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Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #45 on: February 23, 2020, 05:40:38 PM »
 

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Continuing the updates through tonight. Wondering if I should do the summaries in chapter snippets (see the GXP 1 fandom entry) or just one big blurb.  :eng101:
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #46 on: February 24, 2020, 12:11:10 PM »
 

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Quick followup question: what are some of the key differences between the GXP show and the novels? I want to make sure to mention some of them in the Fandom summary updates. Thanks!
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #47 on: February 24, 2020, 04:34:58 PM »
 

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Key differences justy off the top of my head:
GXP1:
Seina encounters Radi shank when first going into space.
seina's relation to kai kiriko and tenchi is clarified.
kiriko pursues seina into space but finds herself constantly one step behind untill she hacks the system to make her self assigned as seina's immigration consultant.
Seina meets the seto scouts before  meeting ryoko balta and gets to know them rather well.
The seto scouts have different and far more fleshed out personalities from the anime.
Seina's encounter with seto breaks the mirror aspect of mirror seto because she remembers meeting him before as a child but seto doesn't
minaho and kanemitsu talk about how his wife is pregnate and the baby is minaho's if it's a boy.

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Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #48 on: February 24, 2020, 07:49:18 PM »
 

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Now granted that Seto has been active in that universe for a significant span of Earth's history, could she simply misplace Seina with all the other Yosho-lings that have sprung up?
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #49 on: February 25, 2020, 12:00:12 PM »
 

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Other things that crop up.

You see that the Renza Girls are more than attracted to Seina (Hakuren unprompted willing to protect him forever, Gyokuren asking Seina about Kiriko and being flustered by it because her ESP level insight was wrong)

Seina is shown as much smarter/more observant than your average ecchi MC, the ability to make the connection with the dorm room number and Ikkyo-san, The rotary phone on the GP ship.

Mitoto, Hakuren and Surien know Seina is hung like a horse. The Hakuren disrobing scene where Mitoto comes back and says "Oh ... He's Big!".

The concept of the Fan clubs get introduced and that Ryoko Balta is #3, (Implied Amane and Kiriko are #1 & 2)
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #50 on: February 26, 2020, 04:55:32 PM »
 

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These would be great things to include in the main GXP anime article, or the category Continuities.

Antvasima, can you double check my formatting for the newest update (GXP volume 3)? I want to know if the header labeled 'Summary' is styled correctly. Mainly, I'm seeing a green fill effect on my browser while the other volumes do not have this. Thanks in advance!
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #51 on: February 26, 2020, 09:15:54 PM »
 

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GXP 2 main differences: Kenneth and rajau explain that nb is made out of a shape shifting alloy used in cyborg porn.

Widow, the mass murderess who singlehandedly sent airi's nation into a state of collapse infiltrates the academy and comes after seina but he is not what she expects he is selfless and risks his life to save hers and she is suddenly overcome with emotions for the first time, she decides to protect him however she can so she turns herself in to be put to death, designates seina her heir and designates him as her capturer so he inherits alll her massive amounts of propert and alll the massive bounties on her. widow also encourages mikami to go after seina romanticly.

Seina is trampled and dragged into a jungle like area on his way to the dorm and encounters the rare bird which is a delicacy in the academy.
 
The selling of the picture of ryoko balta by the 3 idiots results in a cult being started, the idiots spend all the money and go into debt, the cult falls apart after being taken over by widow,

A massive outbreak of chaos happens because of seina and widow as he leaves to the city, specificly seiryo drives a massive battleship into the city to go after seina.

Raireza one of the key engenires of the gaurdian system and the rincarnation of akane yamano is introduced.

seina's personal data kiddinaps an ai celebrity news host kirche when it gets out in the network and she and seina's personal data construct form a home in Seina's NB, seina's personal data construct is isolated and captured when kirche alerts reireza to her presence.

kiriko pays for a program that removes dr.clays probes marks from seina's head for the introduction ceremony.

