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Anime => Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki => Topic started by: Eff Efferson on June 19, 2017, 04:38:19 PM

Title: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 19, 2017, 04:38:19 PM
previous thread: http://www.uselesstenchi.org/Forum/index.php?topic=1243.0

so im finaly just reading what i can of the novels and im going to write down my notes here as i do it.

to catch up this is notes starting from volume 5 where i stopped

the kamidake is a prototype ship that the gp plans to mass produce they beta tested it with seina. it has an ai subsystem to make it more powerful like a royal tree ship.  i think tennyo developed it ahe is actualy on the ship i think. so is erma.

a woman who is a kuramitsu who seina doenst recongise shows up on the ship to run a test seina looks at her out of the corner of his eye trying not to draw attention to his staring. its mikami.

im absolitely sure volume 6 is after ova 4 episode 3.
because tennyo is there and so is mikami. which leads me to believe seina was missing from ova 4 because he was recovering from the attack by tarant that kiriko saved him from.

mikis body wasnt recovered but traditionaly most people in the academy are burried by having their bodies thrown into the sun i think.
it is said that even clones do not have the same astral as the original. which we kinda already knew. washu had said publicly on record that she thought the astral sea was a system to create a god. how? it stretches parallel to every dimention all astrals originate from it and they record all their experiences within it to the point that scientists want to learn to read frok it because potentialy they could know everything that happened in the past and possibly even in the future. the sea itself is in a way omnipotent. thia also implies that washu may have discovered her own choushin goals prior to being captured by kagato.  its durring this book that shank attacks seinas parents. and its not clear how many days have passed since getting assigned to the kamidake so its still possible that ova 4 ep 4 will be tarrants attack. (muh theory).

seina and his roomates are in the same city as when they met widdow they go to the same place actualy and then try to pick up girls but have no luck. they ask seina if hes tried transforming his nb into a girl and try to get it to transform and out of nowhere something falls on seina and he passes out. when he  wakes up mikami is there taking care of him on a bed in a hotel room. nit sur ebut i think she threw someone who got handsy with her at seina or something. also suiren shows up. and tells seina she cleaned his uniform... nb shows up as airi and yells at mikami. theres some sorta conversation between airi and kirche and minaho n washu  come on screen and she asays id like to ask about the status of seinas familys security and the interception of the enemy. they purposely leaked his familys information . also asks washu about her shoulder crystal. she says she is in the final staged of making the eggshell for it.

minahos like eait ur making a new ryo ohki ship does seto know.
it was seto that said to make the best ship possible. this is obviously after episode 3 of ova 4.


minahos like i feel like i might never get married. washus like dont worry u got time i have been singe for over 5000 years now theres worse things. minahos like. if rea has a boy can i marry him. washus like hell nah hes a human sacrifice.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 21, 2017, 03:18:23 AM
so that room seina woke up in is i think sort of his own private apartment... i think...

the rest of this goes pretty much the same. tarrant bitter by his defeat brings up erma at a daluma meeting. erma is tasked to kill seina. seina goes shopping for gifts

Dai never lived with tsukiko he visited occasionaly they arent married. seina decideds to get some gifts for them and for tenchi's house  airi controles nb ad asks what seinas going to get with his paycheck. he lists everyone including seto and minaho and forgets airi and she gets mad and is like what about your most important benefactor? and seinas like ..."Tennyo? i guess i shoudl get her something too" and airis like AAAAAAAAAAAAAA and then hes like... oh right and mikami! still forgetting airi. guess that explains why airi showed up and dropped heavy hints. seina makes a list" oh and mr. onnainin and minami oh and i almost forgot mitoto..." nb is like what about that beautiful airi girl!

but anyways seina and the gang go to eat at nashisu airi drops hits again.
back to seiryo... he's in the daruma held prisoner... he actually can use his nanomachine abilities to see into the walls of the place and could have used that and his other abilities to escape but he is an idiot and used them instead to keep himself entertained. (resuming form here later)
Title: Re: gxp read through notes
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 22, 2017, 05:41:11 AM
typed up on mobile i appologise in advance for spelling. pretty much the same story happens seina sneaks off to the lingere shop to shop for nb.then sex shop for nb  the bondage girls one of them has a name and was amanes friend thebowner of the lingere shop who amane and kiriko talked to was one of their friends and also has a name washu is selling things from earth and misusing them horribly to see how people not from earth would percieve them... she is advertising some weird thing to make tea in i think that is used and grose i cant get from the context of the bad google what it is... seina is pretty weirded out by it. he doesnt notice its washu though. also washu is selling a bell on a piece of ribbon. i e fukus bell. when seina leaves erma to go shopping before she tries to shoot him he goes to a jewlry shop with a big line and is personaly invited past the line to the back to see ultra rare personal collection of the owners who sells him the rare jewles for nearly nothing. he is  tatsuki. there like juraian amber pearls. anyways erma. bench. gun. police car with kiriko and amane. and then ryoko resists arest fires at the gp swat team  she has a powerful gaudian so they retaliate with excessive force and her entire upper torso is vaporised. she ded.


they fucking killed ryoko balta.



rip.




jk it was nb shape shifted into ryoko balta and running on a copy of her personal data airi knew she was erma all along and so they always had this arrangement to fake her death incase the dalumas called for seinas death by her hand.

i have never felt so played by a book in my life. i am shook.


amane realises airi was the one who took over nb and sent him to dirty places and they kirche chines in and is like uhm... airi...... but they drag airi into special forces i think interrogation room or something and presumably get there revenge.


btw the dates on this chapter are hard to follow but heres a fun fact. the shopping trip is the day after the day seina recieves his first months pay meaning you figure out what month this is from the other clues given and add either 30 or 31 days plus 1 to the tally. since the last chapter of book 5 is day 1 of his assignment to the kamidake.

ill tally this up later. but if ova 4 ep 4 is the tarrant attacks episode then its a month after ova 4 episode 3. which makes sense because traditionaly if you look at the tenchi time line each ova episode takes place around a month or so apart unless its a 2 parter.

the scene where seiryo breaks out and causes a distraction is moved to a flash back after the events occur on the next chapter.

ona private research station of tarrants huo balta is mentioned and they have a rouge ai they they refered to as phantom. obviously thats miki. and it destroys a large part of the research facility by making it self destruct. huo escapes i assume with the original j which is from 20000 years ago so hey its the one from the washu novel after all.  any ways he givve the rough coordinates of his location to seto. seto admires the expensive gift from seina and says ryo ohki is on her way to pick up neiju na melmas. and that the kamidake is undergoing its final flight test in the next few days... she projects its path over the co ordinates huo gave her and they directly intersecr by coincidence. so she decides to assign seina to retreive it. seto retires for the night takes a bath in a lake enjoys her new jewel earing then goes "between the mirrors" and mirror seto and seto talk to each other for like the 3rd time... its no less confusing then the other times.

seians ship comes across a private shipping company that seto hired to get the original j he comes aboard injured and gives them the box with the original j. same
thing as the anime a fleet led by gazura goes after seina and hits them with a suprise but as they jump the book ends.



in the after story it kinda picks up where the last books one does. kai tells tsukiko he doesnt want to have to call seina dad... and they fight and dai come in they fight... its maury up in here. lol too lazy to sumerise it tbh. i have troubke making heads or tails of it at first glance
Title: Re: gxp read through notes
Post by: Eff Efferson on June 30, 2017, 09:50:48 PM
i read the next one too lazy to summarize. basicly they go to jurai  tsukiko is there tsukiko confesses her love to seina. its not tsukiko its quiz panta (mirror seto) she transforms into her regular form when kiriko busts her. and she tells seina that for her to copy tsukiko she has to also replicate her way of thinking and so there must be some truth to her love confession. uhm what else... yuzuha challenges seina to a dual to auction off her kid to him for marriage and fake kidnaps minaho or something... the original j is the seed from the novel washu.

in novel 8, washu is rinsing off a surgical scalpel in the kitchen when sasami walks in on her. and mihoshi says something that isn't stupid for once. so i assume this implies this is the point where she gets her brain fixed?

:/ i hate neiju as a character. always have. always will. uhm lets see, seina's ship has a thing called acceleration space. to sleep they go into rooms with different time flow and can sleep for like 8 hours but only a few hours have passed outside it. its a cool concept.

king balta was physicaly there on jurai seto and quiz see him off.

it seems the biggest difference is ryoko... is still erma on the ship now. by fan popularity. since ryoko is supposed to be dead i guess.

counting the hours is hard but they stay on jurai for atleast a day.

gyokuren creapily stalks seto and quiz
Title: Re: gxp read through notes
Post by: antvasima on July 03, 2017, 02:52:15 PM
Do the novels ever explain how advanced Ryoko Balta's shapeshifting abilities are? Can she impersonate others, or are they more limited?
Title: Re: gxp read through notes
Post by: Eff Efferson on July 03, 2017, 09:17:52 PM
Quote from: antvasima on July 03, 2017, 02:52:15 PM
Do the novels ever explain how advanced Ryoko Balta's shapeshifting abilities are? Can she impersonate others, or are they more limited?

i haven't seen anything flat out talking about this much yet i just got to where fuku is born and she is constantly in erma mode as she faked her death at the academy when the police attacked.

from what i've read though... she was amane in gxp volume 2 she can impersonate others. it's shallow obviously, seina saw right through it the personality wasn't copied which implies her transformation isn't like Zero where she assimilates personal data to simulate the copied person's personality but rather  it seems she copies the projection of the person like kei who has been noted in the doujin to be a cheaper version of what zero is.


but i remembered this segment of gxp 14

it basically summarises to this, for ryoko the ryoko balta she portrays herself as is actually more like her avatar. It's the ryoko others have trained her to be and the ryoko others expect of her. as herself she doesn't act like she really feels like acting or but rather as she feels others need to see her.  before the marriage ryoko contemplates how she feels about the arrangement. it's said "ryoko" is really more the decorative professional exterior. 

yup ryoko is just as much furry trash as she is well furry trash.  Originally erma was just a mask a projection used to infiltrate the gxp and keep track of seina but as erma she finally got to be her true self. it's her true self with her real feelings but erma is not a real person. the two would have merged but since she found out she was royalty she still feels has to maintain her public image as ryoko. she actually transforms into erma though to think about how she really feels about the wedding.

this is not only a very interesting exploration into the concept of the difference between one's public avatar and one's true self. but it also is a callback and tie to DUAL!

ryoko balta is a mitsuki Rara type in seina's harem. like mitsuki she is the kind and gentle one and very much a loyal and openly romantic but she also has a split persona that is all business because of this like Miss Ra . not only that but both ryoko and mitsuki are villains who when met were not hostile but rather hospitable and then shortly turned to the protagonists side.betraying their original side to join the protagonists.

in this case though. Ryoko is the miss Ra and erma is the mitsuki
id even go so far as to say this is one trait that nearly all the mitsuki rara class waifus have. they  are almost always said to have two avatars usually a private and a work persona. 

fuuka has this and has rara's hair color too implying heavily she is the rara of ringos group.
Kirche has the public idol persona but also her personal home maker inclined persona.
honestly from what i've read i actually now kinda think Quiz panta a rara type as she first shows up mirroring tsukiko, and her entire thing is she has a fake personality she copied from others with their memories and a real one. I always took her for a D type because she has special abilities but i don't feel that is right anymore.
as for hakuren the blue seto scout i dunno but like... they make it soooooooooooooo obvious that karen the red one is the kiriko mitsuki of the group that they overlap their faces in a scene which they also do with amane and hakuren to show there yayoi types.

anyway that quote in bad english.
Quote"Marriage ... ...."

 Ryoko was wondering and there was no longing about it. "Ryoko" can be said to be her exterior, decoration. I will do it if I need it on my own standpoint, I will only do it. It is just a duty to her and it is free from sweet romantic love.

 She was a very ordinary girl. However, unknowingly it was grown severely as a person succeeding the blood of the General Secretary Balta, and as a result he grew up as an ideal person of those who wanted it.

 At the time of infiltrating into the Academy as a spy with getting transforming ability and "Elma", of course it was only empty, just a mask. However, because I met YamadaSeina, "Elma" completely had a ego as another existence, and the spirit was torn apart and split between the strong mission of "Ryoko".

 Of course, at first, "Ryoko" was her true heart "Elma" was a fiction, but "Ryoko" had a heavy mission and position and heavy responsibility. And there was no place where you could have a true heart. After all, it was driven to mission sense and heavy responsibility, and in the form that it attracted to YamadaSeina, the true feelings and emptiness reversed the position.

 When Ryoko was caught and released from all the pressure, the two minds were supposed to be integrated. However, by being Balta's princess, the two minds were not integrated. Just because both sides recognize each other's existence and share values, and become a trigger for the specific action of transformation to change, the spirit itself is stabilizing.

 Ryoko turns into Elma and thinks about marriage again.


