Useless Tenchi

The Vault => Public Library => Topic started by: Eff Efferson on January 19, 2020, 09:20:07 AM

Title: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 19, 2020, 09:20:07 AM
Now that i've finished proofreading and translating the first 15 GXP novels It's time we got around to summerizing them for people who don't want to read that much text...

I'm working on a big video series project that actually summerizes the entire universe and it's lore in chronological order to catch up people with OVA 5 and everything leading up to it.
If anyone wants to help It would be greatly appreaciated. even summerizing an episode of one of the shows helps immensely.

edit: I didn't expect this to be so long but meh it's an epic. so I'm compiling it on my site into sections

https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/the-kajishimaverse-summerized.html


anyways all I have for now:
Part 1 Cosmogony:
[spoiler]At the dawn of cosmogony 3 Omnipotent being called the choushin, or Top Goddesses are created one after the other, First is Washu, Then Tsunami, and Lastly, Tokimi. 
However they understand that their life force comes from an unknown source outside of their dimension and that their must be something above them despite how illogical that is to their supposed omniscience, The compulsion to resolve this paradox in their knowlege leads them to create sub dimensions below them in order to run a simulation to try to manifest a solution to their paradox. 

Tsunami and Washu descend to their creation to test their theory on how to manifest this thing while Tokimi stays ascended and creates chaos to try to make it appear.
Washu plans to try to learn everything she can from step 1 to see if she can find a solution.
Tsunami meanwile plans to tries to birth a solution genetically.


Also some form of Akashic records exist in the form of an extra dimensional thing called the Astral Sea which is separate from the Choushin. It's nature is never fully clarified.
 
So TLDR, The trimurti, or primal trio, realized the Brahman must exist and created the tree of life to force it out of hiding.
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Part 2 The Bioroid War:
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A bit over 100,000 years before DUAL! Parallel Trouble Adventure a story happened which can be found in the goodbye 21st century doujin.
 

As life progressed and advanced in their experiment eventually an ancient and advanced civilization, The galaxy's oldest in fact, managed to stumble upon a giant 3 dimensional Washu floating in space.
She was busy trying to shrink down when they found her as she had manifested far too large. They sealed her to keep her from regaining consciousness and took the three jewels that contained her power as a goddess.

They managed to make 3 bioroid clones of her. B1 B2 and B3. They were combat androids intended for War. Each was given a jewel. B3's jewel should have been in her left wrist but was misplaced into her chest on accident, this allowed her to gain free will.
She escaped from the civilization that created her and ran away into space where she befriended a boy who helped hide her. The other two were sent after her to destroy her.

B3 was found by B2 and after a battle B2 died. But B3 was close to death already and B1 came and finished her off.
Acquiring all 3 gems, B1 tried to kill Washu, but b3's dying scream alerted Tsunami's physical self and she arrived and finished off B1.
 
Those who were left were given the first line of Royal tree seeds by Tsunami.
However enemy nations found out about the bioroids from their pursuit of b3 and this caused interstellar war to break out.
This war drove most of the civilizations that were around in the era either to extinction or an unrecoverable decline. This was the end of the Pre-great historic Civilization era.
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Part 3 Stranded on earth:
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The next entry in the timeline comes from Heseiban 3

Those who had received the royal tree seeds from Tsunami fled from the war and the inhabited parts of space to find a new place to live. They went into cryo sleep as the ship searched for a new place,
 Near Earth an incident occurred that fried most of their engines and power generators and killed all their engineers. They settled on earth and built monolithic cities and used the humanoids they found there for labor.

They built giant mechs for construction because it caused the humans to worship and fear them and they cross bred with them and bred the humans to be more intelligent. How ever human men had a tendency to be able to use the machines with far too much power making them very dangerous so they built in a limiter to keep men from operating them. They feared the humans rebelling and them out, but they couldn't maintain their civilization without them.

Ultimately a schism broke out among the aliens, some wanted to go back to a sterile technological existence, the other side wanted to go back to a simple naturalist lifestyle. Many were killed or injured in the fights that broke out between the two including a woman who we only know as D.
 D had to be revived through technological means, but she was on the naturalist side.
Her real body had to be preserved in the core computer of the mother ship. Finally the leader of naturalists had enough and decided to unleash the ultimate weapon ZINV on the other side.

D objected and went and stole ZINV and brought it in a smaller ship to meet with the mother ship to reconcile with the science faction but instead they released HIMC a robot designed to take out the naturalist side.
The fight between the two robots killed everyone of the aliens but D. She sealed the mother ship herself, the smaller ship, and Zinv and went into stasis.

Note: The Mechs ZINV and HIMC appear to be named after Japanese occult historical figures Emporer Jinmu and Shaman princess Himiko respectively and this section, Dual and Evangelion to which Dual is thought to be a copy both borrow themes from Annunaki and similarly related occult Esoterica.
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Part 10:Meanwhile back on Airai
[spoiler]Airi was pregnant with Minaho when she arrived back on Airai.
Her father faced ridicule for his own daughter being pregnant out of wedlock and her arranged marriage fell apart. She faced multiple attempts to kill her child over the years but much of what happened on Airai is never fully disclosed.
 

What we do know it that shortly after Minaho was born, A dangerous mass murderess named widow arrived and manipulated the discord that was caused due to Airi's pregnancy.
Widow is a psychopath who has bad luck that only effects others and she can drive the collective consciousness of those around her into a chaotic downward spiral, especially through the use of cult mentality.


She made a disaster break out among the entire country and it was wiped out, many went mysteriously missing, there was some kind of mass suicide event and Airi's father was taken out in the ensuing chaos. Thanks to her aunt Keira, Airi barely managed to make it to the academy where she took refuge.

While she was at the academy the followers of the Airain religion that were left tried to kill her and Minaho, Eventually and through experiments sometimes conducted on Minaho,
she managed to create some impressive technology and managed to (Assumably with Seto's help) rise to the top political position at the academy. Once there she abused her power to take out everyone who opposed her.


Eventually Yosho called Kanemitsu and Airi was their to witness it, Seto found out about Yosho's location as well this way. The two began seeing each other again and some of Yosho's descendants began coming into space through Seto.
under the guise of being Funaho's sister's descendants. Somehow Funaho never caught on that they were Yosho's children. [/spoiler]

OVA 4 summary:
[spoiler]3 months after OVA 3 in October While Seina is recovering from bioenhancement and the death of Miki, Nobuyuki goes and marries Rea.
The family gathers together for the festivities, but as usual it's used for political business too. Tenchi finally meets his mother's sister whom reminds him of her and she helps him get over the death of his mother and resolve the conflict in his mind between the mother he knew and the mother everyone else knew.

Minaho also brings with her some Juraian silk, which has a code in it saying who it's for, Ayeka reads the fabric and sees that in fact, she has been declared as Tenchi's fiance instead of Yosho's by the fabric which is intended to be used to make formal dresses. This possibly extends to all of the girls.
 

Meanwhile Minaho uses the trip to co-ordinate the delivery of Widows astral to Washu, this is her soul for lack of a better word, Washu uses it to make Fuku as a gift for Seina as per Widow's final wishes. 

 

Tenchi finds out from Minaho that his father and grandfather are faking their age and that he will have to as well eventually if he wants to keep living on earth and that there's a possibility he might have to leave Earth someday.

