Discuss The Ouroboros Saga

[Zigra]

What the title says. A bit of an explanation for those of you who have read my other stories (what few of you have)- this story is something of a revision and/or expansion of my earlier story "Sasami's Heart". It is also a direct follow up to my OAV 3 story

Anyway, discuss away.

[Gaston]

I prefer the other version so far. 

[جبريل 無道]

I wish there was a garbage disposal for literature because then I'd knew where to put your stories.  Oh wait, it's called the shredder!  And that's where I put them after print them out and edit them with red ink.  I mean bathe them in some small animal's blood.  Maybe Gaston's.

http://www.youtube.com/v/OlQ6XetBNm0

[جبريل 無道]

I also have to ask how many more times you're going to make Tenchi into a loser?

[جبريل 無道]

Mr Rogers read this fic and comments:


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[جبريل 無道]

If I said this is the worst garbage I have ever read, I think it would be an understatement of your achievement.




http://www.youtube.com/v/wDajqW561KM

[antvasima]

Maybe you should stop reading it Jibril? Did you ever try out my story? I don't remember.

[جبريل 無道]

Maybe you should stop reading it Jibril?

I want too but Ziggy makes me;.;  I can't count the tears I cried enduring this mental torture.

[antvasima]

Okay. As long as you're still friends. It doesn't seem to be my cup of tea either. I have turned mad from reading plenty of other stories myself though, so maybe I'm a hypocrite? For example, I gave a scathing review to "The Key To A Successful Interview".

[جبريل 無道]

Okay. As long as you're still friends.

Not really.  For me, a friendship needs to share some baseline values and he and I do not.

[جبريل 無道]

Reading more of this story....

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[Zigra]

Yup, I've decided to begin a complete re-write of this story, and I've just posted the new version of the prologue.

[Zigra]

So begins the next installment of the Saga. This one is a bit unusual, as it is a loose remake of an existing story. This installment is heavily inspired by the Forgotten Realms novel "Son of Thunder" by Murray J.D. Leeder. The reason this fic draws so much inspiration from that novel is because when I discovered and read the novel, I noted some striking similarities between story elements in that book and some things I wanted to do in an Ouroboros story of my own. So, I figured I might as well just write a sort of loose remake of that book since it was so similar to what I wanted to do anyway.