Title: Re: gxp read through notes
Post by: antvasima on July 04, 2017, 04:47:35 AM
Okay. Thank you for the information.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 03, 2017, 12:07:25 AM
im very busy but ey heres some shitty summeries of what i think is going on here.... its hard to tell really

what was left of BOOK 8 : this is the episodes where they escort neiju so she can analyse seina's abilities, and when fuku tries to go back to earth

*seto actually adopted mashisu after all, the chobimaru is now a royal tree ship.
*mashisu's face is like that not because she is an alien but because she had her face blown off and it's a relic of the reconstruction process.
*Mihoshi's dad nakita is not a kuramitsu originally just a person who got high up enough in their military to marry into the family.

* fuku tried to go back to earth because  she thinks ryo ohki can teach her how to properly avoid pirate attacks and she worries about her hull being blown up since it would kill seina.

they get told its been about a year since seina went into space and he is told to go home on vacation since the academy school is going to be on break like it normally  does this time of year which means its a bit under a year but its most likely this is one year exactly from the start of ova 3


BOOK 9 in this book its the episode where they go to earth and meet up with tenchi




*when tarrant baits them into picking up those bioroid survivors of his "attack" fuku gets a weird look in her eyes. seina later asks washu about this if it is linked to who fuku used to be(widow). he's told not to worry about it.

*tarant has a boner for kiriko on account of seeing her all bloody

*people take pics on their phones of seina's girls.. it says they are communicating by twitter and text. but this seems like just an over site.

*washu tells seina that fuku was made using the soul of someone who wished to be closer to him and he doesn't know who she wont tell him but assures him that they weren't sacrificed to become fuku rather it was their time to go anyways. (its widow)


*washu reveals seina has two abilities, a probability vector so negative it should be fatal and the power of absolute crisis aversion explaining why he never gets extremely hurt.

* washu analyses the girls with her eyes:
kiriko is bio enhancement level 8
amane is 4 washu knew her grandfather and remembers him as being a voueyer.
ryoko balta is level 2 but is a "Reinforced person with special transformation abilities"
neiju has no bioenhancement
hakuren level 6 and a specialized thought acceleration enhancement like was shown in the first volume where her brain froze up
karen level 5
gyokuren 6 and she notices whatever it is that is up with her.
suiren level 10! she has a biased probability too everyone is shocked because at level 10 of bionehancement it normally warps Ur mind n body beyond normal function at that level.

*seina is introduced to funaho the tree, he realizees funaho is the presence around the town he always noticed as a child. apparently funaho can use the ordinary trees on the planet to spy on things.

*tenchi moved to kurashiki when he went into highschool.

*washu goes to analyse mikami and airi is like do you need me? and washu is like no... stop... and freezes her in time.

*washu then goes to the mikagami, " oh washu what are you doing here. whats wrong? do you need something?"
"not from seto, i need something from you mirror" "...... how did you know" "how long do you think naja and I were together?" mirror seto doesn't have naja's memories she is a "shadow warrior" she mirrors the people she turns into and their responses but doesn't have naja's memories (also she is kuisu panta but that hasn't been revealed yet.) mirror seto has only recently developed a sense of self though due to her memories of meeting seina. washu looks at naja and it says something like it was as if her old girlfriend was there.

*washu lastly visits kirche who is being visited by ken and asks to use her personal data.  ken is shocked as washu is supposed to be dead.

*tsukiko's major at the academy was AI research.
   
*Seina after getting his second bioenhancement now has the unfortunate ability for being able to sort of echo locate lewd things even when he closes his eyes... this could explain a lot of general sexual looseness in space... he actively tries not to peep on the girls in the tub but with his bioenhancement he still "sees" them naked. he even sort of echo locates something dirty with tsukiko if i recall right.

*ayeka and ryoko fight in the onsen but its like... "even though they were fighting it didn't seem like they were angry it seemed like they were friendly sparing. :)

*I think we sort of get an explanation finally why yosho doesn't care about airi going after seina i think around the scene where katsuhito says he wants to do a good luck prayer on the girls seina asks if he can do something about airi and he says something like well we've been together over 700 years and were only back together for like 500 ... and that's along time to only be with one person... living long distance and something about how philosophers just tend to be sex fiends....


*Tsukiko and seina finally have the awkward talk after kuisu revealed her feelings to him. she explains how she had planned to marry him if he hadn't gone into space since he had no future and in ten years they would look like an ordinary couple. she says though that she just wants to be seen as aunty tsukiko for now though. he wonders how she can suppress her feelings like that and again the concept of well you live forever and naturally relationships come and go and you stay deeply bonded but move on to other people. "so seina our lines may cross again in a few hundred years and that is enough for me... we are still young."

**"were young?" "yes the average life expectancy now is 2,000 years  on earth its about 80 that 25 times greater"

*kiriko and tsukiko take bath together after that.  kiriko:" i can't forgive myself for what i did" i think she means abandoning seina on earth "then i will forgive you for you" "huh""ive been watching seina for just as long as you have..." tsukiko brings her face uncomfortably close to kiriko *i think this is the illustration explanation* her eyes are not the charity filled ones of a mother but those of a woman's eyes who are filled with a jelous challenge. "i will forgive you not as you mother but as a woman same as you." "the same as me?" "yes... so please stop worrying."

*fuku and ryo ohki go out of the house together the next day and encounter a wild dog. ryo ohki recalls the story of her encountering a pack of feral dogs. but thanks to her shooting lasers at them they now are submissive to her.so they escort her to masaki village. where her true mortal enemy resides... the rooster. its actually kei's rooster (taro's grandmother from  the beginning and end of ova 2 episode one) ryo is paralyses with fear but fuku fights him off and runs to greet seina. n tenchi. washu uncamoflauges  herself she followed them.
chapter 14
*the woman on kamidake onsen is mentioned. the fleet commander that it's rumored that seto assassinated. but not further elaborated on what happened to her.  Prime minister fleet captain is how she is refereed to. it comes up the the context of announcing washu survived. someone needs to re-read over this part i don't quite understand whats going on.

*the original J was shot down apparently probably using a bad replica of washu's gems. they used whatever it was to power the daedelos class ships

*tsukiko really hates dai. i think its brought up that dai is related to the tennans. i think it says something isn't quite right with him mentally like bipolar suicidly...

*tenchi calls tokimi n she appears as a chibi tenchi begins to introduce her but she;s like wait i want to set the stage first an causes the room to fade and space to spread all around seina. #DRAMATIC. she revels herself in full choushin size to him . tenchi summons his ligth hawkwings and transforms. tokimi gives the OVA+1 speech about the choushins goals. tenchi recalls being cut in two by z saving ryoko from him. uhm you should actually read this section on your own guys it explains the kami tenchi emergence thing from ova 3 im not going to summerise it sorry. open the google translation search "Tenchi explored his"

Misaki as the counter reactor is elaborated on. she is stable now but goes crazy in 100,000 years.

"What happened to the man named z?" that man lost to tenchi and dissapeared i restored him to what he wanted, as an ordinary human being (bad translation from google) i live with my parents at home with my parents" tokimi looked sad when she talked about it. seina decided to change the subject.

*tenchi technicaly cant die even if tokimi and washu and tsunami ever cease to exist he will still exist. like ryoko said though if the choushin make no sense to zero because they are on a higher plane then what if there are people above the choushin dimention, tokimi's goal is now to get tenchi into that dimention eventualy if she doesnt he will be trapped living forever in a reality without anything else but him in it. ( i think thats the jist of it)
chapter 16

they get the call from airi that they have to come back but the kamidake is super fast in traveling so they have plenty of time. mihoshi says goodbye to kenneth and rajau who are on a satelite orbiting the moon. kennith and rajau plan to spend the night peeping on people on earth.

Seina wakes up and screams  mihoshi crawled into bed with him nake over night  noike scolds her. mitoto shows up too and pets seina's head mihoshi hugs her and the two smother seina inbetween them. washu pulls him out "why is mitoto here" "I found her cleaning my lab." washu holds mitoto's broom behind her. mitoto trys to grab it and she pulls it back and distracts mitoto with seina's head

*kei taro and kasumi show up. taro can talk now. he says he is one year and three months old now. which means ova 2 started atmost one year 3 months before and taro was just born then. kei  is the head of the earth delivery division of a gxp. she says there are plenty of empty houses in masaki village and if he ever wants to come back to earth they would be happy to let him live there even though he can just live in his ship.

tenchi asks if they have chicken in space. seina says no but recalls the animals that the poacher from the begining of book 2 was hunting washu says they taste the most like chicken and washu gets the idea to sell it at the academy as a counterfit delacasy for profit.

*its been mentioned before but just to remind everyone kasumi's husband is a pure earthling

chapter 17: memories of the snow
this is probably going to reference mikumo.
*old man hooked up to medical equipment and a nurse yup its mikumo and mikami comes to visit him.
*just like it was stated in washu no one lives on seiniwa but the royal family and kuramitsu's and those nessesary for their lifestyle like nurses security and cooks.
* he says Miyuki... snow! so the nurse is miyuki. a snow storm kicks up and he says MOTHER! a washu shows up and the chapter ends abruptly

18: seina's mom introduces seina to nene , ringo's wau employee, disquised as a human but seina realises she is a wau. she forcibly bathes seina cause he smells bad. not really sure what goes on in this chapter besides seina and his dad hanging out and then the book ends.




Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 11, 2017, 10:43:22 PM
ok now book 10: here we get the waifu tier list, mirror seto's explanation, the explanation for amanes behavior,  and a whole cut episode that serves as preparation for seina's eventual marriage.

book 10:

i'm not summarizing the new plot points... unless they further the lore. the imuim scenes are basically a big fanservice beach episode

the good luck fleet shows up just like in the show except washu rides with seina and observes him  after they encounter it washu reports to airi seto and mikami. seina gets an invite to imuium (From book 2) for 20 people as a sorry for ruining your vacation gift.

*imuim is officially speaking jurai resource planet 17

*the trip is for two weeks when you factor in what we know about the time line (the taro episode is in april 1993 implying that if taro is one year 3 months old gxp starts around mid ova 3 and seina was 8 days late to the gxp and he left before june 20th.) then...  this volume is early juneish

*gazura and ian north have conversation about the dalumas new contract with the tennan conglomerate. gazura recalls that most of the shanks are not total psychopaths like tarrant but rather alot of them are really good mechanics he remembers that dird has a grandchild. the silver haired dark skinned girl in the illustrations. she is one of the girls in paradise war.

* "Mi, Mikami, as an educator, you can show us the norm as a GP academy principal"
  "............ damn"
   Mikami gave a glossy smile comparable to Gyokuren

that is gxp code for mikami confirmed for the yayoi of her tier. also she is not at all as aggressive as i thought she would be towards seina.

*back on earth tenchi is suddenly teleported to his grandfathers place. where there is a weird boy and girl. it's katsuhito and airi he  recognized it could only be washu's doing right away. apparently sometime off screen  Washu who wanted to play parent and child with Ryoko changed Ryoko into a child but this was more like how D works... they were in suspended animation while their soul projected into the bioroid (i assume) body. she did this to airi so airi wouldn't run off to imuim and bother seina. airi gets nostalgic for when she met yosho and starts hitting on him ...   ayeka comes in and is like... whatever im over it.

  "Well, that was a variety of problems, and for Ayeka, it would be a lot of complicated feelings,"
   Ayeka and Haruko are fiancees decided by their parents, and Airi is full of complicated problems because he is giving birth to Minaho a few years after he met Haruko.

(haruko is a misreading of the kanji for yosho)
  "I will not deny it, but it's already over."
   Ayeka answered with a cool smile.

*seina wakes up to seto making curry its made obvious she got the recipe form neiju. neiju and mirror seto confirmed for D types?

*  "I stayed at the Academy for a long time and I also had a relationship with Seto, so when I was in Seniwa, I did not cook much, so after all I remembered Jurai cuisine It was a translation. " oh google... im not sure whether your constant references to seto and mikami being former boyfriends... (cause google doesnt understand gender and it clearly means girlfriends) is a mistranslation or sudden lezzie cannon

*oh i forgot to include the previous one because i didn't think it was translating right.

" At that time Kiriko was not well known in general, but I remembered that Mikami of the past was a boyfriend over Seto. The previous smile makes me realize it."

*after breakfast airi lays down and takes a break when yosho asks her if maybe she wants to slip outside with him and she is like ...huh why? and he is like"I do not want to lose the dignity as an older person" and then he adds a besides we missed out on a lot of out relationship at this age and well now were de-aged...  and she is like... ooooh... and he drags her off and ryo ohki goes to follow and washu grabs her and is like... no.

*seiryo fights off against tarant, tarant cheats, komachi throws him a sword to make it an even fight seiryo defeats him and is about to finish him off by killing him

" Seiryo, who faced towards the audience seats, noticed a girl who looked sadly, among the audience boasting in madness. It is a pretty girl with gray hair on brown skin of four to five years old.
  (Are you in the same family?)
   In a similar appearance to Tarrant, Seiryo found reasons to protect Tarrant, "

but tarrant  pulls out a gun when he shows him mercy and tries to kill him i think he cuts off his arms or something... not sure

"That girl's name is Dird. It is the granddaughter of old mechanic Gazura But ... " are they implying she is tarrants daughter?