 
During the pre wedding party Rea reveals to the Masaki's that she is actually a bioroid from the parallel world of Geminar, she was sent back to have a child to send back to save the planet fro Gaia, a runaway overpowered mech, she had thought everyone already knew this but Kiyone never told anyone before she died.
Rea and Nobuyuki get married the next day. Over the next few years the family decides on, their child, Kenshi's fate.
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Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 24, 2020, 02:06:35 PM
GXP 13 Summary:
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Seina arrives at the original Earth from Dual's Solar System where the Hoystoke has taken Fuku and the Kamidake to the planet Equivalent to mars which is in an off limits sector of space because of it's borders and lack of useful resources. The area is specualted to be the origin of the Great prehistoric civilization. Kirche speculates that the system may be lacking in evidence of civilization and resources because they were simply all recycled to make the seed project.

Dr.Clay is shown to his lab in Tarrant's hideout after failing to get full access to the computer systems in the base. Instead the GP army has to bring him more equipment. He explains to tarrant that keeping Fuku is probably not the best course of action for Tarrant who has cloned Fuku a few times. Tarrant Decides cabbit murder to be the best way to dispose of them.  Clay alerts the pirates to seina's concealed presence in orbit. Clay quickly sets up a fake surveillance feed and strikes a deal for the access code with Miki who he noticed hiding in the computer system. Meanwhile The girls are formally arrested by Misao.

Seina is attacked by pirates suddenly and has to fight them off while crash landing to the planet below. When he lands D is awoken from her sleep and gets the news that everyone of Kazuki's Harem has returned to the planet. Miki causes tarrant's base to malfunction destroying tons of equipment, this distracts the pirates as she works to get transferred into a clone cabbit body.
 
The girls are unexpectedly taken to the kuramitsu's academy estate to be held on house arrest where they find they have been left in a room with access to super computers with highest level of security clearance. 

Seina and Kirche spot two Wau children being hunted by pirates and they go to rescue them. Seina stands on a cliff ahead of the pirates to use his powers. it obviously collapses underneath killing the pirates.
He checks on the two waus. one is a common male wau the other is a female with golden hair. They tell him that their parents are in a cave and they had to find healing herbs to save their mother but they haven't found them yet. This trope just never gets old for Kajishima. but the pirates approach so kirche hurries and gathers the herbs and then she stays behind to distract the pirates while Seina takes the kids.

Kirche transforms into the wau girl and tries to kill the pirates looney tunes style with a bolder, they dodge it and realize going after her is a trap, but one of them goes after her anyways cause he wants money.

 Dr. Clay, having gotten full access to tarrant's network from Miki finds out about The PKW, The wave that took out the original J by bypassing and destroying it's light hawk wings. Clay isn't impressed by this or any other data he finds so he demands more from Miki. So Miki drains tarrant's bank account and gives it to Clay.
 
The Wau children,Kusuro and Acha, take seina through a tunnel system to get to their hidden settlement and on the way he learns that the pirates on the planet are Tarrant Shank's men and that the tunnel system has an exit that leads outside their base. When they get to the village Seina is thanked for getting herbs for acha's mom who is the shrine maiden to the village Idol, and the village elder declares Seina to be a prophesied hero. They throw him a welcome party, Meanwhile Trarrant's men excavate seina's buried ship and decide to destroy it.

The three pirates report about the wau chase back to tarrant who realizes they were chasing seina's NB and orders a scan of the area for it. Acha's mother kachak recovers and decides that since the idol has awoken it's time for Acha to take her place as shrine maiden. Kusuro, who has a crush on Acha says his goodbyes to acha and gives her an aquamarine.

The village throws a party for Seina and the young village women try to get some hero sauce out of him, but he manages to keep them off of him.
Acha does a dance formalizing her becoming a shrine maiden, and Seina accidentally ends up participating in a way that binds her to him as the Hero of legend so he's stuck with her now forever.

The girls find out where seina went and they escape Misao's home and go to find seina, Seto finds out but is secretly already hiding in the solar system waiting for them because she can't act on her own.
 
 The pirates attack the village and everyone evacuates into what appears to be a buried ship under the village. Kashak has to stay and kusuro stays with her. They evacuate to the idol's shrine and the pirates try to dig down into the ship to get them. in a last ditch effort the villagers "sacrifice seina and acha" to the idol by throwing him on a transfer pad that warps him into the idol.

The pirates attack kashak and kusuro and threaten to kill kusuro, Kashak reacts by holding one of the pirates at knife point When they don't let kusuru go she slits his neck open killing him and his brother goes to go after her when suddenly the village idol wakes up.... and he listens in horror as it proceeds to murder all of them.
 
Seina finds himself in the IDOL and notices that inside it seems to have a royal tree. Acha is time frozen by it.
 
"Good, ZINV." he hears a womans voice say in japanise.  "Is that you ... ... D?" he says unconsciously "It is just my AI, my personal data is absent...What are you called in this era?"
"Seina Yamada and you?"
"You have called me by my name already..."

After a billion years Kazuki, now called seina yamada is reunited with Zinv and D, but shortly after he senses the malice of the pirates and goes on a murderous rampage. In the blink of an eye he's viciously killed every pirate that was invading the area with zinv.

Kara Yoichi who wants to oust taima and mihoshi's father nakita from power and take their position takes the GP army and their flagship to the planet to bring equipment and get the daedelus schematics from tararant. 

The mikagami gets excited when it notices zinvs presence and Seto warns the staff of the hoystoke to evacuate the planet.
Tarrant freaks out about the rampaging mech that he thinks comes from Renza, Dr. clay lets him know that its far to old to be that and so seina is likely inside. Tarrant decides to evacuate the kamidake. Seina rushes into the base and has D hack the computer system to find fuku and the kamidake's position but she is stopped, Acording to her by Ms.Mitski her name for Mitsuki Sonada.

Tarrant communicates to the mech that if seina doesn't surrender he will kill kirche and fuku but if he dies he will keep them alive and safe.
Seina has D hide herself and acha while she keeps working on things and he leaves Zinv. Tarrant proceeds to gloat and torture Seina in front of kirche. He shoots kirche for fun and shows him the fuku clones that he has been torturing, one of which he dismembered and left dead with the rest.

He orders kirche to cut off seina's fingers in exchange for not killing a fuku clone and keeping seina alive another day. As kirche goes to cut off his fingers tarrant gets ... Excited..... but his excitement goes flaccid as kirche stops the knife just millimeters from seina's fingers and appears to leave her body. The base shakes and Tarrant is informed that the kamidake has started itself back up. As tarrant moves to shoot seina, Seina is teleported back into zinv's cockpit.

 D isn't there any more but zinv moves on it's own and reaches into the room dr clay is in and grabs the three remaining fuku clones. Dr. Clay gets his payment from miki and leaves by sneaking onto the Hoystoke. The cabbits join him in the cockpit and D comes back online.
She takes zinv to get fuku. after fuku is gotten D informs him that Kirche is in one of the clones.

he uses zinv to vaporize NB and the dead Fuku clone for safety reasons. the kamidake breaks free as tarrant launches his rebuilt deadelus. Seina decides He is going to kill tarrant and zinv heads towards his ship but a fleet comes out at him. Zinv launches a bullet which causes the ships to Compress in on themselves into a small ball destroying it the same way kiriko's father's ship was destroyed. However after using it Zinvs weapon systems cut out because they've deteriorated from age.
 
"We only have one remaining weapon ......" "What else is there?" "Dr.Sonada Always said that our last weapon is courage."
 Seina Tries to retreat but is informed that thanks to a feature Dr.Sonada programmed in the core is about eject leaving them doomed. D calmly counts down to their doom. but the ejection mechanism is broken too. The kamidake finally bursts out of the field containing it and rushes to defend ZINV. Fuku and Zinv Synchronize and deploy light hawk wings.

