GXP 16 and 17 pictures and quick read though summaries

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August 27, 2018, 12:20:41 AM Last Edit: September 02, 2018, 12:00:53 AM by Fap_fapperson
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summaries coming soon please check back

I tweaked my name translation list a bit so these translations came out very very smooth and this is a small book with tiny chapters...

update 1:
http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/08/gxp-16-chapter-1-summary.html

update 2:

https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/09/gxp-16-chapter-2.html

chapter two was "full translated" the "best" i could because ITS ONE HUGE INFODUMP UGH KAJISHIMA WHY

it sorta ties issekai to GXP and also might explain a lot about the seed project assuming the magiplant is the LITERAL seed project. 

so .... Tadah! I accidentally summary translated  the first of 10 chapters in under 30 minutes.

also found a part where washu gives kiriko the mech she made for kenshi... she did it before she even got turned down ahahaah

i found a part that says something like
"this Sacred Mech was originally built for Kenshi ?"
"Yes, Rea refused ... as a result i made it some weird specifications. the people summoned to that world had some weird preferences... this is the suit you have to wear to pilot it"
"No way, .... it's sticky too?" kiriko is really mad
"DO I HAVE TO GET NAKED AND WEAR THIS SKIMPY THING TO PILOT IT!?"
"well yeah..."
"WAIT WERE YOU GOING TO MAKE KENSHI WEAR THIS SKIMPY THING TO PILOT IT?!" "uh..." "WERE YOU?" chibi washu: *poofs*
Never change tenchi muyo...



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I have no objections.
"Growing up leads to growing old and then to dying,and dying to me don't sound like all that much fun."

ok... so yall know i made sure about this before i posted about this but get this... Dr. clay has a [spoiler]bdsm style contracted live in sex slave named and he's living in a jungle and she arranged an orgy of the jungles native peoples for him to come home to... [/spoiler]wtf am i reading...

[spoiler]
"I was waiting, Dr. Clay-sama"
A collar on a black fur bikini, a brunette's short bob, a beautiful girl with eyes praised boldly and greeted the clay.
"It's a hard work, Lazana"
It is not words of labor, but hatred.
She is an exclusive companion for clay, one person can be attached whenever using 'special facilities' here. During the contract with here, we care for both public and private, and of course the party at night falls into that category, but Clay refused it. However, as it is a rule that can always be attached to the side, he nominated a calm woman who did not get in the way. It is by no means clay's hobby.
(Woman is troublesome)[/spoiler]
[spoiler]There, in the middle stage, half-naked men and women as primitive dancing, around them a few companions, those with more than ten people left it as the head of the primitive tribe are doing. Some of those who touched the breasts of the companion and those who were trying to hold hands in the crotch were also seen, but in principle such acts are banned in principle, they are brought to the companions to another place soon. Of course, what actions are to be done in the place ahead is inevitable.
"Hun!"
Clay dislikes it [/spoiler]
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I have no objections.
"Growing up leads to growing old and then to dying,and dying to me don't sound like all that much fun."

MAGIC WAS CREATED BY THE NATURALISTS AFTER THE BIOROID WAR!!!!! IT WAS THE SPACE AMISH!

A power that coexists with nature? More ancient than the Great Prehistoric Civilization? Mysteriously degrades advanced technology? SUSPECTED BY THE CHARACTERS TO HAVE BEEN DESIGNED WITH A PURPOSE!????

It's so obvious! Was Kajishima Masaki planning a fantasy segment this whole time!? THIS WHOLE TIME!!!!!????

August 28, 2018, 03:24:00 PM #5 Last Edit: August 28, 2018, 03:52:42 PM by Fap_fapperson
Quote from: Y_Anthony_Who on August 28, 2018, 12:15:40 PM
MAGIC WAS CREATED BY THE NATURALISTS AFTER THE BIOROID WAR!!!!! IT WAS THE SPACE AMISH!

A power that coexists with nature? More ancient than the Great Prehistoric Civilization? Mysteriously degrades advanced technology? SUSPECTED BY THE CHARACTERS TO HAVE BEEN DESIGNED WITH A PURPOSE!????

It's so obvious! Was Kajishima Masaki planning a fantasy segment this whole time!? THIS WHOLE TIME!!!!!????