*Seiryo learns that seina is on imuim with amane and gets jealous. and then  he looses to alan at rock paper scissors

*washu is making counterfeit goods when seto calls her and reports on fuku, professor ikuma comes up in the conversation and she starts talking to her clearly as naja.

* what was done to neiju to stunt her aging is translated as she had her  larva fixed. ... thats not the proper translation cant be but i dont know what the right one is. however this phrase comes up with one other thing in the tenchi series. the process that the royal tree seeds undergo in the dual! robot cores. so one can assume that means that the seeds are frozen and dont grow after the cotyledon stage... wait why would i assume that? well... kumu... remember how nothing has ever explained what kumu was or why it never appeared again after that one episode. Ive always assumed it was Himiko's royal tree seed. its clearly a royal tree seed that hasn't grown is still a cotyledon. essentially its frozen in the third stage of development. before the insides all grow out from the seed.(its basic college biology 2 guys...)


* neiju is told to go to bed since its adult time at night and she gets huffy. but is reminded she could stunt her growth if she doesnt. she tells everyone she wants to go to school  in a month now that she is no longer a priest. she never got to have her childhood and seeing seina's sister made her want to live an ordinary life growing up.

she asks to spend the night with seina so that no one bugs him.
imuim has like natural uh... psychoactives from the planets plants in it's air that makes people ... irresponsible.  so she is suspected of wanting to bang him even though she doesnt have the puberty dlc yet.

* a long quote but here it is:


"Shame and be shy! It's ashamed to the last! You have to come to Imuim and be sad and have a party only with a woman!"
  "Seto-sama! Seina is a minor yet"
  "It's not like repeating like an idiot! It is not different from adults both in skill and experience in terms of work. No, there are few people who have the ability of the Seina shrine. In a little while ago in Japan It was treated as a former uniform in Ginza, as an adult, even at the Galactic Federation, if you graduate from the GP Academy you will be recognized as an adult. "
  "That does not mean that you can advance it ahead of time!"
  "What I want to say is the matter of the mental attitude of this side!"
  "Here, is this the side?"
  "Although it looks awful, Kiriko will treat Seina as a child for a while How long do you want to keep it as a child? That's what I mean."
  "Well, that is ... ...."
  "It is not a sudden becoming an adult because I became of that age, but Seina already already has a skill to live by protecting myself by myself, and I also appreciate the surroundings. We only have to wait for the age-related problem to be cleared, Captain Kamidake ... ... you know what it means? "
  "............"
   In other words, it is provisionally, but he is officially treated as an adult.
  "Originally, even that is not age-admitted, but it is being made ahead of time in an exception. Of course it does not mean that we should bring forward the relationship of men and women ahead of time, but do not be prepared for it I told you before, do not you want to be the first of Seina, do you want to be Seina first, have you answered? "
  "Well, that is ............ It is still"
   In the question of Seto, Kiriko blushed and deflected his eyes.

** so basically. Seto: so what if she does people dont come to imuim to sleep alone.
kiriko: SEINA IS STILL A MINOR SETO!
Seto: he is no different from an adult in experience ability or work history. there are few people with his level of experience and skill and he's even graduated from the gp academy the reason his parents treated him as an adult even his parents treated him like n adult when he went back to japan.
kiriko: that doesn't mean you can make him an adult ahead of schedule!
seto: that's exactly what i mean i know it looks awful to you because for the longest time you've treated him as a child but how much longer re you going to do that for?
kiriko: well i...
"you dont become an adult just because you reach a certain age, seina already has the skills to live on his own and protect himself and to appreciate the world around him.  waiting for him to become of age isn't a problem , he is the captain of the kamidake don't you know what that means? "
....
in other words it is provisionally but he is officially treated as an adult.

then she basically says im not saying to rush into anything but you do want to be his first right?

so there u have it. seina by seto's own decree, more or less legally emancipated at this point.

*kiriko: so why did you pick now to put seina on vacation. seto: the daluma's probably want him dead.
*seina's dreamscape is intercepted by kirche he is taken to the imuim simulation in her vr world. Hiroshi is there with reiresa  kriche and him have  nice romantic talk where she assures him airi isn't there.

*ken grows to see kirche as sort of his daughter too. he tells seina that miki is still alive.
seina asks how she knows hiroshi decoded a message he got and he doesnt know where she is just that she's at tarrants home base..

*if i get what's going on in this story right because seina is being given the kamidake officially he needs to "interview the crew" and approve them formally this however is really flimsy subtext for all the women are going to have to come before him and he has to tell him how he feels about them so really this is the engagement scene.

first seto or rather it says it is mirror- seto talks to seina




here it is guys the explanation of mirror seto:

   "There was a whispering voice in the mirror · Seto's heart.
   It was about 2,000 years ago when Seto was born, Seto became the centerpiece of intelligence activities, and its position became important as a royal family. The reason why Mirror Samurai was born is to back up for the unlikely event and complement the public service and intelligence as the royal family."

this is some bad translating but basically... mirror seto was born 2,000 years ago when seto became an important member in jurai's intelligence gathering decision. She is a Shadow warrior (i think thats the term they use i dont know why it translated to mirror samurai here) she was born to serve as back up in the unlikely event seto was disposed and to substitute for her in intelligence and public matters as necessary.


"   It is a secret secret, it is a secret that is not revealed even by the Emperor Jurai, but only exceptionally, the secret is revealed only to the master of the first generation "Imperial Tree". That is the reason for the relationship between the first generation and the second generation. It is easier for those who clarified the existence of the mirror · Seto and its intention to work in order to smoothly perform Seto's intelligence activities.Currently, those who know the existence of Mirror · Seto are currently Jurai Emperor, Azusa, and Tsunami and Washu. However, I do not know Sasami which is not fully integrated with Tsunami yet, Washu is a special case. Speaking of that condition, Haruko also enters the candidate, but in his case he does not need to know for now."

Her existence is one of the most top level secrets of jurai, Not even the Emporer can tell people about it, but certain people know because the mikagami is a 2nd generation ship. and all 1st generation ships have access to all the information a 2nd has they can hack into it at will. currently the only ones who know she exists currently the only people who know are azusa, tsunami and washu, but sasami doesnt know because she is not fully integrated with tsunami yet. Washu is a special case though she. Katsuhito could know... but in his case he doesnt need to know for now and doesn't't.


   
  " Mirror · Seto is completely sharing memory with Seto. However, when I came here, there was a difference in the memories of the two. That is the memory of Naja and the memory of Seina when I was young. Since Naja 's memory is a sealed one when it is born as Seto, she could not know Seto himself. It is a kind of force majeure, but it is unclear why Seina's memory of childhood was not shared. Perhaps because of Seina 's biased probability, or because of Astral Kai' s feedback phenomenon, Seto said there was no reason to pursue that."


mirror seto shares her memories with seto completely, however an unschronisation occurred. She does not have the memories seto has of naja because naja's memories were sealed before she was born as seto and seto herself didn't even know them.

However Seto does not share mirror seto's memories of Seina and this started when she met Seina as a young boy on earth. why this is unclear Perhaps because of Seina 's biased probability, or because of the Astral sea's feedback phenomenon, Seto said there was no look into why any further then guessing.


"   When Seto regained memories as Naja, when the mirror · Seto excavated Seina 's memory at a young age, the relationship between the two mirrors collapsed. Although I have to keep rolling as Kamiki · Seto · Jurai, I have stopped sharing memories of Naja and Seina with each other. That is due to the appearance of Seina, the fact that the flow of unification of the galaxy, which is the ultimate goal, is visible but it is vague, and the position of Funaho, the first Princess Jurai, has been stabilized, that both internationally and internationally recognized as royalty is there. In other words, you can reduce the frequency of Seto's public service.""


When seto regained her memories of being naja, and mirror seto remembered hers of Seina's the link between the two seto's collapsed.

but she still had to keep pretending to be seto. Unification of the galaxy is their ultimate goal . thankfully recently the establishment of funaho as the proper first princess of jurai had stabilized and it was no longer as necessary for seto to perform public service so the use of her as a mirror became much less needed.


seto essentially tells seina what is really going on with these interviews. they aren't about the kamidake they are about marriage candidates as he is a valuable asset both economically and political. there basically having all the girls get to know seina better one on one incase they choose to marry him.

then she leaves him and goes to mikami and they chat again.

*first mikami is interviewed she holds herself back from seina (because the pheromones in the air are making her a bit crazy for him) and decides to wait .

* "But since I saw the evening getting drunk and drinking, I saw the rampage involving Kiriko-san, hehe, ho ho no Ho"
  "Oh no, you have a turn of ladies tonight, is not it?"
  "I am rude! Shall I ... ... ... ... let's let it diverge for the time being"
  "Okay! Prepare yourselves with a little girl!"
   When Seto and Mikami laughed with grinning, they joined their arms and climbed to the tree house while skipping."

uh... what... google translate.. stop this...


*next is ringo she gets to know seina and talks about how she was kiddinapped once. she decides that she really wants to say she wants to be with him but she doesnt know him well enough to say it compared to kiriko so she holds off.

*Hakuren asks what he thinks of her and he gives a dodgy answer so she clarifies "what do you think of me as a woman" Hakuren ends up slapping him and calling him a fool and running out.

*im not sure what happens with suiren... sorry the translation is super iffy here and her character is super underdeveloped on account of her bad bioenhancement...

* karen is next she tells seina she enjoyed going to earth with him and enjoyed the mecha tv show she watched on tv there.

" "Well, Karen's country has a huge robot!"
   Seina's face felt good and shy. I am excited to shine my eyes sparkling.
  "Do you call it not for regular weapons, but for ceremonial purposes ...?"
  "Oh, I feel that I understand it somehow."
  "It is a chosen soldier, especially a selected soldier, so to speak, it is, so to speak, a star like a star, so to speak, it is, so to speak, a kind like a star, so to speak, a boy's Leader is in a position to become a robot riding .... So it is the same as Seina Remember the children who say something like that ... ... so ... "
  "It's OK to seriously have a huge robot ... Well, where is Karen's country?"
   It is a fantasy product on Earth, but there is no reason not to get excited when it is said that it exists in reality. Seina gazed at Karen as if to devour.
  "My country is ... ... that, in reality it does not belong to the Galactic Federation, it is far away, there are Space Pirate's sphere of influence ... ...."
  "Well, how are you going back to the country? How do you get here?"
  "I can not go back to the country ... Actually, I wanted to manage the damage of the Space Pirates somehow, and four of us went to Jurai and became Seto's subordinates"

karen tells seina about the seto scouts and how thier country has giant mechs.

  "Well, are you a Hakuren from the same country?"
  "our country of origin is different, but we have known each other since long ago ... "

""I will serve you the best i can."
  "If we can ever go back to your hometown, please show me the robots to me"
  "Yes"


so everything goes good with the interview and he is glad he got to know her better.

*gyokuren basically tells seina how happy she is to know seina. so it goes good with her

*neiju is like how old do you think i am. and confesses her age and why she is fixed at the age she is.   "I can control the collective consciousness of people.Of course we can not completely change people's consciousness, but we can make go it towards a certain direction, so to speak"?

"  If a child's body it has no strength or physical strength. It is easy to control even if it is to be rebellious." thats why they kept her a child so if they ever had to kill her it would be easy.

neiju is 500 years old.

"I am going to enter the academy's elementary school next semester, I was interested in that kind of life, and because of Airi, I am involved with the Kamidake, and that would be become a troublesome thing to the outside world which is also why ive been admission to the elementary school. it's an alibi .... But now that I think about it, I think that the reason I decided to go through with it is that I talked to Yoshiko and her friends on Earth. "

*ryoko comes to seina and talks to him as erma would. she asks if he finds that strange but he sees them as the same person.


" "... ... Hey, Seina Do you like Ryoko and Elma, which one are you most fond of?
  "Eh! I like both, why ...?."
  "I was somewhat missing in explanation ... I'm sorry ... Basically my transformation ability is just a change in shape, but it only changes to the gene level in the case of Elma.The precise Ryoko gene There is a pair of cells between the cell that holds and the one with the gene of Elma and I can switch them. "
  "Switch?"
  "When one of the cells is expanded and activated, the other contracts and stops its activity, each cell becomes like a swallowing partner, so that it will not get caught in the usual gene check, directly, When taking a sample and checking it, when it is separated from the main body, the swallowed cells die, they are absorbed and no remnants are left.This is the ability added to infiltrate the Academy, but problems Even my eggs are like that. "
  "When it comes to each figure ... ... ..., that means that children can do it?"
  "Yes, since Balta is the trace, it is said to fix it in the figure of Ryoko .... To be honest, I also like the appearance of Elma ... .... I reveal my true figure It was also time for Elma to attach, so it is also a big attachment.Of course you can keep the transformation ability itself, so you can be the figure of Elma, but the real Elma will die. "
  "The opposite case is the same thing ..."
  "Well, so I'm lost, so which one do you like Seina?"
  "Maybe decide which one in my opinion? Such a heavy decision is truly ..."
  "..............."
   It was a long-running confession for Ryoko, but it is impossible for Seina to imagine it as expected. Of course Ryoko himself knew it, he just wanted to say a bit.
  "Even I, both Ryoko and Elma likes both ... ...."
  "I got both gifts and gifts,"
   That is the accessory of the pearl ball I bought for my first salary.
  "Would you rather have both bodies like Mikami-sama? Ha ha ha ... ...."
  "Huh! That sounds good"

so she explains how the erma and ryoko thing works and tells him it even effects her potential children.