 Tarrant orders the ships to evacuate but the GP army arrives trapping them till tarrant informs them of the situation, They proceed to back them up. The plating of the kamidake disappears and is used by Zinv to regenerate and it fuses with zinv. The pirates stunned by the scene quit attacking. Seina puts his hand on the control ball and momentarily regains all his memories of being Kazuki.
 Naturally he realizes fuku is Yayoi, Kirche is mitsuki rara and Miki is Mitsuki Sonada and they have finally reunited after a billion years.
Tarrant tries to run.

zinv creates i micro black hole that takes out a large chunk of tarrant's fleet. Yoichi orders the GP army to fire on zinv again but The mikagami comes out of hyperspace right next to them and deploys the ZZZ. His fleet mutinies against him and surrenders.
Tarrant jumps into hyperspace.

 Zinv uses the light hawk wings to reach into hyperspace and drags the Deadelus out by hand and crushes it.
Taima is confronted by mikami, he resigns and minami is formally made head of the seiniwan elders association.
Back on the mikagami seto analyzes everything beforethey make there way back to the GP, Seina doesn't seem to know anything about the cabbits anymore and so seto gives them cartoon speech balloons so they can communicate. Everyone is surprised when the 3rd cabbit turns out to be miki who explains what happened to her.

Seina wonders where acha is and they see her on a monitor, she wants to check on her village so seto sends seina and a research / medical team down in a fancy pope-mobile.
The elder explains to seina that Acha can't return to the village because of her position as shrine maiden and the contract they made. Seina tries to convince him that the idol is just technology, but the elder actually knows this because he secretly took classes the academy offered to pirates and rural areas. he assures seina that acha wants to be there and will have a better life and education there and will be able to contact the village now that the pirates are gone.
eventually acha herself convinces him that she wants to go to the academy so he decides to quit complaining and adopt her.

D Kirche and Miki report back to Seto and the girls the fine details of what happened. D reveals to them that zinv is older then the great prehistoric civilization.
Seto then distracts the girls with news that seina is adopting Acha. The girls freak out seto sends them to talk to acha and seina and they are immediately defeated by acha's cuteness which instantly sends them into adoption mode.
 
Seto stays back and talks to miki who requested a private audience, she asks to see washu and washu comes in instantly and she presents The PKW Wave information she found at tarrants to them.
Washu offers her a favor for this. she requests her father become her apprentice but is told that he is already airi's. But she leaves it on the table. washu then examines how fuku was cloned. and asks miki if she was trying to change bodies.

Washu explains that the fuku cloned girls cant switch to human bodies without loosing their memories/personality and doing a bunch of complex things. but she lets her know that she is going to move them into proper ryo-ohki like bodies that can transform into humanoid forms.
washu assures her that it's her reward for saving fuku and not for the data and she agrees to it.

Hiroshi freaks out over how to introduce Raireza to miki while he is quarantined with the rest of airi's staff as the galaxy federation court sorts out what happened. Seina is not only innocent of everything, he is technically a hero and since zinc and D predate everyone else and they acknowledge seina as their master, he is technically the rightful owner of that entire solar system and it can potentially be declared an independent nation. Miki is reunited with hiroshi.
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GXP 14[spoiler]
Seina goes with airi to register Acha with immigration.
Hiroshi reveals that Miki was based off of tsukiko and tsukiko introduces herself to miki as her mother.
The fuku clones settle into amane's apartment.
D tells Seina about the events of Dual! and tells him that the girls surrounding him resemble the girls from kazuki's life.
Seina Calls tenchi to ask washu about that situation. Washu explains that the groups gravitate to seina to correct his probability bias.
Airi comes by to see seina and brings miki back to amane's apartment. miki reveals her relation to tsukiko. Miki finds out about raireza from airi and then dinner is served.
Seina tells airi that nb was destroyed.
 

Everyone is curious as to ho  modern food is for d and d says it's mostly the same and that she really wants curry and spaghetti.It turns out her version of curry is the same as the one on earth. Kiriko agrees to make it for her the next day.
Miki decides to tell miranda and Kaliche she survived. Kirche decides to get a disguised form so she can avoid her father.
Airi Tells neiju kiriko and ryoko that they can't live together in amane's apartment anymore because of their statuses and she also brings up that if they married seina
it wouldn't be an issue.

washu visits mikumo's grave a month after his burial; with mikami and the young boy from previous chapters who is revealed to be mikumo, she gave him a bioroid body to use.
we learn that miyuki died 10,000 years ago. mikumo and the nurse got married, washu wishes them a happy marriage.
Seina reunites with his roommates who want to break out for another night on the town but seina is called by airi to her office. from there he is taken to the mikagami
where the juraian emporer and empresseses await to tell him the results of the investigation into zinv. This includes it's history which I've already covered in section 3 and 4.

They reveal that Zinv's core is an age fixed Royal tree. We learn that the place of the B's battle to the death was actually Jurai and that tsunami gave out two seeds, one of which was zinv
They can't tell but they suspect zinv is a first generation tree, they can't tell because it's sealed in a tamper proof container.
They inform seina that since zinv is a first gen tree, he is technically a member of the royal family of jurai now and 3rd in line for the throne behind Sasami and yosho.
Because he is an outsider it means that jurai technically has 5th royal family line now.
Airi leaves the room. They reveal to seina that the evil smelling rampage is something the trees can do and that going on a rampage like that can hurt the tree and it's partner.
seto had it happen when she first went and used the triple Z and it made her comatose and gave her mental issues for a year. The trees can die from fighting and it can kill the master. (like the life sympathy feedback concept that is shown in Dual!)
It's revealed that Ryoko also experiences the same rampage mode when she works with ryo-ohi.

Seina worries about the possibility of atomic level infighting between trees happening if he is ever made emperor, he is assured that he doesn't have to be emperor in the future if he doesn't want to.

Seto wishes to speak to seina alone so everyone leaves. Kuisu panta arrives half drunk with shinju sake and turns into seto and seto turns into kuisu.
She reveals herself as Seto's body double, mirror seto, she is of a species called a mirror warrior and was made after seto used the triple z the first time.
She is supposed to be like a mirror server of seto, a synchronized copy that exists as backup. Except Seina messed up that link. When seto saw seina in masaki village as a child presumably when kiriko was attacked by the bio weapon she didn't share the memory with seto. and when seto's memories of naja emerged she didn't share those with the mirror, so now they are unsynched.
her mirror has become it's own person. but she still has to live as seto's mirror, she can't become her own independent person unless they find a special miraculous thing that no one quite knows what it is. it's only been done 4 times before.
mirror seto wants seina to take responsibility for creating her, and she asks him to give her a name. but he doesn't think of one right away and instead chooses to think about it carefully.

some day later in time D eats spaghetti and curry for breakfast and it makes Miki mad so she puts up an odor shield around her. The cabbits get bioenhanced.
Kiriko amane Neiju and ryoko sit around and think about what airi said about marriage. Kiriko struggles to forgive herself for abandoning seina on earth
amane thinks about her feelings for seina and how they first met, she calls raireza to discuss her feelings about it.
Ryoko who thinks of herself in that form as being a work persona, thinks it over and concludes that she is ok with whatever her duties call for but that it's not a romantic thing. she switches into erma who she considers to be her true self and a separate ego.
it's revealed that she has kept the two egos separate only because of her obligations as a princess of balta.
Erma in contrast gets flushed in the face and her heart flutters at the thought. acha catches her indulging in this.