Space amish... hi... I'm dying... if anyone wants to know what killed me... it was this sentance.


also Wow I love this theory. its definitely artificial.

some spoilers from reading ahead... they call eternal magic... mana. but external... ENA.
and internal magic crystalizes in the magic organs into liquid crystals cough cough... and for the most part there sold for money for a high price so the rich who have most of them. oh hey look its brain crystals.... with another name... and ahou...

and i think later its even said that theres a reason it degrades science stuff and normally it wouldn't do that.

their magic is as far as i can tell just Ahou tech except it doesn't work on the whole circling word rings and wife head in a jar principle.
zinv's seed is also sealed in magic crystals ... which is why they had no idea what it was covered in.
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This is starting to feel like to Bioshock infinite nonsense.

Jerimiah Fink, I mean the Renza Federation, looking into another dimension and coping their tech. I want to see how it plays out of course but because it took so long to get there it seems like others did it first.

in typical kajishima has 0 limits on what he can write way, this second chapter is a fancy lore Q and A disguised a a conversation where seina only gets one liner questions out to break up the /HUGES ASS 30 pages of run on monologue, uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh why ... WHY.... who let him do this here, this renza ark is bogged down by this.... and the japanise complain about it and I know exactly why.... this is the second chapter and  its the same as the first seina just took a shit and thats literaly the only thing separating the two chapter same setting... same fucking characters doing the same thing they did in chapter 1... but its labeled chapter 2... because if it wasnt no one would put up with a 70 page backstory monologue...

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I'm actually really interested in the details of the lore... I want to pitch a Tenchi D&D game to my friends with it. Harhar!

Also I didn't mention it earlier but I love that Washu gave Kiriko the robot she made for Kenshi that was just sitting around. And the skimpy outfit she made for Kenshi, just hanging up on Kiriko, the whole thing is hilarious!

Quote from: Y_Anthony_Who on August 29, 2018, 07:10:27 PM
I'm actually really interested in the details of the lore... I want to pitch a Tenchi D&D game to my friends with it. Harhar!

Also I didn't mention it earlier but I love that Washu gave Kiriko the robot she made for Kenshi that was just sitting around. And the skimpy outfit she made for Kenshi, just hanging up on Kiriko, the whole thing is hilarious!

i love that she pitched the idea to rea... after making it
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chapter two is done...

I couldn't summerize for reasons you will see if you read it... its an info dumpfest. i cut it down as much as i could... also not sure how accurate it came out...

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ok third chapter is more of the same shit but i will summerize it here so yall dont even have to worry...

barigaru gave up 30% of the money reaped from hunting that chimera and that is the debt in exchange for the others  letting him take seina back home. seina's debt is that.

it just goes into more tecnicalities of hunting and how theres a pharmacy guild and a hunters guild but the lady who runs the pharmacy guild is a pervert like airi.

chapter ends with seina being greeted by someone coming in who looks exactly like him.

as for the rest of what's said... meh its just about weapons and how hunting rewards go.


....

chapter 4

the next chapter is the trial of the girls, kiriko gets super pissed off, but miki takes the spot light getting everyone to shut the hell up and then argues that himik attacked first and should be treated as a pilot so the battle should be treated as a combat against a pirate who wasn't following the rules, she also argues that himic and zinv have their own minds and any actions they undertook where out of their hands and effectivly acts of gods. someone counters her with they aren't gods to which she counters with basicly "ok jackass then you go and try to reproduce those energy readings that were seen out there oh what you cant that's because it was literal gods fighting. and argues that things were literaly evaporating from the energy of that fight 

like... yes ... go miki ahahaha she verbally rips these people a new asshole and the text is all like she was murdered by tarrant and then spent her entire time being dead getting revenge on him she was better prepaired to take on these jerks then any of the other girls.

thank you kajishima this is a good chapter... write more of these.

anyways... the people she is facing is like do you think that were just going to forgive your act of violence because you made a good argument and she is like... yeah bitch. that's why im up here giving you whats for cause u aint layin a finger on me or the kamidake...

"what do you think you can do against us with such a small ship"
and she is like suprise mother fuckers I can be in the next galaxy over in 5 minits if i want to. but most importantly i can kick your ass cause this is ryo-ohki's sister ship. I WILL FUCKING RECK U. YOU THINK JURAI GOT THERE ASS KICKED? OOOOOOOO................ YOU DONT EVEN KNOW


and there like "little girl are you declaring war?"
and miki is like

"I don't mind going to war with you not one bit!"

and kiriko is all freaked out like.... w-w-wait a minit!