*so amane shows up drunk with sake... she had been avoiding seina most of this trip to figure out what to say to him.
and seina's like  dont want to talk with you if your drunk and amane says... I cant say what i want to say if im not intoxicated and i need to say this. eventually amane confesses that she too is a virgin like seina. because seiryo had always stalked her and between him and her over protective parents no one ever got close enough to her for such a thing .also obviously her beauty was very intimidating,  she tells seina she wants to talk to him more like this but she really needs to be drunk to do so. she also brings up the kiss as being her first too which seina insists was not a kiss  but cpr and his first was with kuisu as tsukiko.  amane talks about how she feels about being a marriage candidate for seina and seina confesses that he likes her too but he doesnt like it when she gets aggressive like airi does. and she agrees to dial it down. and then she kisses him and is like "there now it's a real kiss."

*the next day a drunk amane shows up with kiriko and is like PACKAGE DELIIIIIVERY.... but like drunkenly and drops off kiriko. she is wrapped in something and because of this seina has to touch intimate parts of her to get it off i think... i dunno this scene is pretty hard to understand from the google translate.

*seina oils up amanes back amane says she will return he favor but kiriko comes up and is like no need i will do it  fuku jumps on amane's her back and starts tickling her.

*  "Stop! Stop it! stop, Fuku ... ...  I'm going to cum, I'm ticklish!" i just thought id share that.

*Seina goes fishing and thinks a shark is coming at him and hears the jaws theme in his head but  its ryoko as a mermaid she begins talking about the plot to the little mermaid.

"The Princess Mermaid who fell in love with the Prince seemed to be a human being too much to be in love with, and got a medicine from a witch and drank it."
  "And the Princess Mermaid replaces the voice, the person's leg ......"

   In front of Seina, the tail bill of Ryoko changes suddenly to the person's leg. The stunning silver scales change to lustrous skin, which goes from the foot to the knees, gradually up from the thigh ... ....
  "Hey, Ryoko !?"
   Just before the scarlet silver scales reach the crotch, Ryoko concealed it suddenly.

kiriko  shows throws a swimsuit at her.
"did yoshiko tell you that story while you were on earth? you know she turns into seaweed at the end right?

"uh kiriko it was sea foam."


they all have one last diner together and leave imuim the next day.

*the good luck fleet actually has a luck o meter. because tarrant fled to the daluma after miki fucked with his base and seina blew his ship up he had to give them the schematics for the daedelos ship but he didn't give them the schematics for washu's gem replica. the unko is modeled after the deadelos ship .


*they encounter the ship seiryo hails them amane attacks before he finishes talking... same as the anime.


*─ ─ ─ Masaki Kiriko, Amane · Kaunaq, Ryoko · Balta, Neeju · Na · Melmas.
  ─── Karen, Gyokuren, Suiren, Hakuren.
  ─ ─ ─ Masaki Tsukiko, Kuramitsu Mikami, ※, Mirror · Seto.
  ─── ※, Fuku, Kirche, ※.
  ─── ※, ※, ※, TatsukiRingo, ※.
   Seto's was looking at a list that was written like this.
  "...... Airi is not on here"
  "Oh, Airi isn't a part of this fortunatly"


*the amane models the new gp uniforms episode is at the very end

*the dominatrix that amane and kiriko ran into when seina bought stuf with his first sallery is there her name is Yumino · ra · Jun.   no one really cares but for the sake of encyclopedic completeness i figured id mention it

*"Nice to meet you, Mr. Seina, I am Nanami · Tatsuki." but they had already met nanami is the clerk from the lengerei store who helped seina when he went there in the ryoko is erma reveal episode


the novel ends after the lingere show.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 14, 2017, 09:08:23 PM
GXP11:

*on seinwa mikumo is dying and his heirs are all gathered to find out who is going to be the next leader of the kuramitsu family. taima , the third descendent of mikumo whos never appeared before, is sure it's going to be him because mikami is incompitent and so is minami.  he throws a loud hissy fit though because  its been hours and mikumo hasnt made a descision. the doors to his chamber open but it's not his nurse  its washu. Taima feaks out because she is 1. supposed to be dead. and 2. not supposed to be there.  and 3. not supposed to be able to be there. he nearly bursts an anurism and washu tells him to sit down and shut the fuck up. mikami tells him that washu is infact mikumo's real mother and taima considers having to destroy washu to keep that fact hidden but realises that would be impossible. washu agrees not to.  the nurse comes out and announces he has chosen minami as his sucesser. taima is dissapointed minami is suprised. its announced washu is being put in charge of disposing the body. and taima is mad yet again because it was supposed to be him who did it and disposing the body gives you some kinda temporary seat of power that helps you get promoted to president of the seiniwa mens coucil. taima brings up that she cant show up to the funeral if she wants to keep her link to mikumo hidden  but washu agrees on the basis of she doesn't want to be seen in public mourning mostly because of how many people it would also kill from the shock of seeing her alive. also she would look like a dick if she showed up after 5000 years just to start shit at a funeral for her kid. she insists that his nurse be her avatar for handling the burial plans.

taima complains that the nurse is a nobody.  "As a mother ...... I will not put up with my son's body being made a piece of crappy politics, do you understand?" Washu's facial expression changes completely. Taima suddenly solidified as if he was bathed in cold water.  it literaly seems to say that taima nearly shits himself. "If she is seriously intimidating, Taima would have been incontinent. " washu wishes them well and heads off. taima goes back to his ship and complains to nikita about how he has never been so humiliated before. taima discusses the posibility of eliminating washu and nakita reminds him that there is almost no chance he would be sucessfull if he tried and it would probably keep him from getting promoted if he tried.
   

*mihoshi is inelegeble for inhereting mikumo's role because she is now actively under mental rehabilitation for her problem. mitoto's disposition made her unfit and nakita is unfit... because he either married her or married into the family.

*it can be assumed taima is a decendent of mikumo because he has the same pale skin and green eyes as washu.

End of chapter 1 notes
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 18, 2017, 12:49:39 AM
GXP11:
this novel is GXP episode 20-21
*on seinwa mikumo is dying and his heirs are all gathered to find out who is going to be the next leader of the kuramitsu family. taima , the third descendent of mikumo whos never appeared before, is sure it's going to be him because mikami is incompitent and so is minami.  he throws a loud hissy fit though because  its been hours and mikumo hasnt made a descision. the doors to his chamber open but it's not his nurse  its washu. Taima feaks out because she is 1. supposed to be dead. and 2. not supposed to be there.  and 3. not supposed to be able to be there. he nearly bursts an anurism and washu tells him to sit down and shut the fuck up. mikami tells him that washu is infact mikumo's real mother and taima considers having to destroy washu to keep that fact hidden but realises that would be impossible. washu agrees not to.  the nurse comes out and announces he has chosen minami as his sucesser. taima is dissapointed minami is suprised. its announced washu is being put in charge of disposing the body. and taima is mad yet again because it was supposed to be him who did it and disposing the body gives you some kinda temporary seat of power that helps you get promoted to president of the seiniwa mens coucil. taima brings up that she cant show up to the funeral if she wants to keep her link to mikumo hidden  but washu agrees on the basis of she doesn't want to be seen in public mourning mostly because of how many people it would also kill from the shock of seeing her alive. also she would look like a dick if she showed up after 5000 years just to start shit at a funeral for her kid. she insists that his nurse be her avatar for handling the burial plans.

taima complains that the nurse is a nobody.  "As a mother ...... I will not put up with my son's body being made a piece of crappy politics, do you understand?" Washu's facial expression changes completely. Taima suddenly solidified as if he was bathed in cold water.  it literaly seems to say that taima nearly shits himself. "If she is seriously intimidating, Taima would have been incontinent. " washu wishes them well and heads off. taima goes back to his ship and complains to nikita about how he has never been so humiliated before. taima discusses the posibility of eliminating washu and nakita reminds him that there is almost no chance he would be sucessfull if he tried and it would probably keep him from getting promoted if he tried.
   

*mihoshi is inelegeble for inhereting mikumo's role because she is now actively under mental rehabilitation for her problem. mitoto's disposition made her unfit and nakita is unfit... because he either married her or married into the family.

*it can be assumed taima is a decendent of mikumo because he has the same pale skin and green eyes as washu.

End of chapter 1 notes

Chapter two notes:

*The entertainment planetoid ship rasepshy is in orbit around the daluma. it is normaly brigt and flashy its like space vegas, but to hide the daluma it is dull. seiryo rented it out .

*Ekushito · Le · Sepushi is the general manager of recepushi he thanks daluma for his bussiness with their booking business was dead that day due to mikumo's death.

*  "It was a pity for me, but it is a good news for us."
   The GP that lost the strong charisma of Kuramitsu Mikumo will erupt various internal problems that were suppressed by the existence of Mikumo until then.

that is why the whole gp army conspiring at the end happens in gxp... CONGRATS NABESHIN YOU FUCKING OFFICIALY CUT EVERY DAMN PLOT LINE THAT EXPLAINS THE END! YA PLAYED UR SELF.

*recepshi has accomidations for up to 300 million people. but can hold up to 10 times that if you include people docking out of its orbit and spending the night off the ship. but its expensive to rent because of it's history and art treasures. it predates the galactic federation and is rumored to predate the great prehistoric civilisation and it is its own independent governing body. it's neutral and granted free roam of all of space aslong as it declairs its intentions to do so first.

*the 8th child of makihi does a dance for daluma, the dancers of rachepsy's are ranked rank, wakko's are dancers in training and cant go on staige maiko go on stage as suport and maihime is the star of the show.

*"... Well then, is that the daughter that had relations with that guy from the Tatsuki family?" minaho asks washu as they stand on the blacony of a private room watching the show . rashepsy is a neutral area and used for warring heads of state to talk in neutral territory and gather information and thats why there allowed there. it was suprising for them to see washu but they were familiar with her as a customer from before her dissapearence. they are talking to makihi herself. apearently a guy from the tasuki family slept with that dancer girl and his genetic information was leaked.  this links to paradise war according to the japanise member of the board who wrote the original summeries on gxp

*they ask minaho if she wants to meet racepshi before she leaves. it seems that the ship has it's own 3rd generation tree for defence and washu was there to do maitenence on it to make it stronger for defence purposes.

*the dancer maya who they were looking at comes up to meet them along with her 12 year old brother maito

* i am convinced that makihi is the rara of the older waifu teir. if you look at ther protrait on the cover with kiriko it is the same pose and general shiloette of tsukiko from that kamidake onsen cover and the similarities between the two are palatable also she is said to have an air to her like seto  mikami or gyokuren or washu and in gxp 15 she is suggested to seina as a wife by her husband. so i am going to assume for now that she is the 4th.

*seiryo names his ship the unko. it should be already known by know but unko is a word that means both luck and poop.

*i hate having to point this out but they quit explaining the time in the series it seems and well the economys gone to shit because of the good luck fleet. so some time has passed since the last novel. in fact a whole year passes durring volume 11-14

*kiriko's royal tree ceremony is arranged and she is  secretly "adopted" into the royal family (she becomes a masaki spelled 柾木 as opposed to 正木.  they decided to test fuku and kiriko's tree merger by testing how fuku synchs to the mikagami.

*washu again meets with maya and makihi on the recepsy abotu how maya might be one of the girls capable of reversing seina's luck she says that it has to do something with his astral's past life. obviously we already know now she means because he was kazuki. she says it because one guy and 4 women made a huge change to the astral sea and 3rd dimention at one point.

*  "Washu, Actually I ... ...."  "... Occasionally I have a strange dream, which is painful to talk
about, but In them i become a certain person and remember there various experiences ..."
"That's why I am concerned about the material from the earth that Washu brought us. I feel something really nostalgic  when i read them..." washu brough them a bunch of plays and things from earth to perform.

*"As a result of comparing the original astral structure known at the moment with the astral configuration of Maya, 34% are in agreement, there is a possibility that it will be even higher if you know more about it"
  "There is not much detail in that direction, is that number numerous?"
  "Memory feedback begins to occur from the Astral sea when it exceeds 10% It is said that it is a feeling of oversight or a previous life, but in the case of Maya, because that number is quite high, The possibility that memory is feedbacking  should be high. "

*btw makihi says one of her daughters has run off to o her own thing and she is talking about komachi.

*syuzan greets kiriko when she comes to get her royal tree he is the gaurdian of the tree room now and has mellowed out conciderably. syuzan is also said to have a son who has a 2nd genration tree... so we now know he has atleast one son and 3 daughters

*seina is introdued to mikage , kanemitsu and yuzaki's daughter. ringo takes care of her ringos younder sister ichigo shows up.