Acha goes to greet neiju and wonders were miki is, Neiju explains to her the best she can what happened to miki and shows her how fuku will be able to become a humanoid in the future with a simulation, then it shows her in the future and acha has it show her future appearance.
Neiju tries on acha's shrine maiden outfit with the simulator and acha giggles because it's actually a wedding dress. neiju thinks of the future

seto washu airi and mikami convene in Washu's secret lab under amane's penthouse and go over why the 4 women groups fix his probability and why his probability is biased in the first place.
 they solved the question but decided not to disclose it right away.

Airi tells the girls what's projected for the near future in her office. Seina is called in after they are dismissed and airi takes him down to her personal quarters under her office.
 she reveals to him that its where she raised kiyone and minaho with yosho, and that its been 150 years since she had another guy down there.
she tells him that renza has made in informal request to examine zinv and some to hand it over.
she lets him know that in the event another nation tries to get hostile over seina the gp and jura will back him up but can only do so if he returns to earth and if that happens and he refuses to do so
it could draw him into a war with the federation. because of his new found status she plans to give him vip preferential treatment.

he returns to his roommates at the dorm. They discuss what they want to do for the future and why they joined the GP. seina thinks back to why he joined and concludes that it was because mirror seto said he was needed there, so he decides to stay with the gp after graduation.


Airi moves all the girls into separate apartments and gages their reactions to specific things having to do with how they feel about seina.
airi takes their responses and reports to seto. seto concludes that the girls would be down for marriage with seina.

The girls all have a pajama party to celebrate seina's graduation. Sasami gives them shinju sake as a gift. Seina and his roommates take their final roll call and decide to sneak out like they did on their first day.
at graduation seiryo shows up and everyone has a bag on their face but seina. seina's name is called last at graduation to an astounding applause.  miki also secretly is there to graduate.
everyone sets out on a wacky graduation race. the prize is a kiss and a date from Miss GP seina blows up the highway and everyone ends up crashing into the ocean.

Seina returns to earth after first leaving it two years ago. a few days earlier airi had called him and his parents to her office to announce he was going to have a political marriagebe his first official mission, they then forcibly dragged him back to earth.
The cabbit girls get to bond with seina's family on earth.
Seina's father visits him at night and has a talk with him that to calm his fears of marriage and his fears that they don't want to get married to him. his mother and sister barge in and beat him up for being oblivious to the girls feelings.

the next day he gets ready and goes to racepshi which has docked on the moon for the wedding ceremony.
Seina goes to see the brides before the ceremony and is stunned by their dresses. He finds out that they are announcing the cabbit girls existence officially to and possibly washu's survival.
an employee comes and escorts seina off to a shady secluded area, his face begins to swell up and boil  off his body akira style as he proceeds to assault seina revealing that he is actually a mostly cybernetic tarrant shank wearing some dead guys skin as a suit. he tries to cut seina up into pieces that he can send kiriko in gift boxes.
by the time airi and mikami relize that the camera feed there looking at is fake the battle is over and tarrant is stuck in emergency sealant gel and mitoto is already trying to clean up the mess thanks to seina's new nb replacement called the philosophers stone that washu made for him. seto is thrilled to capture tarrant so she can punish him.

mizune rushes to tell ringo that tarrant has been caught alive by seina but fuuka stops her however ringo already knew and is busy managing the accounting for the wedding. Seina acquires the shank guilds assets and tons more money so she was busy with doing the book keeping for that too. mizune teases ringo for not going to the wedding and otoka drags her away.
seiryo is catering the event and the daruma shows up with barry and cohen and they catch up, it turns out alan ran off with loretta the hostess girl.
acha introduces herself to seina's family. Tenchi's family is kept in a waiting room till just before the event starts yoshiko and kai go to the backrooms to tell seina that they're a couple.

Hakuren and her girls come in after them in exotic outfits and kidnap him kai and yoshiko accidentally walk in a circle and stumble upon him getting kidnapped kai assumes its some kinda bondage thing. seina gets the idea to ask washu to make a device that drops wash pans on peoples heads when they say stupid things. Later on in the series she actually does make this.
The brides come out onto the stage and they when airi signals for seina yoshiko and kai come out and report that he has been kidnapped.
The kamidake rushes after him.
The seto scouts explain that they kidnapped seina because their country is overran with pirates. everyone left at the wedding watching the chase scene unfold as alchoholic drinks are handed out.
seiryo pours her a refill and reveals that the real reason he was working the event was because her birthday was on the next day and he wanted to see her, he gives her a bouquet.

ryoko cracks up at the situation as tenchi panics and asks washu for help, washu helps by using seina's philosopher stone to broadcast video of things on his end to the wedding monitors.
everyone yells at seto for hiring the seto scouts knowing they were spies.

The scouts tie seina to gyokuren so he cant escape without hurting her/brushing up against her.
People in the wedding start to realize that miki and kirche who are supposed to be dead are on the kamidake and get confused.
amane launches an emergency plan and uses acha's cuteness to try to persuade the scouts to stop and come home.
then she sends fuku after them to plea for them to give seina back. this distracts them enough that the kamidake can get them caught in a tractor beam.
everyone starts betting on the outcome. the mothership for racepshi comes out of hyperspace in front of them both ships manage to make it into the racepshi before it jumps off.

Seto decides to turn the ruined wedding into a federation conference and to announce washu's survival.

The story flash forwards to a year later in renza, Seina asks karen if she is ok with firing on the vessel their fighting because it belongs to her nation. she's just a rebel baby and she don't care that's just how she do.
captain kamui kashuruna declares her a traitor for destroying some pirates and announces that she should prepare to face the knights of HIMC. they decide to settle things with a mech dual.
Miki bribes d with curry so she can be copilot in zinv this time. "Did you just bribe her? "" curry is justice!" a female humanoid zinv emerges from behind him and briefs him on the enemy they're facing. zinv roars and heads into battle.

the after story is kiriko's experience of the night before the wedding, her mother warns her that she needs to be careful in the future because maybe the first 3 rounds of wives will know seina well but after that it might not be so tight knit or concerned about him.  she proceeds to playfully taunt her with the idea of taking her place. but like in an encouraging way. this cheers up kiriko and she is able to get to sleep finally. When she's asleap she seriously ponders if she should re-use kiriko's wedding dress or have a new one made.
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Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on January 24, 2020, 02:06:46 PM
GXP 15:
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The seto scouts abandon seina for a bit once he is on the racepshi, he gets a call from airi who let's him know that she can't do a damn thing to help him.

she warns seina to be on his best behavior because they have no diplomatic relations with renza.airi suggests he get a drink in while he still can and mikami takes over for her

his kidnapping is being disguised as a special dispatch mission. the kamidake has to remain a secret.

Seto joins the call and says the scouts aren't fired but they have their pay cut and this counts for their paid vacation days...which they have two entire years of. she also tells seina to consult "that traitor behind you"

if he needs more details. behind him is kuisu panta who is there because she doesn't want to have to take over for seto who is taking flack for hiring the scouts.

she lets him know that she'll be there to help him out but the boundary between enemy and ally will be ambiguous for everyone while he is there. maya asks seina to come speak with her.


the girls are kept vip level prisoner in the fanciest hotel in racepshi half a planets jog away from seina.

neiju points out that zinv had free reign of space like the racepshi due to its age so ironically if they had chased seina in zinv they wouldn't be in this mess. The girls angrily speed chug cup after cup of soothing herbal tea.


Makihi comes in to check on them she informs them of the scouts real identities and names. they are princesses of 4 of the 5 countries of renza. hakuren is a first princess, karen a 3rd suiren a 5th, gyokuen is supposed to be the queen of her nation.

She is the 13th princess and her nations.... spooky.... Their names are (blue) Shirohana kihaku (red) Shein kasen (green) minamo suire and (white) shinjyu makyoku. she ran away with the others before they could crown her.