"you people are stupid, and poor, and I can easily adapt to anything you can throw at me"

they challenge her to a dual and she accepts  kiriko finds out there are other mechanoids besides zinv and freaks out but miki already knew... but clearly they are not at all actually equiped or trained for such a fight

"ok so one last time so were clear, The fundemental problem here is the kamidake's intrusion into renza airspace and it fighting with one of himiks escort nights., but that is a mistake on your side to begin with. WE DEMAND YOU APPOLOGIZE TO US AND HOLD HIMIK UP TO THESE CHARGES INSTEAD. not only that the kamidake is a power add on to ZINV an accessory for it. so the knights attacking us before we merged with zinv is and act of defilement of the proper procedures for battle."
<3 u miki u get best waifu points today.

"I know you are new to this region but there are procedures to decaring such addons before hand.

"IT WAS A SUPRISE EMERGENGY BATTLE! THEY HAD HOSTAGES! from both renza and the galaxy federation. We had no choice but to respond to their request for battle without any advance preperation! do you want to set that as an allowable thing to do?
miki smiled triumphantly.

"and there's no use trying to dispute the facts, that old demon hag over there had the whole thing on camera."

she glares at makihi
"........ do you want an apology?"
"............... "
"What i want is full fredom of action in renza and diplomatic privleges, plus a sufficent stipend for our services, in cash. and if we loose I will reveal the interior of the kamidake to you all, only aboard racepshi though i will not allow a breakdown survey but the amount of technology you can reap that way should be mor ethen enough"

by the way earlier kiriko got so mad she smashed the table they were sat at in court... i forgot that part.


clay watches this from a chare in the dock that stores and repairs himik and cacles. uhuhuhu that girl is the same as ever."

"do you know eachother a a man asks he wears a black robe like a monk and keeps his face covered,

"we did a little deal together a while back."

I'm going to save the rest of this for an actual translation though... but DAMN THIS WAS A GOOD CHAPTER AFTER 3 bullshit ones



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ok but before i do that. the guy at himics dock insults clay saying wqshu could do  a better job and clay insults him back and shadow dude tries to pull put q knife and stab clay to death but clay freeses him and tells him basicly fuk u ill go help seina it will probably pay more anyways and them leaves the dude frozen for 5 hours while he finishes his work on himik. then it leads to him gating out to that jungle orgy scene and lazana kuisu panta visits him and it turns out clay wqs a tsundere the whole time. he is mad that washu got with naja instead of him( it seems like he may have actually been with washu at one point i bet if she did it was to con him haha.)  also that pic of the bunny girls is kuisu and lizanna.
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chapter 6 first impressions
so miki challenged them to a dual and washu sent the seikishi she made for kenshi that rea said no to.

the new racepshi girl makihis 6th daughter is a wannabe reporter
she isnt a very good dancer. she comes to get a scoop on the girls. they violently object at first
the scene cuts back to dr clay whos sex kitten lazana is watching the broadcast with kiriko. its short and cuts back to kiriko opening the box

so washu jas he rown mark apearently that appears both on the kamidake and this seikishi.
makihis daughter hounds kiriko to allow jer to broadcast whats inside the giant crystal in the giant box that was delivered thry dont know its a seikishi yet.  she doesnt take no for an answer again kiriko gets pysicaly violent with her and beats her up but she wont quit kiriko explains it might be something classified or indecent  and then a laughing voice is heard and out from the mark pops chibi washu. eho grants her permission to see whats inside...

i think this says ryo ohki was recently on a childs program...
so she kinda wanted in on the media sensation bandwagon hence she is a cute chibi to give a good impression to kids...or to seem like a kids show character i dunno.

its ok thr manufacturer has given permission. plese show everyone the galaxy federstions greatrst armored knight! and call me petit washu in this form!

well its a large biped mech they would call it an armored knight here but really its a sacred mechalord over there"

washu jokes that since its basicly a god it needs a pretty girl to be sacrificed to awaken it.
kiriko ends up getting violent with petit washu and her dumb requests and shakes her and eventually lets go.
"fine but first the shrine maiden will have to put on the ceremonial dress to pilot it!"

right first youll need the magic girl wand

kiriko smacks her with it.

fine fine i made a pendant version if thats too immature for you.

the pendant glows when she takes it she does a magic girl transformation im not even fucking kidding... it forms nothing but a skin tight bikini on her. kiriko destroys the camera probe and crushes the pendant petit washu dissapears in a poof.

