:27 AM
I agree with Ricin. Fap is awesome for doing this for our community.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Y_Anthony_Who on August 24, 2018, 08:39:06 PM
HIMC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE QUESTIONS THAN ANSWERRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 24, 2018, 08:43:56 PM
Quote from: Y_Anthony_Who on August 24, 2018, 08:39:06 PM
HIMC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE QUESTIONS THAN ANSWERRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uhm... so I'll have a the next chapter up today and at first it may seem to be going no where but holy crap i think were about to get into something kajishima has needed to explain for a long time and you just need to get to where the (*****************************) parts turn into words.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 24, 2018, 10:38:53 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-15-chapter-10-super-abridged.html

actually I lied its the next chapter where the <*******> shit turns into an astral connected voice.


Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 25, 2018, 08:29:56 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-15-chapter-11-translation.html

GXP 15 done... chapter one is unimportant... i'm not gonna work on it right away.

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-15-index.html

new section for GXP 15
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 27, 2018, 07:30:20 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-8-chapter-9.html

wanna know how big a hack job the anime is... this section made me realise the episode made like 0 sense and is full of remnants of hacked up sections of the novel version
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 28, 2018, 09:40:30 PM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/gxp-8-chapter-10.html

one more chapter of 8 left after this.

then to volume 10
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 29, 2018, 09:54:12 PM
book 8 done
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 05, 2018, 09:59:47 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-2.html
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 08, 2018, 02:21:53 AM
so i know it may seem like there havent been many updates lately and honestly these updates im doing for this book are pretty low quality but i dont have time right now like i used to to sti and make line for line accurate translations. but..  while it may seem like i havent put out things. i have actually been jumping to various chapters of gxp 10 and most chapters are atleasy half translated. so expect a quick easy role out of many chapters in a row. after this is 11 and i already have most of 11 partialy worked on so thay will gp quickly too
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: blackwhite256 on September 08, 2018, 10:24:17 PM
Take you time, bro. No need to rush it.

Appreciated all of your hard work so far. :worship: :worship: :worship:
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 08, 2018, 10:44:43 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-3.html

I'm trying to rush 10 to correspond with a pretty well followed tenchi rewatch tweetathon lol but mostly i want it done...

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 09, 2018, 03:12:05 AM
two new updates
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 15, 2018, 04:31:12 AM

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-7.html

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-9.html

no chapter 8 update cause its a big chapter... but the interview chapters are so intense i had to rush them out first.

I'm so glad to finally be able to start to show these off THIS IS WHY GXP  the anime's editing WAS A FUCKIN CRIME practically...
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 20, 2018, 06:28:43 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-10.html

interviews for hakuren's team
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 22, 2018, 07:06:13 PM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-8.html

the chapter before the interview

seina finds out about miki

and the seto scouts have a fight over how they feel about seina
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 23, 2018, 01:16:56 AM
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-13.html
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-12.html
suprise 3 chapters in one day only 2 more left  and one is half done already
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on September 23, 2018, 09:34:41 AM
Thank you for all of the help to this community.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 23, 2018, 04:50:03 PM
Quote from: antvasima on September 23, 2018, 09:34:41 AM
Thank you for all of the help to this community.

welcome. believe it or not there are really only about 1.5 bools worth of material left. gxp 11 is already half translated. and 13 is going to be an easy one its almost in perfect english already
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 26, 2018, 12:54:52 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-10-chapter-14.html?m=1 only one more left in this book
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 28, 2018, 03:31:06 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-11-chapter-4.html

oh and gxp 10 is done
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Dr.Soviet on September 28, 2018, 04:39:44 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on September 28, 2018, 03:31:06 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-11-chapter-4.html

oh and gxp 10 is done

:worship:
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Valmer on September 30, 2018, 09:35:10 AM
tnxs for what u are doing
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on October 02, 2018, 05:15:46 AM
Only two more chapters left in this book...
find out how jurai got its name...
also kanemitsu's wife introduces seina to her new kid
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/10/gxp-11-chapter-5.html
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on October 09, 2018, 06:36:02 PM
Two very large chapters and when there big, it makes it hard for me to translate because i loose my place alot so i am cutting them up

these are very different from what happened in the anime and show just how much nabeshin had to improvise this episode and just how much is ruined by his improv.