*ringo more or less tells seina that he was brought to mikage because its some kinda thing they do when they arange for their kids to marry someone so basicly they want seina to marry mikage when she grows up.

*"Jurai's woman don't expose their skin for anyone other than their husband" that explains why ayeka was so paniced about tenchi seeing her naked.

*kirche and washu meet and she asks her about getting a physical body. she says airi is aranging to pay for it and that she has set it up so she can build herself a nice home in the kamidake.

* kirche asks why washu hasnt announced her survival yet she says it would cause various problems but she wants to but it may cause war.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: WarOmnimon on August 19, 2017, 07:29:12 AM
(https://media.giphy.com/media/iiS84hOJXh1Pq/giphy.gif)

Thanks for the hard work and awesome translations, Based Fap.  You're basically doing God's work for the fans right now.  You rock!  :D

(Side note... I always wanted to use the "we're not worthy" to respond to something around here.)
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 19, 2017, 01:51:52 PM
I'm surprised that I've gotten this far. I'm even more surprised that ricin has gotten further then me it's no cake walk reading these novels unless I'm wide awake it's gibberish cause am adhd as fuk. lucky alot of the stuff is the same. and what isn't is pretty obvious.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Ricin on August 19, 2017, 05:52:29 PM
Well the anime made some parts easier. Still reading through your notes I see I missed some things.

If I got the Powerball tonight I will need your help to keep the translation company honest when I pay to have the GXP novels translated.

Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 20, 2017, 12:43:08 AM
I hope you win. quick surround yourself with quartets of similar personalities women.it works for seina..
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Ricin on August 20, 2017, 09:00:00 AM
That's the paradox. You need the money, to get the power, to get the women.

Good advice from a young Cuban businessman.   :smug:
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 20, 2017, 02:27:00 PM
*"Noike's "Kyoko" is even younger than Ruihui, but Kyoko has no official key yet, and a mobile terminal is substituted for the key." ruihui is a mistranslation of whatever the fuck kiriko's ships name is. the book follows kririko as she gets her tree and as her key is made for it. kiriko has to cut the tree and it drips sap she is told not to touch it since it comes out to prevent the tree from infection by bacteria.

*  "It was really delicious, royal people like Noike and Sasami but that's really good cooking, is not it?"
   Ayeka is an exception, but instead her garment sewing is comparable to skilled craftsmen.

its official aykea sucks at cooking. word of god.

*seina and ringo bathe mikage together its awkward.

* "A thin yukata and wet hair, plus the smell of the boiling water are doubling the glossiness of Ringo. Ringo is an attractive woman, even though Amane and Gyokuren are not as intense as a colorful aroma. That girl with her is clear."

ringo confirmed for yayoi type?


*  ringo and seina talk about kiriko getting a 2nd gen ship.

"Is it such a terrible thing to be chosen as the second generation?"
   Seina looked curiously at the sight of Ringo who was enthralled.
  "Of course! Imperial ship for us is basically the third generation. If you can get the second generation, you get top priority to become Jurai Empress. If it is the first generation unconditional He is the next Jurai Emperor. "


*"There are currently six people, including Kiriko, who have the second-generation trees,.."

  *As long as the Imperial Tree does not endanger the life of the Master, it follows the will of the upper tree..."


chapter7

*anemitsu and amane climb tenju while neiju just kinda chills on kanemitsu's backpack nothing really important happens...

* maya confronts komachi about being her runaway sister.

* "recepushi grants asylum unconditionally, don't you?"
  "Are you stupid or ... ...."

*since Komachi left recepushi long before Maito was born, Maito does not know that Komachi is his older sister.

*something something seina : 

"No, it's okay, I do not want to use much acceleration space."
   Actually, if you are too accustomed to using the acceleration space, there are various adverse effects. The most serious of it is dependency and bargaining. Even if you play for a long time in accelerated space, because normal living is possible for face up, the length of stay in the acceleration space gets longer and longer, eventually affecting the life of the table. This is also the same for thinking acceleration. There is also aging in the spirit, which also affects the body, there are many cases of abnormalities in the body and sudden death at the worst. Seina often uses accelerated space for work patterns, time adjustment, and because it is still dominated by the sense of age when he was an Earthling person, he is trying not to use it much in everyday life.


*something happened with amane and she had to climb up tenu n stuff to get to sein so the end result is while the scene nabeshin wrote in episode 20 is still trash it ends at reletively the same place as intended. with amana angry and tired and seto uhuhu ing

the book ends after they meet up with kiriko i think syuzans son snubs kriko and doesnt show up he is a bit embarased as its kid of rude she is declaired kiriko masaki jurai so she is in line for the throne.... its kinda rude... but anyways they make plans to synch her ship to fuku and it ends.


*finaly a decent kajishima rant.  basicly it ends abruptly because he wrote to damn much. its bigger then the other volumes by a big amount and he doubled the illustrations because of this aswell.


onto book 12 almost into uncharted territory
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 10)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 23, 2017, 09:47:29 AM
gxp 12:  episodes 21
chapter 1:
The gaurd of dr. clays jail cell watch him futily try to re assemble his antique vase.

thats it.

chapter 2:

*are we really allowed to se the bridge of the royal tree ship!? *if you want to know where the story is its right at that point in this chapter where amane and ryoko talk about how they are amazed they can get on kirikos royal tree ship.

*ryoko makes an interesting observation that the indise of a royal tree would basicly be paradise for ppl who have lived their lifes on ships and pirate since its self sufficent nothing needs to be done to run it and its just unlimited space greenery mansionous shelter and food and more luxury clothing  and resources then they could ever imagine.

*  "Well, next time asking Washu, would you like me to make a moving terminal like Honoka or Kyoko?"
  "Sounds good......"

chapter 3:

*not a note a rant... if you watch the anime this scene and the episode before illustrate just how much making shit up nabeshin had to do when he got to the end. for fucks sake that scene where all 8 girls go OH and do the palm fist.... its set out of the ship... and then cuts back into the ship. they dont even jump its just ok lets fly into space oh look the daluma is right abotu jurai! nabeshins directing was shit. but its fridge logic shit. he just expects you to go with everything but if you look objectively and ask questions everything falls apart... its really jaring and unimmersive compaired to the novel where everything is explained and motivated instead of the shitty nabeshin version that is like an 8 year olds book report on the gxp novels.


*minaho is there as well as mitoto airi seto and mikami Yuzaki mikage and Ringo

*A pattern like a vine appears on the crystal plate of Kamidake as the two ships synchronise.
ayyyye its cannonly a detail specificly mentioned. uhm also worth noting where else these vine show up on... on mother ryoko from he notan doujins... still trying to figure out what they represent.

*  "... Ms. Mitoto, why are you?"
  "I discovered her cleaning under the Imperial Palace a while ago"
I always wondered why she was there.

*airi mikami and seto let the ship access their respective organisations databases and come up with a list of like 10000+ potential places that the good luck fleet likely is they leave it up to seina to pick thats how they ended up at the daluma

*daluma asks racepshis manager to defend them they refuse .

*  "Long time no see, Mr. Seto"
   In the confusion, Makihi gracefully appeared on the monitor. At her appearance, the bridge which had been frightened became quiet.
  "Oh, Makihi, so what's your response?"
  "recepushi is prepared to leave. However,  we were in business when you came, so we need some time. "
  "Well ... Well, let's wait an hour, but  if at any time Da · da Ruma shows signs of a super space jump, we will attack even if you are still in the way.."
  "Thank you, Mr. Seto"

*makihi introduces herself to seina and says she looks foward to entertining him in the future before ending transmission the girls ask what was up with that "Makihi has ten children as far as I know, but with her official husband she only had two children,  the others children have different fathers" recepshi gets out of the battle area

* illustration explaination"... ... How beautiful"
   Makihi was standing alone naked in an uninhabited huge hall
The battle of the da luma and the Kamidake was displayed on the big screen in front of her.

the energy from battle and the heavy quakes from battleships are converted into sounds and flowed into the room at loud volumeMakihi closed her eyes  and spread out her hands

"well thats one way to watch a battle." washu says

"When i do this, i can feel all of the battle, i can even feel what the combatents are feeling aboard the ship."

"Hmm ... ... well then, am I disturbing  your viewing?"
  "I can not do anything else , but I'm okay with that, please stay i do not mind."

then they deploy the first 3 light hawk wings.


*  "What's wrong, Recepushi?"
   Makihi who felt the battle suddenly opened her eyes.
  "... ... Yes, I understand.:
  "What's wrong? Did this ship say something?"
   Washu, who had been observing the battle silently until then, watched Makihi.
  "shes wanted to let me know that mizuki, the royal tree ship inside the kamidake wants her to tell it the feelings that I feel ... ...  mizuki is a 2nd generation ship. If it asks for information recepshi can not refuse"

  "What! What is this data !?"
   The data of da Ruma's ship is displayed to the monitor of Kamidake with tremendous momentum. Kiriko was puzzled.
   "─── , Kiriko. racepushi ga, Kokoha Kowaki Shita no dame." (royal tree ships and washu's god voice all talk in katakana... so it translates to untranslated japanise)
  "That ship?"
   However, Seto, who knows that Sepushi is the third generation tree, immediately understood its intention.

*At that time, parallel to the three Light Hawk Wings created by mizuki, three more Light Hawk Wings appeared. And they overlapped each other, and the shape of Light Hawk Wings itself started changing.

 The pale light of Light Hawk Wings that occurred around Kamidake began to spread even wider as it turned into a clear film like a clear film. It was like a beautiful pattern like lace knitting, just as if Kamidake wore a dress.
  "What ... what is going on?"
   Da Ruma muttered in a daze.

  "It has materialized ..."
   Seto murmured like a soliloquy.
  "No way ...  are those Light Hawk Wings?"
  "Yes ... ... Once, I've seen Mizuho and Karin do the same phenomenon"
  "Funaho and Misaki?"
  "It is said to be a phenomenon unique to twin trees that makes the two sets of Light Hawk Wings together, the things that could not be reproduced among the other ships, which means that the compatibility of Ruki-chan and Fuku-chan is good"

  "Washu said that the Kamidake was designed under a concept different from Ryo-Ohki, which assumed another ship and collective warfare, perhaps this is the real power of the Kamidake."

but Fuku-chan can create Light Hawk Wings ... how"
  "Imperial ships and Ryo-Ohki have quite similar properties, in fact Ryo-Ohki who struck Jurai seven hundred years ago had caused a similar phenomenon, at that time, we weren't sure, but ... it was proved with this. "

* Even if Light Hawk Wings prevent direct hit, the diffused energy will damage the hull of Kamidake, albeit slightly. In addition, if you take a concentrated fight with a large fleet, the amount of energy that diffuses becomes enormous, and it is in a state of flying in high-energy fog.
   Of course, Kamidake has self-healing capability, so it will not be destroyed so easily, but there is no doubt that a time limit will still exist. However, if the repair rate of the hull exceeds the degree of wear, the worry that it will be destroyed theoretically disappears.

* Komachi who changed the blood line shouted to push the Seiryo away.
  "Ryo, okay!" .... not a note i just think thats  a hillarious mis translation.

seto comands fuku to replicate ryo ohkis gungnir manuver *where she spins*  she does it and its much more effective and flashy

*unlike in the anime the daluma is captured intact not blown up and some of the pirates ecaped by staying aboard racepshi. ok random theory time... tarant became a bioroid after the episode where they blew up his ship before going to earth. like d. bioroids in tenchi like d work by having their users real body  stored else where while there astral is fixed to the eye of the the bioroid body clone. in dual  d's real body was inside of zinv the whole time as we see at the end. so Tarrant in the episode where he fights seiryo and the episode where he gets crushed to death by zinv he survived simply because what was crushed wasn't him but rather his avatar... so where is the real shank? uhm well he was aboard the daluma durring this time... and i think seina's wedding takes place in the novels on racepshi... so what if he went there and escaped that way.

*pic explaination:    Seto gladly looked up at the sky of the residential area. There was a picture of the da · da Ruma so as to cover the whole sky there.  she is trying to figure out how there going to transport all those seized ships

seto wonders if she can fit the daluma into kriko's ships subspace. also the two pics of airi are about her being swamped with paperwork...

* also a random theorynote gxp and the novels tell us alot of the prolouge of DUAL! my srunning theory is now this: after they left to go to space they landed on Airai that was the first planet they visited which is why everyone traced the earliest traces of the great prehistoric civilization there. then they must have visited racepshi at the very least its hinted it existed durring their time and before. some how they figured out what happened with the fall out from the war the washu bioroids caused. the earth they come from is Tera the central planet in renza as gxp 15 seems to state. and that makes the wau planet the last planet they visited which makes sense its stated the wau's also did their own seed project... so im just kinda thinking they did theres togeher or the waus did it first and they were like yeah lets do that since every other fucking place in the galaxy is mutated (like the janus t types or dead as shit)

*when talking about dalumas space becoming baltas space :

"Well then is there rumor that there are humanoid spacecraft in that area with the same power as that of Imperial "
  "Yeah, as few as there are, fifth, fourth generation, some third generation classes seem to be there,"

*also king balta's survival wasnt announced yet... alot of un anounced survivor ship going on.