"that was a rental probe!" they unleash a new one

"ok were ready again come on kiriko please change into the outfit for our audience ouch ouch ouch ouch ouch... kiriko that hurts."
she attacks makihis daughter again

it cuts to maito saying his sister should become a comedian instead to makihi and makihi looks pissed off at the broadcast.
" kiriko calm down itsnesseasry to wear it to move it its not just a prank petit washu poofs back in

why?!

well i mad eit for kenshi and then rea said no... but i made it to the specifications of the standards over there there were some weird earthlings who got summoned there who brought over some strange customs... and well ryo ohki was worried about him so i added alot of overkill things... and well i had no time to rebuild it from scratch. ... beleive it or not thats the formal pioloting suit.

no way it was so sticky do ir eally have to wear such a revealing suit

well yes thats what i said isnt it

wait was kenshi going to have to ear that thing!

eh....


wqshu momentarily hesistated to say anthing

ill ask again  did you intend to make kenshi wear that?
its just ordinary clothes there.
petit washu poofed again and appeared somewhere else

ok then lets start the boarding ceremony!"
oh i know ill do a dance
makihis daughter does a really tacky dance to a reallu tacku song

kiriko boils with rage

what the hell kind of weird dance is that!
she distracts them with it and eventualy brings up mayas dance with seina to them and kiriko gets madder and they bring up that they dont want to marry seina only have a child of his. while this is going on the crystal starts to disolve
this is going to be a bitch to translate... she is doing like super ethnic japanise song dances.. like.. im just imaging the taiko drums and iyoooooooooouuuuuu screams and weird poses lol.
a groaning voice  calls out as the seikishi emerges

mother its an egg maito says to mahiki in her home as theyw watch it.

an egg? ...miki says looking at it
yup thats an egg
i dont see what else that could be.
washu does some cutesy introduction likeits an egg what laid it. whats inside lets find out!


are you going to hit it or are you afraid tenticles will come out?
oo that sounds fun... hey wait your joking about the tenticles right

yes.... thats right

kiriko gets mad again

washu what is it what is it tell me already this joke has gone on long enough.

its not an egg its called  a cocoon over there
the seikishi is dormant inside
touch it to register as its master
there are no funny tricks i swear in a way that thing is also ryokohki and fukus sister.

kirko remembers that the dual is tomorrow and hurries to register herself.



it confirms her as its master its presence reminds her of her ship but feels closer to fuku

this thing is essentialy a kamidake in humanoid form a residential area it can form new parts which is why it looks like a skeleton at first . or something i dunno im tired.. ot has weapons and armor to pull from subspace so it looks incomplete

they comment on why its so tiny

washu says watch it gets bigger just like a husband before his wife after their wedding day

kiriko smashes washus face in and it quicly regenerates

kiriko this is just a force feild body but its linked to my astral please stop. it feeds back the pain to me.
then stop playing around.
the skeleton seikishi grows and its sharp parts get longer and more menacing but the skeleton is pretty feminine looking still.
it can regnerate and has a limiter set on it even though its powered the same wau as the kamidake

but just cause washu said theres a limiter doesnt mean it cant be cancled.
kirko remarks in her head on how this thing is over powered but if it doesnt work she can just return it

washu chimes in with a nope its registed to you its yours to take care of forever. this is fukus younger sister .

fuku watches this with acha fuku jumps towards the monitor
fuku whats wrong?
mia mia

yes it seems your an older sister
mia
it looks like a skeleton how scary
d: its not scary its just like us.
yes i guess we have a new sister.kirche adds
----
i already have mizuki though
"and seina has kamidake and zinv... you git one through tsunami and now one through me.

mizuki chimes in and decides to name the thing what google translate puts as wormwood wolf.

makhis daught reports this and then comments on kirikos erotic suit and is besten up again the feed cuts to the sorry technical difficulties feed.
the next to be crowned of renza who accepted the challenge freak out at what they just watched.
they consider using some ancent weapons found with the original 5

not sure this part...

it seems they leve but come out and whitnes some weird undiscribed phonmena its also seen from himics dock
the shady dude there blames it on clay

what a nostalgic sight i havent seen thay in a long time
dont just stand there do something

im not sure about this i think clay sabotauged them and caused their shit to blow up..


clay seems to laugh and then go to take a nap with lizanna..

hopefully o wasnt too off there... this is just first read through notes...

end of chapter





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