https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/10/gxp-11-chapter-6-part-1.html

https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/10/gxp-11-chapter-7-part-1.html
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on October 16, 2018, 04:54:11 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/10/gxp-11-chapter-6-part-1.html

1/3 is good stuff the other part is typical kajishima waifu baby antics
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on October 18, 2018, 04:52:22 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/10/gxp-11-index.html book 11 is done
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on October 29, 2018, 12:55:39 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/6-hiroshis-old-time-okay-finally-i-do.html

fidn out what happened to kiriko's dad
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: oreo on November 19, 2018, 07:56:30 AM
Looks like 12 and 13 are left to be fully TLed but i don't mind since I'm reading other Novels. Right now I'm binge watching [spoiler]The latest Precure show[/spoiler] to pass the time
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Dr.Soviet on November 19, 2018, 07:06:09 PM
Quote from: oreo on November 19, 2018, 07:56:30 AM
Looks like 12 and 13 are left to be fully TLed but i don't mind since I'm reading other Novels. Right now I'm binge watching [spoiler]The latest Precure show[/spoiler] to pass the time

Isn't that show for little girls lmao? :chord:
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: oreo on November 20, 2018, 12:05:57 AM
Already watched Slime (Ep8) and finished Overlord, as well as Legend of the Galactic Heroes (spent a whole week going through all of its episodes including the OVAs). As if there's any other good show to watch left, and i've no intention of putting up with whatever kinds of monstrosities coming out of california, even a show for little girls in Japan are light years better than a some show/video game that's supposedly AAA+ according to paid reviewers/critics smugdon
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Dr.Soviet on November 20, 2018, 02:32:42 AM
Quote from: oreo on November 20, 2018, 12:05:57 AM
monstrosities coming out of california

Truth
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on December 08, 2018, 06:23:29 PM
Quote from: oreo on November 20, 2018, 12:05:57 AM
Already watched Slime (Ep8) and finished Overlord...

Hey m8 you wouldn't happen to be OreoBrawl from YT?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: oreo on December 24, 2018, 08:38:41 PM
Quote from: WaitoKon on December 08, 2018, 06:23:29 PM
Quote from: oreo on November 20, 2018, 12:05:57 AM
Already watched Slime (Ep8) and finished Overlord...

Hey m8 you wouldn't happen to be OreoBrawl from YT?
No. And I have never heard of an individual named OreoBrawl before. I don't watch those 'e-celebs' people are calling them these days (assuming if he is one). But I do say the TLs are taking a little too long than usual, but fortunately I managed to busy myself with playing video games, and no they are not those AAA games, or those online mmorpg/moba rubbish for that matter.

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Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on December 24, 2018, 09:09:25 PM
Lol I hope they're not an e [spoiler]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tuzhBJtBJCE[/spoiler] -celeb either. Their channel can't get too popular or the Tenchi vids get taken down  :china:

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 25, 2018, 09:40:12 PM
im unable to work on the project anymore at this time. so... translation projects done on my end for now
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on December 26, 2018, 01:00:43 AM
That's totally fine Fap, how far did you get?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 26, 2018, 01:40:47 PM
i finished true tenchi 1-3
ova novel 4
1-11
parts of 12 and 13
14-15
16 summarised
i crapped out on 17 there was alooooot i just could not summerise at all due to how importan t it was
paradise war chapter 1
i actually have part of the last chapter of paradise war done. and part of the next chapter of 11 done..

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 08, 2019, 04:12:41 PM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/paradise-war-final-episode-part-1.html
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on February 11, 2019, 06:47:03 PM
Wow good job! 
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Ricin on February 11, 2019, 08:08:00 PM
I haven't read any paradise war but this set up makes me think that it would be an interesting show if it was ever made.