*taima tells nakita about tarrants demand for the kamidake in exchange for daedelos plans

*seto is concerned because they did the take down of daluma with the kamidake and it got leaked so every one knows the ship can make 6 lhws and mizuki is an unregistered ship that conducted an unauthorised naval battle

*seto calls all of seina and the gang to a meeting with maya and makihi seina is excorted inside by maya.

" she seems to have some sort of atmosphere similar to Kiriko."
  "......Ah"
   Everyone understood the reason in that one word. One person, Kiriko alone ha a slightly different interpretation.
  (... she resembles mom)
   her Appearance is completely different, but when Maya cuddled up with Seina she resembled tsukiko.


this is the scene where seto tells them she sent bulk letters to a dual to seiryo.

Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 12)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 24, 2017, 07:16:00 AM
hiroshi reireza and kirche are hanging out in virtual space, hiroshi has some sort of data on where miki is but it's encrypted and he cant figure out the password.  kirche feels guilty that miki was unable to make it into nb because she was already there.

on their way home reireza teases hiroshi about treating kirche as a daughter and he acknowleges their similarity. Reireza and them get in her car and she takes him to go and get some sake . she buys an expensive brand and hiroshi is suprised by this she takes him to her penthouse. her house impresses him. the story cuts to him telling her his story

"when i got here i was enrolled in the comprehensive department. even though i had a scholorship i had to work as a house keeper."
the comprohensive department is a  school for those who aim to get placed into the philosophy department its hard to get into because way more people apply then they can take. you can't get into the philosophy department without going through it.
it takes over 20 years to get through unless you are a genious like washu and they let you bypass it.
"but i was just a person who got a scholarship because he got a scholarship. I managed to do my best the first year but the second year my grades gradualy dropped...

I am the very representation of a person who is aboslutely useless... and i can't exept that i have failed because my pride is too high..... eventualy they suspended my scholarship eventually I got involved with some bad people to try pay for school."
"hmm so you were involved with human hunting?"

"the organization i was working for was completely illegal, the worst kind of illegal. It was too late once i learned that to get myself out of that situation, and if i had quit i wouldnt have been ruined financialy. "

Originally, human hunting has a ceremonial aspect of welcoming freshmen.

"it was around that time that i met tsukiko, and the man who became her husband, Ken Raraiba Steinbeck,  she was in a different department then me but she lived in my neighborhood, ken was involved with the crackdown squad that looked for illegal human hunters, he was the definition of a nemesis. I hate to say this but in a way i was a bit of a villian back then."
"how did you get to know someone like that?"
"the general encouarged them  to tutor me to get my grades up but it was too late."
" one night tsukiko was chosen as a target for human hunting, I wanted to stop the situation, I so I dropped an anonymous tip to the student community association ." "so they ended up catching you as a member of the organisation?"
"ken was better then i epected, he got tsukiko set as a target so i would give the anonymous tip. the organisation was destroyed and everyone arested including me, for my involvement in tipping them off he made sure i got a light punishment, and tsukiko evetualy asked to become my financial benefactor,  we had developed a close friendship after that. He and Tsukiko began dating soon after that, and a few years later, Kiriko-chan was born ... " Hiroshi downs some sake.

"so how is her husband?" reireza asked hiroshi's expression became clouded.
" the group that he belonged to  went on a long-term research mission and there was an accident."
" what happened?"
"the details are unknown, alot of people went missing and a search was organised but the ship wasn't found till nearly half a year later.
"how do they not know if the ship was found?"
"the ship was crushed down into a block less then 10 meters when they found it."
*(im sure this implies Himiko or some other humanoid royal tree ship compressed it)

"whether it was someone's attack, or natural phenomena, there are several possible causes,  but it has not been identified, but we all understood that he was dead. the only thing certain was there seemed to be quite a strong spatio-temporal earthquake  in that area."
   The likely culperate for generating such power is an Imperial ship.

  "It seemed like Tsukiko seemed to think it was an accident ...  she did not want  Kiriko to grow up thinking  that her father was killed by someone ... ... she didn't was kirko entering the academy just to investigate the matter. "
    " let's get back your story.What did you do after being captured by human hunting?"
"After serving a year of community service I became a civil servent of the comprehensive department and became an assistant to a professor there.

*hiroshi was afraid to use the money he got from human hunting but when he had miki he decided it would be ok to use them if it was for her.

*he made miki's body using tsukiko's dna probably from a stray hair.


* "what did you do about telling miki who her mother was?'
" i didn't talk about it much, i decided to tell her she died in an accident and that her mother was an orphan with no relatives and that i didn't have any pictures of her. i never even told  her when her own birthday was" (this implies a bit that even in Dual! ayuko from the normal earth was actualy never with ken sonada, and that mitsuki was artificialy created)

"was it hard on her growing up with out a mother?" "yeah.... one time i caught her looking into a mirror and talking to herself after i told her she looked just like her mother.... the only thing i ever told her about her mother was the day she died",

*the date hiroshi told her was her mothers death date was the day that tsukiko left the academy hiroshi looks at  the pictures of miki sadly untill he realises that that is the pasword on the encypted data he recieved from her.


chapter 8: kanemitsu "Trains seina" for the battle with seiryo after they encounter amame and kazuki the only thing different is that kanemitsu basicly sums up the entire plot of the true tenchi novels to seina in a paragraph... airi's home planet seto's refusal to take the throne and giving it to azusa, azusa's choosing funaho... ext. nothing else really all that different happens.

chapter 9:  alan abandons barey and cohen ( i think because the last chapter he may have met loretta who he marries... also alans mildly evil in the novels but i didnt see anything about it when i looked through.

an odd woman comes up to them and convinces them to bet the unko on the tennan seina fight. she then introduces herself as kuisu panta.

*A woman poisoning a buttock cake was Miki · Steinbeck's teammate Miranda.
sometimes i love google translate...

kennith and rajau meet up with seina they got free tickets and travel to see his fight. kaliche and miranda also show up. their conversation bored me..

*it can be seen in the anime but seina is told about mihoshi defeating seiryo on earth whne he fought tenchi and they bring up that the set is modled after tenchi's house and veranda.

* im kinda mad about this but in the novel seina doesn't ask onnainin for his name.
poor onnainin, such a side character he doesnt even reallyhave a name.

literaly every side character from the book possibel shows up for the event incuding nanami from the lingere store and the tatsuki lady who sold seina those gems. ian north kururuka pandor and maya.

*taima watches the fight and brings up how with the dedelos's technology and the kamdake's technology the royal tree ships would be no match for them.

"the daedalus's excellent practical versatility and basic If you have a design you can have a ship that can fight with Jurai, if you can add Kamidake's technology there, it's nothing to be afraid of as an Imperial ship!" "As soon as we got the project, we will showcase the prototype ship as a new ship of the military, and we will launch a great annihilation game based on the information of the hostile Kai Bun Guild provided by Tarrant."

"what if Tarrant gathers the remnants of the pirates and organizes  a guild and becomes a new threat to the federation ..."
  "is there a guarantee that he will not mass produce the Kamidake?" nakita chimes in

"look at what he did with the daedelos, even if he could he wouldn't because he doesnt want others to have the same power he does"

*Taima gets handed a leaked video of erma transforming into ryoko.

*kuisu ended up giving barry and cohen jobs to pay off their debts that have beenplauging them since the 3rd novel. i was right i think alan ran off with loretta. he shows up again in paradise war.

*  "why!?"
   Amane hit the table with strength.

it took them 12 volumes to write a desk bang in but god damn i swear they do it in nearly every episode of tenchi.

*fuku isnt supposed to be apart of the deal in taking of the kamidake is what they told the gp then they kiddinapped fuku spereately.

*washu is on seiniwa at mikumas grave a black crystal with his body sealed inside but no one can see in it. she gets notification from seto about what is going on with fuku. she is apporachd by a young man and miukumo's nurse... implying the young man might be mikumo and she might have done what she did to yosho and airi to him.

*when seina goes after the ship with nb when he begins talking to nb it deforms and becomes kirche... who he has never met before other then on tv.

"  "I would like you to return Fuku promptly"
  "This is the decision of Galactic Federation"
  "Return Fuku ... ...!"

the volume ends with him jumping to the wau planet.

in the afterword kajishima talks about how the novels were only suppsoed to go for 3 volumes but ended up over 4 times that long since the anime was very abridged compaired to what he wanted to write.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 12)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 28, 2017, 03:59:36 AM
Greetings from the middle of hurricain harvey (don't worry in not underwater yet.)

and now for my notes on the differences in gxp 13: this is episodes uhm... i think 24 and 25?


*they chase the Hoystoke to the wau planet.

  "this planet has been designated a Non-invasive area ......"
  "The owner of the planet has already passed away and his foundation is an administrator, but in reality it seems that it this is a sealed space area that was designated as important heritage site for the Galactic Federation about 10,000 years ago."
  "Sealed area?"
  "There seems to be a considerably old civilization ruins in existence. from the original owner's studys, it seems to be an important site of remains of the prehistoric civilization ... ... "
"The research materials of the owner remains almost dissipated So the research is totally untouched, so it is one of the origin theories of the prehistoric civilization that there are numerous, but the biggest factor to be sealed designation straddles multiple borders, It is a place where the territorial issue of the complex is intertwined. "


  "Another theory was that it used for the " seeding " plan of the prehistoric civilization, since it seems that at least a few trillion or more of large spaceships were built, the resources used consumed a solar system and It was not enough. "

*Seina who saw the planets grouped in the solar system turned to the planet which closely resembled Saturn.
  "doesnt that look like Saturn"
   the other planet they were approaching looked like the earth. The big difference was it was the fourth instead of the third planet . the size and the order of arrangement are exactly like the Earth and Mars switched places.

*kiche sets up a message to send out to the earth 24 hours after they go into the solarsystem which has something set up in it to block communications

*  "Masaki Kiriko, Amane · Kaunaq, Ryoko · Balta, Hakuren, Gyokuren, Suiren, these six people will be arrested on suspicion of assisting the destroying of the fleet.Neeju · Na · Melmas, Karen has already been detained , Do not resist "


*  "Is he really the doctor clay?"
   Tarrant glanced at the old man in front of his eyes. who came off of the hoystoke
"  "Huh! I don't care what a young man like you thinks about me. If you pay me money, I will provide whatever skills you need, huhuhu.

 However, the sense of incongruity that Tarrant felt was resolved by the words of clay. science for clay was only a means to get money.

*"Many of Clay 's lawsuits involve money. It is almost one hundred percent of cases put in prison. If we get results, from an employer who does not care about money, Clay is a competent philosopher."

so i  think this means clay got sued alot for all the shit he stole from othe people

clay tells them that there is no way to sever the link between fuku and washu even if they sever every other link

*clay tells tarrant that since he wants to make the ship his even if he can reproduce it washu buit it so it required bonding with the terminal is like a pet and if they dont it will rebel.

Hun! I do not intend to spend time on such things.I want a ship that moves at my will,  the original is for analysis, the clone is ......"
   Tarrant raised the mechanized hand and looked at the clone with brutal eyes.
  "Let's leave it's disposition to me"

when clay is taken back to a lab to work he loops the security feed so no one can see him and launches a monitor and begins to talk to Miki. he discovered her and struck a deal with her to get the access code to all of tarrants files .

*seina's outfit is an experimental one designed by airi its filled with survival aspects liek sweat and excrement reubsorbtion so it helps keep him from dying on the planet it absorbs enough water that he can go a week without any outside water also it blocks alot of scanning

*the bases systems start to malfunction from clay's interfearence "while systems are often well guarded from the outside most are increadibly frail from the inside" clay had made the same mistake in the past with his security systems (when washu hacked him by sneaking into his house) miki gives him full access to the system and asks something else of him

*after misao shows amane and them to their house arrest space in hi mansion, seina finds two young waus being harrased by shanks grunts

*seina actually attacks the pirates by utilizing his bad luck she stands on a cliff above them and as usual the cliff crumbles. he knows he wont be hurt but they will be caught in his bad luck. tbh this is great he finaly is using his trait he felt was a weakness as an advantage

the wau thank them one in a cloak is a girl (acha) and the other a boy acha is a golden haired wau. in this version they were looking for herbs to help their sick parents not water.