Kiriko makes makihi specify that they aren't being detained or under arrest and that they are totally unwilling to do anything to stop seina's delivery to renza.

kiriko accuses them of knowingly smuggling them into jurai and they deny it and point out that it was before seina came and their plan was so asinine it had no realistic way of working.

Makihi tells them the classes of humanoid weapons used by renza, Weak earthy aqueous heavenly and a fifth special class godly Knights


Renza was founded by 5 people who found 5 3rd generation mechs on planet terra, the former central planet of the GPH civilization which is in renzan space. Something is creating royal trees for the pirates. They speculate that it may be AHRA who according to D was the second first gen royal tree that was used made to breed more 2nd gens. D tells the girls about the events of her people settling kazuiki's earth. When they went back into space they found no sign of the other royal trees and she assumes they were destroyed in the war.  Makihi sees a picture of terra and is  creeped out by it but doesn't say way.


on terra Prince Sansui waits for a federation meeting to begin,  they deliberate on the seina situation, The man standing in for gyokuren insists that zinv belongs to renza. He brings up the next matter of business, whether or not to give the seto scouts back their inheritance rights. he seems against it because he would loose his position. the others are for it and against his taking zinv proposal and they decide to assign two people from every nation to zinv. Sansui hates watching this because he's a representative and they actually have no say.


Seina is taken by maya to see Ekushito racepshi who proceeds to try and convince him to fuck his wife or at the very least his daughter. This shocks seina and so he proceeds to give him a lecture on cultural relativism and points out that up to this now seina has only been a puppet of other peoples will and never his own and warns him that if he doesn't start exercising his own will this situation with renza could easily blow up and suggests he do so by having sex with his daughter... with his wives permission of course.


The girls are told of this proposal the girls initially object, until makihi brings up the matter of who gets to go first. they argue but come to the conclusion that fuku and acha missing seina is a bigger issue because fuku might hijack the kamidake and go see seina. the cabbit girls learn that they cant prevent this if it happens because their transforming into cabbit abilities are disabled but they should still be able to stop together if they need to. The girls decide, there not ok with makihi X seina. but if seina wants maya, they are fine with it. as kiriko watches the massive amount of people being sent to escort zinv to renza she accepts that women aren't going to stop being paired with seina any time soon. Kiriko worries she will be cut off from seina once racepshi leaves, but makihi assures her it will stay because the operations base is on the racepshi and gives them information on renting office space on racepshi so they can stay in an official capacity.


Neiju says she misses her husband seina and makihi uses that to inform them that in fact, they aren't married yet because they left before the wedding ended.

The girls talk about ways to maybe camouflage mizuki or  flying the kamidake around in a shipping vessel makihi confirms that that will be allowed and gives them access to the kamidake.


makihi comes back to announce she was able to get the girls an office area and introduces them to their personal butler marci diplos who has renzan citizenship and so she's able to act as the girls stand in in matters on renza. The girls are now free to roam about racepshi as long as they avoid the scouts and seina.


Amane wonders if they should trust marci but kiriko recognized her as a former member of seto's staff. she worries though that she might be a double agent for renza. marci informs them of all the amenities and parties they can go to. D is told that many people will be inviting her to parties, she agrees on the condition that they are curry parties because curry is justice.


Maya gives seina a private nude exotic dance that he enjoys and she is surprised when he doesn't immediately want to have sex with her afterwords. he tries to escape  maya is disappointed because she failed her courtship dance. he apologizes but assures her it's because doesn't want to cheat on his wives with her not because her dance was insufficient. she informs him that they aren't his wives. she briefs him on the situation with renza and takes him to the renzan command base.


Seina is surprised by all the fantasy creatures there especially the fairy cats

he's introduced to kaguya, the head of the ogres who commands the mech units.

Then he meet Sajyu, a dryad who captains their fleet who proceeds to flirt with him. Gyokuren repetitively threatens to burn her to death every time she does.

Seina finds out that gyokuren is derogatorily referred to by many as the witch queen but hakuren keeps him from finding out why. She distracts him by introducing him to the cat faeries.


after he meets them they bring out Souren the elf who is still sleeping.

Seina is stunned by the sight and then stunned to learn that Souren is biologically male despite appearing to be female.


Kaguya shows seina the fleets flagship, the burst squirrel, seina is told that he has to learn how to disembark from the flower passage with honor and

 seems confused because a flower passage is a kabuki theater stage entrance.


Souren takes him to the bridge to see sajyu and erects a privacy barrier. Hakuren formally apologizes to seina. seina moves to an empty case for the plants that are found inside the ship, he asks what it's for and told it's for a royal tree.

he asks if renzans know they are sentient, they don't because the ones in renza are all lower generations the people in renza don't know that they are sentient.

seina explains the tree's nature to the staff and vows not to use zinv without restraint. He is told that some in the kaou nation still sense the will of the trees and know this on some level.

he finds out that in rare circumstances they will actually explode the trees in a self destruct sequence if their ships are destroyed  to keep others from getting the units.


they do this because the units and technology is a secret and they even have 5 companies make the parts so no one company has all the info on how to do it.

trees below the 10th generation are loosely regulated so one of them thinks that might be how the pirates are powering their mechs.

He's then briefed on how payment will work and told he will need to find someone to manage it for him, so he leaves it to racepshi and the MMD to manage the money.

He's shown the amount... It's about 100x his base salary at the academy... seina tries to insist that it's to high but hakuren prevents him from doing so.


They drop the privacy shield and go over seating positions on the bridge...  he's told of the fleets capabilities and that the battles are generally one on one and that they borrowed this fight style from the GPH civilization.

some of the foreign pirate who came over aren't playing by the rules though and some are using composite mechs made of several fused together with magic and kzm alloy.


seina is confused by the term magic and they explain that the plants on the ship are magic plants which produce magic substance that can be used to do thinks like teleport.

seina is excited so they explain how relatively boring magic is.

After the day is done they all decide to celebrate. sajyu breaks out a bottle of suicide liqueur

 once their drunk kaguya teases souren about getting a rumor that he is going to get a sex change and tease that he could probably join seina's harem if he did, They talk about how Hakuren has abandoned her right to secession and how they hope that a mysterious shadow guild said to rule the pirates and the nation behind the scenes doesn't exist. this organization is known as the knights of HIMIK and supposedly they operate a super strong legendary humanoid machine.


Souren gets blackout drunk and wakes up in seina's bed, This sends seina into a panic as he has trouble accepting that souren is really a man. they both shower separately and souren makes him breakfast, at this point seina abandons all effort to see souren as anything other then a girl.  He makes him a dessert with the magic plant's fruit and seina wonders if he would be able to grow them on the kamidake.


Souren then informs him that although he has no formal power as kaou royalty if seina needs anything to help defeat pirates he will try and do what he can about it. he then formally asks that seina help save them from pirates, Seina develops feelings for him.


They both go to the command center together and sajyu and kagya crack up because they sent faeries to wake souren up and were told about him in seina's bed. were the ones who snuck souren into seina's bed. The faries have a sort of extremely dumb collective consciousness so everyone on the base knows. It turns out that they snuck him into his bed to find out if he would be an acceptable bodyguard for seina, since seina claims that its ok since he is a guy they formally make souren his bodyguard.


Hakuren's girls find out about this and rush in to take vengeance on sajyu. A while later things are cleared up and they agree that souren is a good fit as a body guard.


They begin to discuss strategy because hakuren is worried about what would happen if they had to fight the 3rd generation ships in the knights of himik. they are worried about Himik because of D's stories about the fight between zinv and Himc who is confirmed to be a second gen mech. because gyokuren's nation has reported that it himik is currently active, they are worried that they will encounter it on their first mission.