Kajashima has a few notes in his repertoire but when he plays them they are masterful
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 01, 2019, 09:51:45 PM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2019/03/the-final-chapter-of-paradise-war-is.html

here you go

the entire final chapter is done
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on March 09, 2019, 01:30:59 AM
 :sus: Thank you m8  :fuck:
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 23, 2019, 10:05:46 PM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2019/05/gxp-12-chapter-3.html
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Y_Anthony_Who on May 24, 2019, 04:18:34 AM
EFF EFFERSON?!? Who are you and what have you done with my friend, Fap!?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on May 24, 2019, 07:46:06 PM
Quote from: Y_Anthony_Who on May 24, 2019, 04:18:34 AM
EFF EFFERSON?!? Who are you and what have you done with my friend, Fap!?
i never intended to register under fap_fapperson ... and its a bit professionaly embarrasing knowing my translations are that name.it auto selected a name from an old throw away account when i registered and i hit submit before i could fix it... i asked soviet to change it
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on June 06, 2019, 05:54:49 PM
Do you have an idea where all this ties in to the OVA / GXP / Geminar arc? Reading it, I'm under the impression that some of the [spoiler]girls featured are easily the next generation of Masaki kiddos[/spoiler]
thanks Eff.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 07, 2019, 06:13:23 PM
Quote from: WaitoKon on June 06, 2019, 05:54:49 PM
Do you have an idea where all this ties in to the OVA / GXP / Geminar arc? Reading it, I'm under the impression that some of the [spoiler]girls featured are easily the next generation of Masaki kiddos[/spoiler]
thanks Eff.

? what do you mean?

gxp 4 is where ova 4 and gxp synch up. after that  it goes past the ovas and before gxp and then paradise war is post ova 5
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on June 13, 2019, 01:39:25 PM
Of course, I mean the assortment of characters in Paradise War, are they related to the Masaki or Yamada families?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Ricin on June 13, 2019, 05:43:12 PM
No. Each of the girls is related to a space faction or Earth:

Dird Shank - Shank Guild
Palty Jurai - Jurai
Alea Balta - Balta Guild
Apuesa DaRuma - DaRuma Guild
Miron Pham - Earth

The only connection they have to Tenchi or Seina is that Seina runs the Banjo Island Proxy War and Miron has worked with Washu.

That is it.

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 16, 2019, 07:13:39 PM
Quote from: Ricin on June 13, 2019, 05:43:12 PM
No. Each of the girls is related to a space faction or Earth:

Dird Shank - Shank Guild
Palty Jurai - Jurai
Alea Balta - Balta Guild
Apuesa DaRuma - DaRuma Guild
Miron Pham - Earth

The only connection they have to Tenchi or Seina is that Seina runs the Banjo Island Proxy War and Miron has worked with Washu.

That is it.

yup
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 17, 2019, 08:07:39 PM
update: Gxp 1 and two have been proofread  split into chapters and revised! no more shit teir spelling and grammer mistakes (give or take capitilization)
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2019/06/gxp-1-index.html
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2019/06/gxp-2-index.html
for now though they are stripped of images.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Ricin on June 17, 2019, 10:41:54 PM
I tried reading Chapter 2 the other day and the link did not work.

Also please feel free to use the images I have had translated and edited.

I will send them to you as they get done
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 18, 2019, 12:26:11 AM
Quote from: Ricin on June 17, 2019, 10:41:54 PM
I tried reading Chapter 2 the other day and the link did not work.

Also please feel free to use the images I have had translated and edited.

I will send them to you as they get done

https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2019/06/gxp-1-chapter-2.html
thanks i fixed it

right now im working on them on a tablet laptop that i really have alot of trouble using thats why i havent added the pics back in but also im thinking of leaving them out for copyright reasons ill add in the translated ones though once i get some free time i just want to revise the grammer first and re read the story i have forgotten most of whats going on
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on July 18, 2019, 01:21:47 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2019/07/gxp-3-index.html gxp 3 with near perfect grammer and flow is now done it was an easy one :/ i'm not looking forward to gxp 6 and on i know i really rushed those but thats why im fixing it
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on July 18, 2019, 08:47:32 AM
Thank you for helping out.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on July 19, 2019, 09:05:56 PM
This is really huge EFF, I hope something comes of it. Seven Seas, SEVEN SEAS you beautiful Canadians (or uh... Commonwealth) peons, throw off the shackles of capitalism and embrace Cabbit-ism. Make me throw away cold hard papers ya hear?  :spends:  :canada:
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on July 20, 2019, 02:01:04 AM
Quote from: WaitoKon on July 19, 2019, 09:05:56 PM
This is really huge EFF, I hope something comes of it. Seven Seas, SEVEN SEAS you beautiful Canadians (or uh... Commonwealth) peons, throw off the shackles of capitalism and embrace Cabbit-ism. Make me throw away cold hard papers ya hear?  :spends:  :canada:

