This thread is for discussing my fanfic project, which is basically my own retelling of OAV 3. As you can see from the prologue, it's going to be very different from the canon OAV 3.
Why does it suck so much?
QuoteShe was expecting Sasami to tell her that she had a crush on that Tenchi boy, as Misaki claimed Sasami did. However, this threw Kiyone for a loop. Though, Kiyone realized, she shouldn't really be surprised that Sasami loves women...
Why aren't you burning in the second lowest circle of hell right now? (The lowest circle is being forced to read this fic.)
Quote from: جبريل 無道 on October 30, 2013, 04:27:25 AM
Why aren't you burning in the second lowest circle of hell right now? (The lowest circle is being forced to read this fic.)
Because I happen to run that place ^_^
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Jibril, don't commit suicide please.
Quote from: Gaston on November 24, 2013, 07:25:02 PM
Jibril, don't commit suicide please.
I can't help it if I keep reading Ziggy fics.
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In honor of your latest chapter:
http://www.youtube.com/v/V0qhsUxifVQ
I've begun a massive re-write of my OAV 3 story. The prologue and first chapter have been posted. This re-write will be quite different from the old version, as the last part of chapter 1 will show.
I'm also planning an equally massive re-write of the Ouroboros story, which will come after I've finished OAV 3.
Oh, I should point out in this latest chapter that the snakehead hair pieces that Tsunami wears are actually a concept created by Jibril. Credit where credit is due.
You didn't credit my idea of pairing Sailor Uranus with Misato. :sotw:
Quote from: Gaston on October 08, 2014, 11:59:37 AM
You didn't credit my idea of pairing Sailor Uranus with Misato. :sotw:
Umm, sorry about that. But, while that is an oversight on my part, this situation is a bit different. Whereas your idea of paring Haruka and Misato was something you merely suggested to me, Jibril's concept of the snakehead hair pieces are something that she created for her own stories that I'm borrowing for mine. I wanted to give her credit so that it's not total plagiarism.
New chapter is up, as well as a more appropriate title change for the story.
Just made a huge revision for chapter 7. It was a pain in the ass to do, but I think the end result is an improvement and also fits much better with where I wanted to take this fic series in the future. One more chapter for Maternity to go.
Well, there's the final chapter to this particular story. I threw you guys a bit of a curveball with that ending, didn't I? Yeah, I'm kinda surprised at it as well, seeing as I didn't come up with the idea for that ending until just a few days ago. I hope it works out to people's liking.
Also, I know some El Hazard fans might call me out on how this ending contradicts the beginning of EH, particularly how Ifurita is still suppose to be in stasis at the beginning of EH. Well, I won't give any spoilers right now, but I do have a rough idea of how to fill in that little hole that I hope works out.
Finally, I should give Jibril some credit at helping me write one small part of this chapter. Seeing as I've never seen somebody with Aeka's hairstyle before, I had difficulty finding the words to describe it, and Jibril helped with that.