They are worried HIMIK might be able to deploy light hawk wings, but Kaguya isn't worried about it because  the humanoids are made in a way that makes exploiting the weakness of the wings quite easy. She goes and takes seina to train on battle procedures and light hawk wing countermeasures.


Kaguya and seina board a ship to a satellite they rented from racepshi in their mechs, when they get there they practice combat. seina needs to learn more offensive moves

kaguya has him deploy the light hawk wings to show him how to take them out. she was unable to take them out though she lets seina know that he needs to get better at offensive fighting, kaguya observes that while zinv excelsl at wide range combat it hasn't been optimised fro close up combat and thus will be weak against the renzan mechs, she has seina contact washu to make updated parts for it. seina suggests they ass a second seat to the cockpit so she can provide backup in an emergency.

he suggests possibly coming up with a way to fuse the two units and the faries report their wanting to hook up their units to hakuren's girls who think its a sex thing and come rushing in to stop them.

Kiriko gets the external parts for mizuki from jurai delivered to her as she sets up her office, then she and the girls go to a party.


The anti pirate team embarks on their first jump out. Soon they encounter an unmarked ship they begin attacking it when and are told to stop by another ship from karen's kingdom that jumps in. they hand over the ship to him and leave. a month later and they haven't run into anything but renzan warships. seina's ability is no longer drawing pirates. The racepshi is attacked. the nights of himik hold the passengers who were located just outside of the ship hostage.

three 3rd generation mechs and HIMC challenge seina to a fight. seina sees if zinv can do anything about the situation by commanding the 3rd gens to back down. but zinv screams in agony over how the enemy trees are blind and deaf, according to zinv they are effectively zombie trees.

"I don't know how to explain it... but they aren't children anymore. HIMIK.... Was broken... Same as me... I was broken.... I broke..." "That's why...... That's why..... Forgive me.... I have to end this... "

makihi tells the girls what's going on D freaks out when she sees HIMC

"Why.... WHY IS IT HERE!?HIMIK ...... That should have been destroyed by ZINV. it should have completely disappeared!"

 

amane suggest that maybe its kazuki's worlds HIMC.

Kiriko begs makihi to let her send out mizuki and the kamidake to help but she refuses.

the girls watch the fight unfold on tv. as seina prepares for the stage production part of the battle he notices that himc feels off... he gives an aura of pure void. the feeling overwhelms him and he can't finish the formalities he rushes into battle.

fuku who is sleeping with acha wakes up because her connection to seina is lost. with the kamidake she finds out about the fight.

the battle's energy fries the cameras . their Battle starts to tear up space, himc tries to break zinvs light hawk wings but doesn't seem to know he can make them dissipate, suddenly himc hits zinv with the PKW wave. the kamidake takes off from racepshi, the other knights begin fighting it. the cabbit team connects to it to provide backup and it does a new maneuver which dissipated the enemy mechs light hawk wings.


Zinv disappears and HIMC appears victorious to the kamidake. makihi makes them call the ship back.

Kiriko and hakurens groups are called to meet at mahiki's residence with souren's group.

she shows them a video of what went on. Kiriko is shocked to see the PKW wave which she recognizes from being briefed on confidential juraian information. it turns out that's what the kamidake did too.


Miki is upset because she gave dr. clay the information on it. but it means someone linked to him is doing this. they analyze the footage using kirikos ship and the kamidake and it shows that one lhw of zinvs disappeared and then seina made an emergency jump. kiriko leaves things to hakuren to find seina.


Kiriko and the girls are required to turn over the kamidake and face trial immediately on renza.

 

seina jumps out to safety, Zinv can't regenerate his weapons are greatly damaged, a pirate fleet jumps out and seina has to use a gravity bullet to kill them all without warning.
because he's covered in the pirates paint bullets he has to eject and self destruct the exterior of zinv leaving only the core. souren's sister is stationed on a nearby planet so he decides to land there on planet barium.
he hides zinvs core in a lake and goes out to find civilization. he starts feeling sick as he heads towards the nearest city, a 3 days journey away. he;s attacked by goblins and fights them off.
seina sets up camp and sleeps as he sleeps he hears a strange noise. he wakes up and leaves he's attacked by a chimera.

he finds a dwarf who offers to help him fight it off. he and some elfs finish it off seina collapses from his cold. the dwarf bribes the others to keep them from alerting the authorities that seina has a magic cold.
he takes him back to his house. seina hears the noise again in his unconscious state. he asks the philosopher's stone what it is he says it's similar to an astral link. so he assumes its a communication. seina gets mad that the stone isn't more chatty and asks it to be more talkative. it shifts to conversational mode.
it tells him the noise has the same regular patterns one would expect in speech. the stone can't translate it but suggest seina talk to it. he jokingly asks it to translate for him.

it translates it self to tell him a message about magic. seina wakes up at barigaru's place confused.barigaru tells him he's been out for 20 days and he has a magic cold because he's developing a magic organ. he floats his bed over to the window to show seina the city outside
back at makihi's residence kiriko freaks out internally because souren's team is made up of fantasy creatures and kiriko is a fantasy book nerd. she is told by hakuren it's likely they might end up attached to seina too, and that souren is a man. Kiriko doesn't believe it.
After souren's team leaves they talk about how terrified they were by kiriko staring at them. they think she is terrifying and that she was giving them the evil eye.
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Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on January 24, 2020, 04:06:53 PM
Thank you.

Would somebody be willing to rewrite the novel summaries for the Tenchi Muyo wiki? The language would have to be formal and well-structured.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on January 31, 2020, 08:08:39 AM
I would appreciate the help.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 06, 2020, 11:17:14 PM
Yes, let me see if I still have my login credentials for the Wiki and I can get right on it. Will look to see if the GXP novels have a category page too.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 07, 2020, 08:07:23 AM
Thank you for helping out. I really appreciate it.

It is probably best if you create a new page for each GXP novel ("Tenchi Muyo GXP Novel 01", etcetera). You can link to them from a list in a main "Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-Ohki Novels" page.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Ricin on February 07, 2020, 06:03:27 PM
The page for Tsukiko is wrong. She isn't faculty she is a student and I thought I remember her being a GP Earth Agent/Liason.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 07, 2020, 10:18:18 PM
Thanks will try to get on that soon. The Fandom access levels have yet to update for my profile there, so I can only view article source and not update or otherwise save changes just yet.

Here is a preview of the Fandom page for GXP volume 13:

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{{For|the GXP anime|Tenchi Muyo! GXP}}

To date, there are seventeen volumes in the '''True Tenchi Muyo! GXP''' series of light novels. Volume 13 was written by Masaki Kajishima, and has yet to be published outside of the main readership in Japan.

{{Infobox|Box title = Light Novel|Row 1 title = Author|Row 1 info = Masaki Kajishima|Row 2 title = Published|Row 3 title = Page Count|Row 4 title = Language|Row 4 info = Japanese}}
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{{HeadingA|Summary}}Seina Yamada arrives at the original Earth as seen in [[Dual! Parallel Trouble Adventure]] where the crew of the Hoystoke have stolen away with Fuku and the Kamidake. It is revealed that this original Earth is equivalent to Mars by most respects, being far flung enough to discourage tourism and having a lack of useful resources.

Kajishima writes that many in the GXP verse cherish this antiquated world for its role in the first prehistoric space missions throughout the Milky Way galaxy.

Accompanying Seina on this trip is Kirche, who speculates during their arrival that the original Earth system may be lacking in any signs of civilization such as ruins or resource dumps that had already been picked over, because it was caught up in the rigors of the seed project forcing everything and everyone there to be recycled.