its not that big but its a natural step to me finishing the translation... i've definatly lost my place in the story and that really is  a big part what stopped me translating but also what i've done needs to be made more readable haha
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on July 20, 2019, 02:58:15 PM
If this lands on another page, I'm responding to Eff's last post about readability. What was the issue with the GXP novels readability wise? I seem to recall Kaj just has a hard time writing in the literature style?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on July 20, 2019, 05:13:32 PM
Quote from: WaitoKon on July 20, 2019, 02:58:15 PM
If this lands on another page, I'm responding to Eff's last post about readability. What was the issue with the GXP novels readability wise? I seem to recall Kaj just has a hard time writing in the literature style?


i translated the first three novels parially in 3rd person voice i.e x told z y she was feeling very q. instead of normally i.e "im feeling very blah today" said blip dipperson.

so i fixed alot of that except where i did it to sumerize otherwise lengthy and pointless throw away sections like the seto scouts gossiping and bickering abkutthe technicalities of vouyerism for 10 pages as they follow seina...


other then  that ive fixed the spelling and grammer errors and any double lines where i translated the line twice and didint notice. or where i thought i corrected the sentance but left in a stray word.... theres alot of translation based processing artifacts in there that needed to be removed. i also fixed the spacing issues.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on July 28, 2019, 08:48:55 PM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2019/07/gxp-4-index.html

GXP 4 has now been fully cleaned up
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on July 30, 2019, 09:27:54 PM
Thank you for doing this, I hope more fans take notice of the plot points in the GXP books while we get ready for OVA V.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Gw6365 on September 11, 2019, 08:29:32 AM
Just wanted to let you know that your translation of the gxp novel are very much appreciated. The way you set up the volumes 1-4 was very much appreciated. Thanks
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: AstroNerdBoy on September 12, 2019, 10:51:33 PM
Quote from: Eff Efferson on June 07, 2019, 06:13:23 PM

gxp 4 is where ova 4 and gxp synch up. after that  it goes past the ovas and before gxp and then paradise war is post ova 5

Interesting. So OVA 4 happens around the 4th GXP novel? Roughly where does that correlate with the GXP anime (if at all)?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Ricin on September 13, 2019, 01:01:26 AM
GXP episode 1 takes place during or slightly after OVA 3 episode 4 (operation Lovey Dovey).

By the time of Rea/Lea's wedding we are talking about episode 14-16.

On Eff's translations of the novels he lines up each novel to episodes of the anime.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 15, 2019, 05:53:38 PM
 after the end of episode 8 when he gets his first round of bioenhancement and amanes parents stop by. in the novels miki ships off to work in the decoy division and is murded by shank then shank tries to murder kiriko to get at seina but falls in love with her as she drips covered in blood in her psychotic protect seina mode.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 15, 2019, 05:57:43 PM
theres  basicly an entire cut episode there before theres a timeskip and it aligns with what there talking about in ova 4 about getting widows astral from jurai we even see the ova 3 box art moment of washu with fuku enbedded in her shoulder in the novels implying the time skip of 3 months takes starts off immediatly after nobu's wedding.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on September 16, 2019, 05:24:39 PM
I agree. Thanks for helping the community so much Eff.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 22, 2019, 02:09:37 PM
GXP 5 is fixed.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on September 22, 2019, 03:41:25 PM
Yo Eff, does this time skip of 3 months leave room for some other stuff to happen in the OVA / GXP canon but away from the immediate Masaki village? I wonder if there are other plot arcs that have yet to be addressed and concurrent with OVA 4.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 22, 2019, 09:41:49 PM
Quote from: WaitoKon on September 22, 2019, 03:41:25 PM
Yo Eff, does this time skip of 3 months leave room for some other stuff to happen in the OVA / GXP canon but away from the immediate Masaki village? I wonder if there are other plot arcs that have yet to be addressed and concurrent with OVA 4.

the timeskip of 3 months is the time betwwen ova 3 and 4.