Kiriko and amane have drinks and talk about the seina situation one on one at kiriko's house while drinking sake drugged with nano probes that put them to sleep. this drugged sake shows up again later.

there is a flash back chapter to when kiriko was a girl, the shank guild hurled a bio weapon at japan and she learned of this by eaves dropping on her mother and seto, she suspected seina would be it's target and she was right she took it into herself to save seina and it took over her arm and started speaking to her as it took over her body, seto saved her just in the nick of time adn this is why she speaks to her hand sometimes and why she knew at a  young age that she was an alien.

 

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Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #52 on: March 01, 2020, 07:40:00 AM »
 

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Antvasima, can you double check my formatting for the newest update (GXP volume 3)? I want to know if the header labeled 'Summary' is styled correctly. Mainly, I'm seeing a green fill effect on my browser while the other volumes do not have this. Thanks in advance!
I fixed the formatting.
Please help out with improving the Tenchi Muyo wiki:

https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/Tenchi_Muyo_Wiki
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #53 on: March 01, 2020, 08:03:04 PM »
 

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Awesome, thanks both of you.  :sus:
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #54 on: March 04, 2020, 02:30:05 PM »
 

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Well just a quick follow-up ping. I want to give Antvasima a chance to describe the move process over at the Fandom pages. And as mentioned in the Shout Box, the following part of the Tenchi Fandom ( https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/Tenchi_Muyo_Continuities#Kajishima_Universe ) is getting updated with summaries for Jurai, Yosho, and Washu relatively soon. I got written permission from Seven Seas to include some juicy snippets from the mass market edition.

edit: Volume One
« Last Edit: March 04, 2020, 03:47:57 PM by WaitoKon »
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #55 on: March 05, 2020, 03:56:03 AM »
 

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Thank you for helping out.

What do you need help with?
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Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #56 on: March 05, 2020, 11:35:16 AM »
 

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Just to double check if atFandom whether the Tenchi or the VS Battle sections are getting moved to a different registration process. I read through the announce and just wondering if that messes up the existing edits.
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #57 on: March 12, 2020, 03:03:24 PM »
 

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GXP light novel summaries are mostly complete.

Still reading through Eff's posts for volumes 5, 6, 7, 11, and 12. Those might post later today, but just want to give Eff a chance to browse through the previous updates and provide feedback.
 

Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #58 on: March 13, 2020, 06:03:52 AM »
 

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GXP light novel summaries are mostly complete.

Still reading through Eff's posts for volumes 5, 6, 7, 11, and 12. Those might post later today, but just want to give Eff a chance to browse through the previous updates and provide feedback.

i'm a bit busy working on my own orignial work at the moment but ill look over it when i get the chance
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Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
« Reply #59 on: March 14, 2020, 01:12:44 PM »
 

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waito... your summaries are terribly off but I really do admite the basic skeletons you've laid out

here's what I'd change for

GXP 3

In a display of behavior reminiscent to the opening of OVA 4, Ryo-Ohki is going about the upstairs waking up the family.

Meanwhile, Tarant Shank attends a meeting via holo-image. Before him is a large gathering of pirates sharing news that the illustrious Science Academy defense capabilities are compromised, prompting him to plan a raid on the academy without the guilds permission.

Seina wakes up to start the day as he and his dorm mates get ready to attend the entrance ceremony for the very same Academy. On Television, a robotic greeter known as Kirche provides a unique welcome to the foot traffic thanks to an intelligence imbued with a soul. After the ceremony Seina meets Miki Seinbeck, A popular uperclassman who takes a liking to him.
Tsukiko, Having begged seto to send seina back to earth to become her husband and failed informs her daughter Kiriko of her plans for marriage with Seina.

Because of the chaos that the hunt for Seina the previous night caused, Seina can't undergo bio-enhancement but has to attend nothing but Phisical Education classes led by Seiryo Tennan who uses this to torture him.  Kiriko refuses to step in, but Miki does, eventually he is whisked away in a medical capsule and wakes up in a lab, where he meets Miki's father, Hiroshi Manada, who's attempted experiments on seina lead to an explosion of his lab.

Later the following day, Seina catches up with Kiriko after she has finished repairing the Academy computer systems to normal. They spend time looking out at the Academy's harbor, She is adamant about his return to Earth, but Seina has developed a strong opinion on the matter: he is staying. Seina proceeds to undergo bio-enhancement.
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