Dr. Clay fails to get access to the base computer systems in [[Tarant Shank]]'s hideout. He is led to a storeroom reserved for his use as an impromptu science lab. While explaining to Tarant that the Hoystoke is in grave danger keeping the actual Fuku aboard. He explains that a better course of action would be to use the clones.

Tarant is already preoccupied with the first failed clone experiment, and seeks to dispose of all of them. Clay is first to detect Seina's concealed presence in orbit over the base.

The pirates react quickly, attacking Seina's position and forcing him to crash land on the planet below. D awakens from the commotion and is brought up to speed.

Kazuki's Harem is apparently active on the planet. Meanwhile, Clay tries to track down Miki, but she evades, causing the base equipment to malfunction as she transfers into one of the cloned Fuku bodies.

Misao interdicts the girls' antics and arrests them on the spot, taking them to the Kuramitsu academy estate. Remarkably, the room intended to hold them for an unspecified amount of time is equipped with super computers that have the highest level of security clearance in that kingdom.

Seina and Kirche fend off more pirate attacks, rescuing some trapped Wau and causing a rockslide to crush some of the pirates in pursuit.

The Wau explain to Seina that their mother is ill, and needs healing herbs but they have not found any yet. More pirates approach their location, so Kirche sticks around to scrounge for herbs while telling Seina to take the Wau children to safety.

Dr. Clay seizes Miki and uses her to hack into the hideout intelligence network. He learns about the PKW, a wave that can bypass or disable [[Light Hawk Wings]].

More antics ensue for the gang, until Kirche, D and Miki are able to break from their respective aggressors and radio for help from [[Seto Kamiki Jurai|Seto's]] people. As everyone collects their stranded assets and makes to regroup with GP proper, Washu is in the middle of a conversation with Seto about the failed cloning process that she overheard Miki talking about. She explains that Fuku clones cannot do most of the Cabbit's usual abilities, such as transforming to humanoid form or other complex tasks. Bureaucrats impose on the getaway effort, detaining Airi's staff in Galaxy Federation court proceedings. D acknowledges to Seina that working under his charge ultimately grants the original Earth solar system to his care, and that it potentially could be declared an independent power with the help of Fuku and the Kamidake to back it.

Miki is reunited with Hiroshi, who was among those bogged down with Galaxy Federation inquiries.
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Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 08, 2020, 02:46:25 AM
I uploaded the page for you: https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True_Tenchi_Muyo!_GXP_13
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 09, 2020, 05:29:10 PM
Thanks, if you are all right with waiting 2 days I can begin adding the other summaries.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 10, 2020, 03:23:51 PM
Okay, here is the source edit for Volume 14:

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{{For|the GXP anime|Tenchi Muyo! GXP}}
{{Infobox|Box title = Light Novel|Row 1 title = Author|Row 1 info = Masaki Kajishima|Row 2 title = Published|Row 3 title = Page Count|Row 4 title = Language|Row 4 info = Japanese}}
To date, there are seventeen volumes in the '''True Tenchi Muyo! GXP''' series of light novels. Volume 14 was written by Masaki Kajishima, and has yet to be published outside of the main readership in Japan.

==Summary==
Seina travels with Airi to register Acha with the GP immigration services. Meanwhile, Hiroshi reveals that Miki was in fact based off of Tsukiko, leading to Tsukiko becoming better acquainted with Miki and ultimately assuming the roles of motherhood.

D tells Seina some more about the events in [[Dual!_Parallel_Trouble_Adventure|Dual!]] and that many of the girls who surround him actually resemble the girls from [[Kazuki_Yotsuga_(Dual!)|Kazuki's]] life. This prompts Seina to ask Washu about this insight. She reveals that these groups tend to gravitate to Seina to correct for some probability bias, but it is unclear whether that bias is distinct to Seina or something from a long line of ancestors.

Airi finishes with some other tasks and catches up to Seina again, bringing Miki along to stay at the apartment. Over dinner, Seina brings Airi up to speed about the events in the previous volume, such as the discovery of a connection spanning billions of years between the crew of the Kamidake and the old Rara/Sonada protagonists from Dual!

The conversation settles on a chronicling of [[Zinv|Zinv's]] exploits many epochs ago and how impactful that might be to the current research and development of the [[Royal_Tree|Royal Trees of Jurai]]. In addition to some new concepts about battle fatigue and the link masters have with their Trees, the group learns that [[Ryoko_Hakubi]] has experienced similar dynamics piloting Ryo-Ohki. At that point the conversation halts, until Seto cryptically rebuffs further questions, expelling everyone from the room except Seina.

Seina bounces from several impromptu meetings with GP officials, including a private conversation with Seto. Airi meanwhile occupies the girls' time with some updates on her work and future activities. She mentions that while raising Kiyone and Minaho with Yosho became a priority spanning the Middle Ages and Enlightenment, in more recent memory, she has not had any marital or extramarital relations in the last 150 years.

Adding to her headache, she is ultimately responsible for arranging all of the girls' upcoming marriage with Seina, something Seto believes is bound to happen imminently.

Before long, it is the big day, and Seina stands ready to marry [[Kiriko Masaki|Kiriko]], [[Amane Kaunaq|Amane]], [[Ryoko Balta|Ryoko]], [[Neju Na Melmas|Neju]] and [[Fuku]]. But trouble ensues when some of the [[Renza_Federation_Agents|ladies-in-waiting]] pull a fast one and escape with Seina. Then Seina's kidnappers attest this escapade was a mutually agreed upon elopement, and to make matters worse, they string him up, threatening to molest him in plain view of the wedding party. Before any countermeasures can be thrown into the mix, the kidnappers whisk Seina aboard their prized Racepshi, gunning for Renzan controlled space.

See what you think!
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 10, 2020, 04:25:17 PM
Okay, here is the source edit for Volume 14:

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{{For|the GXP anime|Tenchi Muyo! GXP}}
{{Infobox|Box title = Light Novel|Row 1 title = Author|Row 1 info = Masaki Kajishima|Row 2 title = Published|Row 3 title = Page Count|Row 4 title = Language|Row 4 info = Japanese}}
To date, there are seventeen volumes in the '''True Tenchi Muyo! GXP''' series of light novels. Volume 14 was written by Masaki Kajishima, and has yet to be published outside of the main readership in Japan.

==Summary==
Seina travels with Airi to register Acha with the GP immigration services. Meanwhile, Hiroshi reveals that Miki was in fact based off of Tsukiko, leading to Tsukiko becoming better acquainted with Miki and ultimately assuming the roles of motherhood.

D tells Seina some more about the events in [[Dual!_Parallel_Trouble_Adventure|Dual!]] and that many of the girls who surround him actually resemble the girls from [[Kazuki_Yotsuga_(Dual!)|Kazuki's]] life. This prompts Seina to ask Washu about this insight. She reveals that these groups tend to gravitate to Seina to correct for some probability bias, but it is unclear whether that bias is distinct to Seina or something from a long line of ancestors.

Airi finishes with some other tasks and catches up to Seina again, bringing Miki along to stay at the apartment. Over dinner, Seina brings Airi up to speed about the events in the previous volume, such as the discovery of a connection spanning billions of years between the crew of the Kamidake and the old Rara/Sonada protagonists from Dual!

The conversation settles on a chronicling of [[Zinv|Zinv's]] exploits many epochs ago and how impactful that might be to the current research and development of the [[Royal_Tree|Royal Trees of Jurai]]. In addition to some new concepts about battle fatigue and the link masters have with their Trees, the group learns that [[Ryoko_Hakubi]] has experienced similar dynamics piloting Ryo-Ohki. At that point the conversation halts, until Seto cryptically rebuffs further questions, expelling everyone from the room except Seina.