i mean... after novel 5 alot of stuff happens with the tenchi house. washu births fuku, setos memories as naja are unsupressed, ryo visits jurai on a good will mission and picks up neiju to save her from melmas. the seed from the ship shot down in the washu novel is retrieved.
neiju arrives on earth before seina for some reason... tenchi starts getting weird powers, tarrant attacked earth to get seinas parents, thats all happening really close to the end of ova 4
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 22, 2019, 09:54:54 PM
in contrast mihoshi getting fixed, airi reconsiling with yosho and ayeka forgiving her, washu sorting things out about her son, ryoko getting tenchi's haori (most likely that was when declared his choice for head wife) are all events happening during another time period (theres a skip once the good luck fleet starts up)  that seems to imply we've lost about an ova's worth of material a good ova at that.. but like... we know what happens so cant complain too much ... no wait i can. I WANT TO SEE HOW SHE GOT THE HAORI KAJISHIMA! YOU CANT SHOW US 4 different weddings and not show us tenchis AAAAAAAAA
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on September 24, 2019, 02:54:47 AM
Quote from: Eff Efferson on September 22, 2019, 09:54:54 PM
I WANT TO SEE HOW SHE GOT THE HAORI KAJISHIMA! YOU CANT SHOW US 4 different weddings and not show us tenchis AAAAAAAAA

Yes, I too want to feel the breeze and bluster of that affair. Like the original show, a very fasten-your-seatbelts vibe. GXP almost had that. Nevertheless, I agree it would be better to see the material you mentioned revisited, perhaps in a pre-OVA V special.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 03, 2019, 06:49:29 PM
GXP 1-8 are now fixed for grammar, only a few more to fix up till I'm able to finish up the series
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on December 04, 2019, 11:50:48 PM
Thanks for helping out.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on December 09, 2019, 12:05:34 PM
You the best Eff! This give you time to dabble with the video novel idea?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 13, 2019, 05:18:07 AM
Quote from: WaitoKon on December 09, 2019, 12:05:34 PM
You the best Eff! This give you time to dabble with the video novel idea?
I might finish it up some day i personally thought the formst helped a lot and have it a nice feel but boy was it hard to improvise. gxp has a real lack of shots that are apropriate for that part of the story expecially since ermas in ryokos place and there was a ton of scenes that were way different.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 13, 2019, 05:20:33 AM
right now im grammer fixing 9 and im working on 12 again thats my top priority this month i wrote two books last month of my own on compairitive mythology and self published them to amazon... so Ive mostly just been dicking around with my hobbies i really have way to much free time on my hands again i need to find another job.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Dr.Soviet on December 13, 2019, 08:13:57 PM
Quote from: Eff Efferson on December 13, 2019, 05:20:33 AM
right now im grammer fixing 9 and im working on 12 again thats my top priority this month i wrote two books last month of my own on compairitive mythology and self published them to amazon... so Ive mostly just been dicking around with my hobbies i really have way to much free time on my hands again i need to find another job.

Gonna link them books or wut
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 13, 2019, 09:18:20 PM
Quote from: Dr.Soviet on December 13, 2019, 08:13:57 PM
Quote from: Eff Efferson on December 13, 2019, 05:20:33 AM
right now im grammer fixing 9 and im working on 12 again thats my top priority this month i wrote two books last month of my own on compairitive mythology and self published them to amazon... so Ive mostly just been dicking around with my hobbies i really have way to much free time on my hands again i need to find another job.

Gonna link them books or wut
https://www.amazon.com/dp/1708312579?ref_=pe_3052080_397514860

i want to push an update to the book honestly. i need to add in a section on chiron a note on the function of the ring an rods as scales and how osirus hat with his horns resemble the goat fish.

if you like annunaki studies or mythology youll like my book and it will paint it in a totaly different light.


https://www.amazon.com/Stories-That-Became-Genesis-Other/dp/1710126744/ref=mp_s_a_1_2?keywords=Samuel+Madisico&qid=1576289789&s=books&sr=1-2

this one is a good book to read if u wanna be woke as fuck

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on December 15, 2019, 03:19:16 PM
Nice Eff, I wonder if in the same book category (ancient conspiracies / occult) you could do a book on symbolic motifs in Bride of Frankenstein? That movie changed the horror genre for good.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 15, 2019, 04:03:16 PM
frankenstein it self was a revolutionary book tbh and no one has ever adapted it right...

mary shelly and her monether mary wolfstonecraft are iconic and theres no doubt in my mind that wolfstonecraftian feminism is at the core of all of kajishimas series.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 20, 2019, 03:15:37 AM
new lore from the new chapters i went through for those to lazy to read: Really the reason azusa was brought to jurai is because seto refused to become emporess.