  *"I think probably that these children are descendants of dense settlers, perhaps they are kind of naturalist"
  "Naturalists?"
    "People who refuse to rebuild civilization and try to live on their own and self-sufficient lives, this is a place that no one enters, and it is not worth much to develop, but theres enough for people to live It's environment. "


like in dual!

they help them pick the herbs even though reinforcements are on the way

* the reinforcements arga, ban, and cheika meet up to decide how to go after them they want both acha and seina. kirche takes the waus and they split up


* Clay stared at the monitor scanning the secret area. It filters data and chooses things that are likely to be interesting.
  "...... HOW? PKW ... the Wave that permeates and damages Light Hawk Wings, there have been rumors before that an Imperial ship was sunk ..."
   However his interigue soon died down and Clay resumed scanning the data again.
googleese  "This is a thing that can be invalidated by using Light Hawk Wings with two or by using Light Hawk Wings together with vibration shield.When it is necessary to have a planet scale facility to generate this wave in the first place, Imperial As for ship 's weapon? Well, if you use the technique of, it is easy to miniaturize, but already Jurai knows the existence of that weapon, you must have a manuke who eats the same hand twice. , It is a shocking thing because it puts such things as disposable in a safe for later life's majority "

*arga comes across a golden haired adult wau it is kirche she used the data from erma and amane together tocreate a decoy he chases her and she gets away

*seina is called to by the wau kids who are hiding he asks how far it is to their village and its like 6 hours by foot but they show him a hidden transfer pad

*they make it back to the vilalge the boys name is kusuri. the kids get spanked

"For us also, Acha's mother is an important friend and a holy person Because she is the shrine maiden of the statue. we can not let her die. "
  "The shrine maiden of the statue ...?"
The village elder comes just like in the anime
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (now up to book 12)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 28, 2017, 10:47:56 AM
*  "It was frustrating to find out, but the two young people who were chasing the wau seemed to have been killed by YamadaSeina ...

awww yeah seina str8 up murdered someone finaly    

the pirate breifs tarrant on the other wau they found and he is like you idiot that was clearly a decoy. did you catch it? "no it dissapeared" he rememebers when kirche transformed out of nb.  "you idiot that was seina's nb . do a scan in the area it vanished. we have to find it"


* "How about you, Kashak, how are you feeling?"
   A woman called Kashak is a golden woman like Acha, but her brown hair mixes in some places and overall it feels a bit dull. Still it is beautiful in a dimly lit room and it shines a little from the light.
  "... ... Yes, thanks to medicine I feel alot better"

So kashak is acha's mom

she gives the ok for acha to becom
e a shrine maiden i think and they do a ceremony for her and dress her up


later that night acha comes out in her shrine maden garb does a dance they ask seina if he enjoyed it he says yes and there like good then the contract betweent he shrine maiden and this brave man has been sealed. seina is confused but acha is happy. pretty sure he just accidently got a new waifu

*back at the kuramitsu mansion all the girls seto scouts n all take to the computer to analise data
there was a secret tracker put on airi's ship by her staff incase she ran away from the pressure of her job AHAHA.

airi and mikami were secretly watching them work

Airi ws shocked that her secretary corps and engineering technicians collaborated and attached a tracer to her ship

the same thing happens where they notice anomonlies in the flight data and they figure out where seina is


Kirche is found and tarrant is told that the gp knows where they are

in the wau village the ground begins to shake and seina telsl everyone to evacuate they go to the room with zinv as giant spider mechs come after them

*  "It's been a long time, Kirche. I am glad to see you again."

--
*seina gets in zinv 


  "Good, ZINV"
  "Who IS THAT?"
   A human voice suddenly came in the cockpit. However, he could not find a figure to go with the voice

"oh My ... Do you understand me? "
   It was a slightly flat way of talking without intonation, but it was clearly Japanese.

  "Who are you? Where are you?"
   seina resonded in japanise
the voice makes him feel nostalgic

  "I am within ZINV"
   A sphere on the floor in the front glows, and a girl comes up from there.
  "Are you ... ... D?"

The last words he said he said unconsciously. There was no concious part of Seina to even to say those words. Half of her bright youn face was hidden by her hair. her skin is pure white almost transparent, she is pretty child like a doll.


  "i was Sleeping alone here.... i do not have my personal data with me"
  "Personal data? Are you an ai"
  "I am doing an astral link with my original.  (hard to figure out how to fix this part) But since she died, I can say it as an original. "
  "Astral link? are you a program with an Astral?"
  "Yes"
  * It was a bit unexpected, but if it is advanced personal data, it is her personality. Familiarity springs up, smiles unexpectedly spill.

  "Sorry. I was glad to see that person for the first time in the long time. "
"
the D ai links to the original D's astral and gains her soul more or less and begins to smile, she says she is glad to see kazuki more or less after such a long time.


*What are you called in this era? "
  "Yamada Seina, and you?"
  "Have you called my name already? "
  "eh?"
  "I was unconscious. My name is D "
  "D, nice to meet you D"

"  "Yes. Now start ZINV"  "put you Hands on the control ball"

 he Put both hands on the sphere immediately by the direction of D. Because it closely resembles the system which Kamidake also uses, he immediately understood.
  "!?"
   A basic control method was instantly installed into his brain.

* "Okay, what is ... ... this smell!"
   Seina suddenly frowned.
   It was not inside the cockpit, but from the outside of the dome. And it was different from an odor. But Seina couldnot find an appropriate word other than expressing it as so.
  "It is human malice. The crime worn by the pitate. But be careful. Do not be swallowed by it "

*  " are You, there? "
   At the same time that the statue started to move, Mikagami suddenly lost restlessness and began to vigorously emit nerve light.
  "What's wrong, what's wrong, Mikagami?"

the mikagami's tree begins freaking out from zinvs awakening

*""That is ... ... The huge humanoid weapon of Konsolei! Why is there such a thing in this place?"

tarrant on seeing zinv..  konsolei is probably a mistranslation by google not sure what it is yet

"  "There is little information to judge from the situation ... .... I think that it is no doubt that it is a humanoid weapon of Konnosu. " yeah definately a mistranslation


  "Doctor Clay, were you looking at the previous one?"
   I looked at the other side of the monitor and asked clay to get caught.
  "It resembles a humanoid weapon of the criminal, but it is a completely different thing"
  "Why can you say that?"
  "There is considerable aged deterioration in the armor. Although it is impossible to specify a detailed age, millions to hundreds of millions years have passed. From here it is speculation of かも, it may be one of the things that became the founder of humanoid weapons of Konjis, the heritage of the prehistoric civilization. Moreover, there is a high possibility that Yamada Seina is on board. "


.    

*  (There is no doubt there is Tarrant)
   To Seina, that malice was experienced many times. It is the first time in the form of smell, but it's definitely that of Tarrant.

*  "D, can you break into an enemy base computer?"
  "The basic system is the same, so probably"


*  "D, Access the Position of Kamidake and Fuku !"
  "roger that!"
   ─── No!
  "I have had to stop acess."
   D says happily.
  "What, what's wrong?"
  "I was stopped by Mr. Mitsuki."
  "Mitsuki, what are you saying!"
  "Yamada Seina! "
   And then Tarrant was reflected on the monitor ......,
  "Kirche!! ... ...  he captured her after all"
   Before Tarrant was the restrained Kirche.


he tells seina to give himself up and he not kill fuku and kirche but jsut keep them imprisoned.

seina gives himself up because tarrant doesnt know d exits he also has d hide acha in zinv

*  "It's been a long time,!"
   Tarrant saw the face of Seina and hit him him hard in the stomach
  "Good!"
   Seina fell down holding his belly. seina bleeds from the mouth

  "I found something quite interesting...."
  "Wau's ... ... buried in the ground"


* Tarrant pulled the gun suddenly and fired for Kirche it hit her in the face

kirche is fine since she is nb but he wanted to see the look on seina's face

"I'm not killing her, I'm just playing with my little toy. Originally her body is an NB, she cant feel pain, unlike them."
   The monitors showed Fuku who was frozen for hours and clones that were frightened, and there was a dissected clone.

*tarant pulls out a knife

"Now Kirche. cut off one of seina yamada's fingerswith this"
  "If that is what you want me to do then just Kill me ! I can not do such a thing!"
  "but then he would have sacrficed him self for nothing, what if i told you I'd extend his life for one day in exchange for one finger?"
  "eh!?"
   Kirche unexpectedly saw Seina's face, but immediately shook her head.
  "No, ... ..."
  "Kirche, please."
   Seina quietly said, he saw the clones on the monitor. If Kirche refused, the clones will be killed. Of course if Seina's life disappeared there was no guarantee of Kirches. But at least they could buy some time.


Kirche picked up a knife thrown in front of her. .Tears from Kirche 's eyes are falling  in apology. The expression of Seina looking at her is calm. But that was not much fun for Tarrant.
  "How do you feel being hurt by the hands of loved ones?"
   he provoked Seina
  "you are a devil"

kirche goes to do it stikes the blade down and then stop milimiters away from his hand and shuts down and turns back into nb

tarrant calls her a god damn piece of shit more or less but then his base starts to tremmor

  "What's wrong? What's going on?"
  "Tarrant,  the Kamidake has started up! "

  "What did you do! YamadaSeina Aaaaaaaaaa!"

tarrant aims his gun at seina and fires but seina is teleported into the cockpit of zinv


*However, there is no answer of D although there is Acha which was time-frozen.
    "D, Where are you !?"
   he touched the control ball, but there was no reaction. But  ZINV knew what to do, he jumped to the central large hangar and headed to the terminal room where Clay was.
   VINIYIN! ZINV slowly thrusts his left hand into the wall. It's as if you put your hands in the water. Ultra vibrations caused the wall to melt or collapse like sand, then when he took out the hand, there were three Fuku clones on the palm.

*clay gets paid by kirche from tarrants money account and he runs off in the hoy stork


  * The three Cabbits, which were transferred from the jewels in zinvs chest, dropped on Seina's head one after another. One jumped onto the console in front of Seina 's eyes, one caught on the shoulder of Seina and the other scoured to the opposite shoulder.

they miah at him he doesnt understand then d come sup on a moniter after one presses a button

"D where where you?"
  "ill tell you the details later. Mr. Fuku is over there. "
The will of ZINV and Seina was synchronized, and it instantaneously moved to the place where Fuku was.

fuku is transfered abord    

D, do you know where Kirche is?
she is right in front of you just like me
right in front of me?

the cabbit raises its paw
the other one smiles



-------
  "I also moved Kirche's data to the clone. That's why NB is over there. "

seina remembers kirche stopping like a puppet whos threads had been cut

*tarrant trys to escape in the daedelos zinv tries to fight it but is very deteriorated the kamidake has to defend it then it synchs with zinv like it did with mizuki and the light hawk wings activate

*"he can not forgive the missery caused by Tarrant any more. Seina has twice tasted the fear of death thanks to Tarrant. Considering the people who were killed feeling that fear, he could no longer accept it. Seina is not a saint nor a kid anymore."

seina resolves to kill shank.




" (Dr. Clay said that it might be the founder of the humanoids of Konnai)"
tarrant rememebers what clay said and remembers that it has a gravity bullet weapon system he commands his ship to jump away

  "Tarrant-sama! im Sensing the gravitational shocks of someone jumping out near the satellite orbit. Its  the GP army. "
  "Open up personal communications. hurry!"
  "What on Earth is going on ?!"
    "attack the ground with all the ships right away! Otherwise were all dead."



zinv regenerates and the kamidake breaks down to its core and fuzes with zinv
   A hexagonal geometric pattern emerges on the body surface of ZINV.



* Fuku and the clones are looking up at seina as the ship shake. , Seina put his hand on the control ball.
  "!!"
   It was as if electricity ran through his body. Rather  saying he felt suddenly awake was more accurate.
  "... Oh, I understand, I know everything, after a long time, what are we ... ok, yeah."
   Tears fell from the eyes of Seina. As the control ball responds, the beautiful light of the seven colors violently danced.

Kara Yoichi the guy tarrant told to attack the planet watches as zinv launches a microblack hole destroying tarrants ship

they prepair to fire but they get the tripple z notification. they dont stand down and prepair to fire

the daedelos jumps and the miki cabbit clone finaly speaks  seina understands
one of the light hawk wings matter converts around the arm of zinv who who thrust his arm into subspace and pulls out the daedelos   


airi confronts the girls then they jump off to meet up with seto at the wau planet they ind the ZZZ already activated but it isn't seto's .

mikami confronts taima and he gives himself up after a lecture from her and retires himself from all positions


as kara prepairs to attack he recieves the news that minami is the new head of the kuramitsus and that taima has retired, they call off their attack

-------

in the the mikagami zinv is stored and seto looks over it trying to figure it out

*"Oh, Seina ... ... It may be my imagination, but ... it seems that there are four Fukus on the sofa there?"

