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Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« on: March 24, 2014, 08:34:41 AM »
 

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What the title says. A bit of an explanation for those of you who have read my other stories (what few of you have)- this story is something of a revision and/or expansion of my earlier story "Sasami's Heart". It is also a direct follow up to my OAV 3 story

Anyway, discuss away.
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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #1 on: March 24, 2014, 10:34:35 AM »
 

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I prefer the other version so far.  :staredog:
 

Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2014, 08:43:45 PM »
 

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I wish there was a garbage disposal for literature because then I'd knew where to put your stories.  Oh wait, it's called the shredder!  And that's where I put them after print them out and edit them with red ink.  I mean bathe them in some small animal's blood.  Maybe Gaston's.

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« Reply #3 on: March 28, 2014, 09:14:46 PM »
 

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I also have to ask how many more times you're going to make Tenchi into a loser?
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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #4 on: April 01, 2014, 04:24:05 AM »
 

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Mr Rogers read this fic and comments:


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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #5 on: April 10, 2014, 07:56:08 AM »
 

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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #6 on: April 22, 2014, 06:04:44 AM »
 

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If I said this is the worst garbage I have ever read, I think it would be an understatement of your achievement.




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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #7 on: April 22, 2014, 10:19:56 AM »
 

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Maybe you should stop reading it Jibril? Did you ever try out my story? I don't remember.
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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #8 on: April 23, 2014, 06:38:35 AM »
 

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Maybe you should stop reading it Jibril?

I want too but Ziggy makes me;.;  I can't count the tears I cried enduring this mental torture.
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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #9 on: April 23, 2014, 07:05:34 AM »
 

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Okay. As long as you're still friends. It doesn't seem to be my cup of tea either. I have turned mad from reading plenty of other stories myself though, so maybe I'm a hypocrite? For example, I gave a scathing review to "The Key To A Successful Interview".
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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #10 on: April 25, 2014, 08:35:19 PM »
 

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Okay. As long as you're still friends.

Not really.  For me, a friendship needs to share some baseline values and he and I do not.
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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #11 on: April 30, 2014, 09:22:56 AM »
 

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Reading more of this story....

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Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #13 on: December 31, 2014, 05:45:06 AM »
 

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Yup, I've decided to begin a complete re-write of this story, and I've just posted the new version of the prologue.
 

Re: Discuss The Ouroboros Saga
« Reply #14 on: April 16, 2015, 01:33:47 AM »
 

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So begins the next installment of the Saga. This one is a bit unusual, as it is a loose remake of an existing story. This installment is heavily inspired by the Forgotten Realms novel "Son of Thunder" by Murray J.D. Leeder. The reason this fic draws so much inspiration from that novel is because when I discovered and read the novel, I noted some striking similarities between story elements in that book and some things I wanted to do in an Ouroboros story of my own. So, I figured I might as well just write a sort of loose remake of that book since it was so similar to what I wanted to do anyway.