Seiryo was only sent out as ayeka's fiance to face tenchi cause azusa wanted to start tenchi off with an easy candidate, he had others he preferred over seiryo.

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 22, 2019, 03:13:19 PM
GXP 12 is done all that remains is 13 16 and 17
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 24, 2019, 07:32:49 AM
GXP 9 is grammar revised, At this rate the entire series will be done and in good english by the first episode of OVA 5
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Dr.Soviet on December 24, 2019, 09:42:29 AM
Quote from: Eff Efferson on December 24, 2019, 07:32:49 AM
GXP 9 is grammar revised, At this rate the entire series will be done and in good english by the first episode of OVA 5

Thank you so much.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: WaitoKon on December 24, 2019, 08:41:53 PM
Has your ability to read / write English and Japanese gone through the roof?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 25, 2019, 05:24:49 AM
Quote from: WaitoKon on December 24, 2019, 08:41:53 PM
Has your ability to read / write English and Japanese gone through the roof?

thetranslation are wonky on their first publish because i never proofread them besides spell well enough. i just spell check . because i work from google translated sentances i do a lot of rearanging and so doubles get lefting and so doubles get left. like that <- or words ommitted (or words get ommitted) or autocorrect miscorrects a words.( and i have no direct contect for it untill i go back and re read)
and seina to the amane the taco she buys
or i accidently skip a line^.

so yes its an improvement i also took out alot of my less then nessesary coments and reformatted the pictures to use ricins translated ones
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on December 29, 2019, 09:32:31 AM
Thank you very much for helping out.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on December 30, 2019, 07:26:11 PM
GXP 10 is now grammer fixed.

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 02, 2020, 11:54:57 PM
gxp11 is fixed. boy was that one a mess... now i just have to fix up 12 and finishe 13 and then fix it and 14 up and The entire first arc will be translated and translated well.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 19, 2020, 11:22:44 AM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2019/12/gxp-13-index.html

The first 14 novels are translated and proofread so they dont read like garbled shit anymore. it took 3 years but i did it.

Anyone who doesnt want to read 13 but wants to know the diffrences can read the summary in the library section of the forum I will be slowly cranking out summaires of the novels there.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Ricin on January 21, 2020, 01:20:12 AM
I was re-reading some of the novels and ... Technically the only girl he is married to is Acha.

They had a formal wedding ceremony in Galactic Space that made it to an exchange of vows.

Kiriko's quartet never made it that far. As of right now in the novels the Renza girls never consummated vows either.

Tenchi-verse is weird some times.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 21, 2020, 05:05:26 AM
Quote from: Ricin on January 21, 2020, 01:20:12 AM
I was re-reading some of the novels and ... Technically the only girl he is married to is Acha.

They had a formal wedding ceremony in Galactic Space that made it to an exchange of vows.

Kiriko's quartet never made it that far. As of right now in the novels the Renza girls never consummated vows either.

Tenchi-verse is weird some times.

haha i was just going over that part to fix it. you're right hahaha. and it's only gonna get weirder and weirder. kajishimas quickly entering seina and tenchi as sex having adults territory. I hope that if GXP ends that the story picks up somehow else.
There's no way that seina doesn't end up king of the galaxy lol  we already know he ends up a king of gyokuren's kingdom and he owns the original earth's solar system. he has zinv and the kamidake and his wife kiriko has a 2nd gen and the wormwood wolf.
Like... there's no way that nothing interesting happens to him after the renza situation and paradise war.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Y_Anthony_Who on January 22, 2020, 12:17:34 AM
I hope to get to re-reading these in the near future. In order this time!

When you only had machine-translations I would read them out-loud when my roommates were around to drive them insane. Hehehe.

It was very disorienting, but so much better than nothing at all. I really value your continued work. Many bundles of thanks!
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on January 22, 2020, 12:03:24 PM
Thanks a lot for all of your work. You are awesome.

Is there a zip or rar file containing all of the new versions?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 22, 2020, 02:51:03 PM
Quote from: antvasima on January 22, 2020, 12:03:24 PM
Thanks a lot for all of your work. You are awesome.