Seina explains there clones
amane is like well for clones they sure dont act like children

oh that's because kirche is in there and d an ai from zinv is in one of them...

i dont know what kirche is doing in there i saw her on tv alot and honestly im confused why she was in my nb
both kiriko and seto look away non challantly

well who is the third
i dont know.
they activate a terminal to fuku to find out and it shows miki is the third clone

seina is confused he asks her whats going on he thought she was dead.
miki explains that after tarant killed her she figured out she was an ai and tried to escape to nb but kirche was already three so she went and messed with tarrant

  "Hey Miki, was it by anychance Dr. Clay who moved your data to the clone?"
   Seto asked miki

"if you pay him that man will do anything"
  "I see"
   Seto made a wry smile without hesitation.


they bring up acha and they go back to the planet to re turn her and are told that as a shrine maiden she is now bound to seina and cant live with them anymore

the elder reveals that he actualy was bioenhanced  and knew really what was going on.
he wants acha to join the academy and go to school not live there.

theres alot more to this i dont feel like summerising.

seina agrees to take acha

d explains to seto all the technical stuff of how she communicated with kirche and d and got them in the boddies.

she also mentions she spoke japanise in highspeed language knowing they would understand but tarrant wouldnt be abel to figure it out if he figured out they were talking in that way...

she mentions that japanise on seina's planet is mostly the same with a few differences from kazukis

  "Well, is that the language of the prehistoric civilization?"
   Seto who had been silent until that time asked

ZINV and my original are before that by tens of thousands of years.
i think is what she says.

blah blah blah they explain alot of technical minutia... i dont care to go into


*  "Oh no, Mitsuki is still a tsundere like always"
  "Who's tsundere! Besides, it is not mitsuki, its Miki!

* Looking up at the Kiriko and looking at the eyes The eyes of Acha are the same as Fuku. " acha is probably a yayoi type... obviously she is blond. why didnt i see that... all the yayois are blond or white haired

*miki asks to talk to seto alone and asks if her dad decoded the mail she sent him
yes... and it was i who stopped him from going after you.
miki is ok with that but she asks a favor from seto
"i want you to introduce me to washu"
ings
seto thinks abotu it a bti and launches a moniter and washu
decides to just come in person.
"Thank you for waiting ♡" washu appeared through a long distance transfer gate.

... Well, why did you call me!?"
"Hurry, time is money, so let's get into the subject quickly, Miki · Steinbeck"
  "...... Huh. Actually I thought I'd give you this information. "

"I found this in Tarrant's highest memory area. I could not confirm whether there was a backup, but I quarantined it, and made sure clay didnt see it. " i may be wrong on this if she said but clay also managed to see it it means this data is the PKW data.

washu is happy with what she gives her and grants her a request in return
 miki asks for her to make her father her aprentice.

*Washu took out the ball type personal scan "Mamaru Kimi (Small)" from the bosom and put it on the head of the Miki clone.

we all know what this is and now we know its name... i think... its that ball she uses to analyse ppl

  "I'd like to investigate to what extent Fuku's been cloned. Please cooperate a little."
And in a few minutes "Mamaru kun (Small)" displayed the data.

*washu brings up that she cant move the cabbits to a new body for some complex reason it might go wrong.

   "Well, that ... ... then I will stay like this for the rest of my life ...? "
   Truly Miki seems to have a lot of shock.
  "It's pretty cute though,"

*The picture that Washu showed is of Ryo-Ohki. There was Ryo-Ohki transforming from human type to Cabbit from Cabbit to human type there.
  "This is ... Fuku-chan, isn't it? "
  "Fuku's older sister, Ryo-Ohki"
  "Do you turn it into a person? "
  "if i do to you what i did you her it you can be in the form of Miki · Steinbeck , of course that way your, memories and astral remains the same, as well having all functions  of a normal women Its even possible to lay birth to a child ♡ "

its un clear but she tells her that hiroshi is working under airi currently then offers her this so this might be her couter offer or a secondary payment for the data.

----

miki's father hiroshi panics over how he is going to talk to miki when he see's her again, he has to explain what she is. raireza calms him down tennyo and her bf are also there

the kamidake and zinv are transfered in from the dialoge it seems that washu has finaly announced her survival and announced she make the kamidake

since zinv has something like a royal tree in it and since d has an ai it is considered to have its own rights as a person

  "Ah! Then that two people may be indigenous people, and at least they have interplanetary navigation capability ..."


"  In other words, if a planet that is in a non-invasive zone and if ZINV and D assert their territorial rights, they will have priority over the territory. Moreover, if you have interplanet navigation capability, it is highly possible that the entire solar system will be recognized as its scope of their territory. In addition to defending against Tarrant,  defense of the space is also possible. Of course, since it is a simple rider, it is impossible to actually defeat a vast space, but if you go to the offensive side, you will manipulate Microblack hole , and from the insane knowledge that thrusts hands into numerous super weapons, super space, It is possible to destroy enemy's main star. It does not fix it, it has sufficient deterrence power, it means that it is an independent country. And if D and ZINV decided Seina as the master, Seina would be, as it were, entering his country, so to speak."

so because there so ancient and their recognised as people zinv and d have basicly a free pass politicly to go anywhere peacefully and they have the weapons capibility greater then most countries to the point they could destroy whole stars so in a way they are an independant country and with seina recognised as their master if seina travels a board them it is tantamount to him residing in his own one man nation.

*hiroshi meets up with miki she crys *as a cabbit* he comforts her and then he checks the cabbits sex to make sure its right and  she scratches him and he yells

*  "The two pillars that are the first grandfathers, one pillar of which is left behind, it surely appears before it" the 4 seto scouts talk crypticly of zinv and hint at himiko

*in the afterword we get to see how miki's perception of thigs change beign stuck in cabbit form. she kind of likes it she doesnt have to wear clothes keep up with fashion or wear makeup and she can nap without being scolded and if she goes miah ppl smile. she thinks its a pretty neat thing.

end of 13 notes
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Eff Efferson on August 29, 2017, 04:40:06 AM
for gxp 14 see the library i am doing a quick summery translation this time... it not a direct one but its less notes more translation.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Y_Anthony_Who on September 20, 2017, 10:08:01 PM
Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooo-weeee.

Mamaru Kimi (Small) huh.

PKW's makin me wonder once again how the hell the Chobimaru got Tenchi with half a dozen Light Hawk wings. Also, talkin bout "permeating" Light Hawk Wings reminds me, what the hey was up with Z turning into light to go through Tokimi's weird hand!?


Seina killing those pukes with a cliff was awesome. Zinv, Seina, and D was awesome. Cabbits are awesome.


Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Eff Efferson on September 21, 2017, 12:52:15 AM
Quote from: Y_Anthony_Who on September 20, 2017, 10:08:01 PM
Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooo-weeee.

Mamaru Kimi (Small) huh.

PKW's makin me wonder once again how the hell the Chobimaru got Tenchi with half a dozen Light Hawk wings. Also, talkin bout "permeating" Light Hawk Wings reminds me, what the hey was up with Z turning into light to go through Tokimi's weird hand!?


Seina killing those pukes with a cliff was awesome. Zinv, Seina, and D was awesome. Cabbits are awesome.
that hard light thing has had me baffled every watch through. I only just noticed last watch that when he does that not one does he change outfits but he is breaifly wounded all over and it quickly heals and all I can wonder is jee why did tokimi make such a big deal out of such a short lasting not serious injury

btw on a scale from butter to  stale bread  how hard dis it to understand my half assed notes?
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Y_Anthony_Who on September 21, 2017, 02:27:28 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on September 21, 2017, 12:52:15 AM
btw on a scale from butter to  stale bread  how hard dis it to understand my half assed notes?

Stale butter.

Harhar, they're fine. The parts you didn't understand but posted in googlese are obviously difficult, but for the most part they're easy to follow. Though I wish we had real translations so we could get to know the new/undeveloped characters better.

BTW, maybe Tokimi was surprised because, rather than being a serious injury from which Z couldn't recover, it just hurt reeeeeeeaaaaally bad. His resolve could still be shocking in that manner, I think.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: GPOfficer767 on March 19, 2020, 08:02:10 PM
sorry if this is off topic but who is the character Quis Panta? she just got added to OVA 5.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Ricin on March 20, 2020, 02:01:07 AM
She is Seto's Mirror. She is also the "Captain of the Local Corp", an infiltrator spy/ enforcer. Has shape shifting ability. She is an interesting character but most importantly, She is the D member of the Shitty Old Haags Quartet (Tsukiko, Mikami, Quis Panta, and Mahki). Implied in the 17.08 doujin that she fucked Seina before anyone else.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 20, 2020, 02:59:48 AM
Quote from: GPOfficer767 on March 19, 2020, 08:02:10 PM
sorry if this is off topic but who is the character Quis Panta? she just got added to OVA 5.

you know how mirror servers work? seto had that but for her body soul and mind.

she was that but to seto. and then thanks to seto having a file that didnt copy over cause of having naja's memories, and seina writing things only to seina, She stopped being an identitcal mirror copy of seto and developed her own personality and existance.

both the real seto and mirror seto can become quiz panta.  they do that so that when one is out the other isnt spotted running about. but quiz panta is usualy mirror seto unless specificly implied not to be
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Nonsuch Ned on October 05, 2020, 12:23:14 PM
Translation question about vol. 13

""Doesn't that look like Saturn?"  as the other planets came into view he noticed that the solar system closely matched Earth's.
The only big difference was the difference between the third or fourth planet where people could live. Of course, if you looked closely, there were differences in each, but the size and the order of arrangement were exactly like the Earth and Mars.

About the second bolded statement: This confuses me. I found an earlier version here where you say the planets switched places in this solar system, that Dual's Earth was actually the 4th planet. But this  notes that the sizes of the 3rd and 4th planets were the same size as Earth and Mars. (And "Earth" couldn't effectively exist on a planet the size of Mars).

It occurred to me that, like on our Earth, there's the desire to colonize Mars. So, wouldn't this solar system have a "Mars" with an atmosphere?

Does the first bolded part mean that both the 3rd and 4th planets can sustain life, or just the 4th?

I looked at it and realized, he might have not actually landed on Dual's Earth after all. That planet would be Dual's Mars.
(but I've confused stuff before)
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Eff Efferson on October 08, 2020, 02:51:35 PM
Quote from: Nonsuch Ned on October 05, 2020, 12:23:14 PM
Translation question about vol. 13

""Doesn't that look like Saturn?"  as the other planets came into view he noticed that the solar system closely matched Earth's.
The only big difference was the difference between the third or fourth planet where people could live. Of course, if you looked closely, there were differences in each, but the size and the order of arrangement were exactly like the Earth and Mars.

About the second bolded statement: This confuses me. I found an earlier version here where you say the planets switched places in this solar system, that Dual's Earth was actually the 4th planet. But this  notes that the sizes of the 3rd and 4th planets were the same size as Earth and Mars. (And "Earth" couldn't effectively exist on a planet the size of Mars).

It occurred to me that, like on our Earth, there's the desire to colonize Mars. So, wouldn't this solar system have a "Mars" with an atmosphere?

Does the first bolded part mean that both the 3rd and 4th planets can sustain life, or just the 4th?

I looked at it and realized, he might have not actually landed on Dual's Earth after all. That planet would be Dual's Mars.
(but I've confused stuff before)
same
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Nonsuch Ned on October 08, 2020, 07:48:29 PM
 :question:

Not really sure what that 'same' means.

You're also confused? I have a feeling it has to be a confusing section.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Ricin on October 10, 2020, 05:02:00 PM
Quote from: Nonsuch Ned on October 05, 2020, 12:23:14 PM
Translation question about vol. 13

""Doesn't that look like Saturn?"  as the other planets came into view he noticed that the solar system closely matched Earth's.
The only big difference was the difference between the third or fourth planet where people could live. Of course, if you looked closely, there were differences in each, but the size and the order of arrangement were exactly like the Earth and Mars.

About the second bolded statement: This confuses me. I found an earlier version here where you say the planets switched places in this solar system, that Dual's Earth was actually the 4th planet. But this  notes that the sizes of the 3rd and 4th planets were the same size as Earth and Mars. (And "Earth" couldn't effectively exist on a planet the size of Mars).

It occurred to me that, like on our Earth, there's the desire to colonize Mars. So, wouldn't this solar system have a "Mars" with an atmosphere?

Does the first bolded part mean that both the 3rd and 4th planets can sustain life, or just the 4th?

I looked at it and realized, he might have not actually landed on Dual's Earth after all. That planet would be Dual's Mars.
(but I've confused stuff before)

Terraforming Mars is a strategy for long term habitation of Mars. There could simply be confusion because it could be the original Earth because it was completely stripped of resources, which is what would most likely have been used for space colonization.
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Eff Efferson on October 10, 2020, 07:12:03 PM
wasnt the area stripped of its natrual resources?
wasn't the central planet of renza completly artificial...
Title: Re: gxp read through notes (volume 6-13 working on 14)
Post by: Nonsuch Ned on October 11, 2020, 12:14:04 PM
Quote from: Ricin on October 10, 2020, 05:02:00 PM

Terraforming Mars is a strategy for long term habitation of Mars. There could simply be confusion because it could be the original Earth because it was completely stripped of resources, which is what would most likely have been used for space colonization.

Both would have been stripped of resources. But I guess Earth would have been first and then Mars would then become the new base of colonization projects. A researcher might focus on it because it would then show the most signs of civilization, after Earth was picked clean.

Kirche gives some exposition about how so much time has occurred that continental shifting would have changed the shape of the land and all buildings would have been wiped out and shifted into the ground. That would also be true of Earth.

I guess I just figure Kajishima had some reason for specifically saying they were landing on the fourth planet. Maybe he wanted to visit the third at some point too.