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"No Greater Love" (slightly NSFW)

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Zigra:
I kinda get what you're saying. One thing I think I should have pointed out before posting this story is that it's a setup for future events that I'll hopefully get around to writing more about.

Setofan1:
Are you going to continue this? Also, if you do, you need to fix it. It's hard to figure out what's going on. It's all jumbled together and erratic.

Zigra:

--- Quote from: Setofan1 on April 08, 2013, 05:50:54 PM ---Are you going to continue this?

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Actually, I've done a significant re-write of it, though I haven't gotten around to posting that anywhere yet. The re-write is quite different, as it brings more girls into the fold besides just Misaki.

Setofan1:

--- Quote from: Zigra on April 10, 2013, 08:16:12 AM ---
--- Quote from: Setofan1 on April 08, 2013, 05:50:54 PM ---Are you going to continue this?

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Actually, I've done a significant re-write of it, though I haven't gotten around to posting that anywhere yet. The re-write is quite different, as it brings more girls into the fold besides just Misaki.

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How about Seto? We all know how much she loves Tsunami. :smug:

Anyway, I hope you'll post your re-write.

Zigra:

--- Quote from: Setofan1 on April 10, 2013, 02:20:07 PM ---
How about Seto? We all know how much she loves Tsunami. :smug:

Anyway, I hope you'll post your re-write.

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You might want to check out my story "I Neeju Right Now" (which is posted in this sub-forum below) to see what Seto is up to in my universe ;)

As for my revised story, I might post that this weekend if I feel like it.

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