Is there a zip or rar file containing all of the new versions?

not just yet. I am going to finish revising 15 and then release 16 and then I'll release a zip
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on January 24, 2020, 03:36:49 AM
Okay. Thank you very much for helping out.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 24, 2020, 06:14:34 PM
15 is done, i went and expanded one of the chapters that I left mostly untranslated, chapters 1-3 of 16 are done, I'm happily working on chapter 4 which is easily one of the best chapters in the series. Cant wait to publish it.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 26, 2020, 04:42:32 AM
The summary of the tenchiverse up to the start of the great prehistoric cililization is done,

I am working on gxp 17 but I have to be honest guys... this machine translates like crap and I'm going to have to do alot of work to only sorta guess whats going on... theres so much i have to cut out just because i cant decifer what exactly is being said even when i disect it word for word.... i feel like kajishimas editors went to sleep this ark...

18 is almost just as huge a mess but i read though and decifered alof of the first couple of chapters last time i went through it... i'll see what i can do...

I want to give up though...

At the end of the day I hope you all don't hate me if I just give you a detailed summary of what i can understand happening in each paragraph like i do for the summaries and call it a day.

I really... really am disliking the renza ark. it has its moments but its super hard to read for me and super annoying in parts.

btw my initial report that clay was a tsundere for washu seems to be wrong rather naja seems to be rather nostalgic about tasing clay and tells herself not to get tsundere with him because even though she misses him he genuinely seems to not want anything to do with the two of them and she doesn't want to go making an enemy out of him again.

the translators all gobedygook up this book and specificly this part of the chapter to imply that its clay being asked if he wants to fix things with washu / still has a thing for washu and that he was upset that washu chose naja.... but once you run it through word by word it seems like this is just machine translation errors. or perhaps my dictionary isn't as versitile as i think it is and it's both but honestly i don't think it is i couldnt find any homophones like i did in the washu novel nor hints of subtext other then the use of a word that means both revenge and start thigns over.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 30, 2020, 09:20:00 AM
First half of 16 done and the last chapter
first 3 chapters are a bore but the girls fight with renza is a work of art haha.

I cant wait to do the next few chapters, they get scared try to assasinate kiriko and she beats the shit out of them all.

Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Ricin on January 30, 2020, 10:39:17 AM
Is book 18 out?

If I had known I would have tried to see about getting the images translated
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 31, 2020, 03:26:03 AM
Quote from: Ricin on January 30, 2020, 10:39:17 AM
Is book 18 out?

If I had known I would have tried to see about getting the images translated
no 18 is still not out. thank fucking god. I need a break after 17 and im taking it. I deserve it lol
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 11, 2020, 06:20:38 PM
yeety yeet yeet gxp 16 is done... its all done.... when are yall gonna buy me a throne and pronounce me king already?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: antvasima on February 12, 2020, 05:07:24 AM
Thanks a lot for helping out.
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 13, 2020, 12:00:49 PM
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/11/gxp-17-chapter-1-machine.html
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: blackwhite256 on March 04, 2020, 09:45:41 PM
Looks like there's an updated novel translation package on Nyaa. Going to get it now.

Thanks Ricin!  :bravo:
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Ricin on March 05, 2020, 11:06:06 AM
Don't Forget to thank the guy that did the legwork on translating the damn thing. I just posted it.

You're the Best Eff!
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: blackwhite256 on March 05, 2020, 11:38:57 PM
Quote from: Ricin on March 05, 2020, 11:06:06 AM
Don't Forget to thank the guy that did the legwork on translating the damn thing. I just posted it.

You're the Best Eff!

Oh welp, I totally forgot about that.  :blush:
I'll enjoy re-reading the novel while waiting for new OVA to be translated.

Thanks to Efferson for your all hardwork!  :bravo:
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Vision on March 17, 2020, 03:03:00 PM
Thanks for the translation. Anybody have a PDF or EPUB version of the translations?
Title: Re: GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 17, 2020, 03:27:48 PM
heh. no... I did those last quarter before I fixed up the grammer and finished the series and I just wasn't feeling up to doing it this time. If you want to make epub versions try dumping them into calibre and hitting convert cause that's literaly all I would do.