Seina bounces from several impromptu meetings with GP officials, including a private conversation with Seto. Airi meanwhile occupies the girls' time with some updates on her work and future activities. She mentions that while raising Kiyone and Minaho with Yosho became a priority spanning the Middle Ages and Enlightenment, in more recent memory, she has not had any marital or extramarital relations in the last 150 years.

Adding to her headache, she is ultimately responsible for arranging all of the girls' upcoming marriage with Seina, something Seto believes is bound to happen imminently.

Before long, it is the big day, and Seina stands ready to marry [[Kiriko Masaki|Kiriko]], [[Amane Kaunaq|Amane]], [[Ryoko Balta|Ryoko]], [[Neju Na Melmas|Neju]] and [[Fuku]]. But trouble ensues when some of the [[Renza_Federation_Agents|ladies-in-waiting]] pull a fast one and escape with Seina. Then Seina's kidnappers attest this escapade was a mutually agreed upon elopement, and to make matters worse, they proceed to molest him in plain view of the wedding party.

See what you think!
mostly right a bit over simplifies but works for a casual summary

but he didn't really get molested in the novel version just the tv version. the worst they did was tie him to gyokuren so he wouldn't try to escape he's still very much a virgin by GXP15 and  the novel ends rather with the girls catching up to the renza girls just to get caught up in racepshi's jump to renzan space, It's not mutually agreed on they just have to lie about that to save political face in the next novel. they stall by getting everyone drunk and unveiling washu's survival.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 10, 2020, 04:46:31 PM
Thank you, edited the above post accordingly.

Here is WIP for Volume 15 page...

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{{For|the GXP anime|Tenchi Muyo! GXP}}
{{Infobox|Box title = Light Novel|Row 1 title = Author|Row 1 info = Masaki Kajishima|Row 2 title = Published|Row 3 title = Page Count|Row 4 title = Language|Row 4 info = Japanese}}
To date, there are seventeen volumes in the '''True Tenchi Muyo! GXP''' series of light novels. Volume 15 was written by Masaki Kajishima, and has yet to be published outside of the main readership in Japan.

==Summary==
Seina is able to evade detection from a handful of Seto's personal scouts as he boards the Racepshi. Airi informs him over a connection that she cannot do anything about it. All she can do is warn him to be on his best diplomatic behavior in light of the confusion with the Renza gang. Airi then suggests he get drunk while he still can. Mikami takes over the conversation for her.

They decide to rephrase his kidnapping as a special dispatch mission to avoid unwanted media attention. The Kamidake has to remain out of the public eye as well.

Seto joins the call to say the scouts have had their pay cut for their incompetence, and upon spotting one of Seina's captors turned accomplice brands them as a traitor albeit jokingly.

Kiriko gets a chance to negotiate with the Renza gang, not only determining their names and not so shockingly their affiliation to the extant Renza kingdom. They are accused of several offenses, such as stowing aboard the wedding barges which by itself is a major breach of trust within the much larger Jurain political apparatus.

Seina is taken aside by one of the crew aboard Racepshi to get down to business. However, many misunderstandings ensue, and it is up to Seina's crude understanding of cultural equivalency that he manages to not get turned out without his own consent. As if to compromise, one of the crew gives Seina a private exotic dance, but after is amazed when he again he refuses to sleep around so sporadically.

Aboard the starship holding him somewhat captive, there are many remarkable species native to the Renza controlled pocket of space. However, more pressing to him and his rescuers are the matter of the Racepshi declaring their ransom void and forking over their share of the wedding fees. Nonetheless, the ship is attacked and with Kaguya's help Seina learns the use of countermeasures against Light Hawk Wings should the attackers be Jurain royalty. More specifically, they are the Knights of Himik, who are known to have attacked Zinv in the past. The question still stands on whether they can use powers akin to the LHW.

A big fight ensues, with Seina eventually escaping back to headquarters. He is briefly bogged down by a magic-induced head cold and must return to his own estate. Some strange communication device is used to decipher the nature of his malady.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 11, 2020, 02:54:31 AM
Thank you very much for helping out. I really appreciate it.

I have posted the pages:

https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True_Tenchi_Muyo!_GXP_13

https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True_Tenchi_Muyo!_GXP_14

https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True_Tenchi_Muyo!_GXP_15
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Ricin on February 11, 2020, 11:24:17 AM
I am halfway summarizing Book 1. Should have it done by weeks end.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 11, 2020, 02:06:57 PM
Thanks Ricin, look forward. Then we can really get the ball rolling with the Fandom entries (I'm starting to like the added detail quite a bit).
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 11, 2020, 03:32:36 PM
Thank you for helping out.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 11, 2020, 04:58:57 PM
GXP 16

[spoiler]Seina is shown the outside of Barigaru's place and realizes he's in a fantasy world.he notices a sign of a ship coming down from outer space.

Barigaru tells seina the basics of magic by changing magic into a water ball and explaining that it doesn't work by transmutation of matter but rather transmutation of magic substance.

No one quite knows the exact details of what magic is, but it can't be analyzed by science and corrodes technology.

Barigaru does a spell to make the room soundproof before he explains anything else to seina.

he tells seina that he actually went to school in outer space. seina hesitates to say anything because of this and barigaru explains to him that this planet would be classified as ok to make contact with but not to give any goods or information to. He explains though that this is because the magic plant infects planets and takes them over so their planet is dangerous to export from. People supposedly import things all the time and the things they import mutate and the technology breaks down.

Seina worries that zinv might mutate into a magical monster and start reproducing with the wild life if he doesn't leave soon.

Barigaru explains that while most people are indifferent to magic outside of magic planets, some consider it a pathogen and others try and mix it with science. he mentions that magic crystals can be used to seal the magic plants off from the scientific world but doesn't explain what that is right away.

He explains that the space port is sealed off from the rest of the planet this way and it has its own set of decentralized governments and is supposed to be off limits to magic worlds except to diplomats. but the planet is actually basically a space mexico. they have illegal ways to get smuggled across the border and into space because they need cheap underpaid laborers who lack proper government id to exploit and that most people who leave that way get stuck in the solar system because of the lack of cheap and frequent routes out. but in barigaru's case he went through that channel and then had someone sponsor him to get out of the solar system. he came back when he was done studying because he wanted to live a simple life and didn't find technology to be all that.

he tells seina that if he tries to leave that way it won't work because things have changed and now its less easy to get a solid idea of how much it will cost to get someone out of the solar system. joining the military and getting a mech seems to be the fastest route.

he gets back on track and mentions that magic is not natural, but rather seems to be one of the earliest creations and was known about by even the prehistoric civilization but no one knows the details except perhaps it may be encoded in the system itself. He also explains that incantations are needed for more complex things because they have to detail how a thing is accomplished by the magic and because of this they have multiple variations on how to do similar things and that's what he went to learn in space.

The biggest difference in this is how much magic is needed to do the same thing at least according to barigaru that is what certain vested interests want people to worry about.

He explains that there are two kinds of magic, internal and external and seina is developing an internal magic organ which is why he is sick and passed out earlier.internal and external magic substances are different. inner magic takes priority with strengthening the body like an additional basal metabolism but the excess can be used for magic skills. If you use too much magic you can faint or if your strong just get fatigued, the strengthening effect of magic is sort of always on and takes priority and so many people can't even use other types of magic.

Seina asks him to clarify what he meant by vested interests controlling the types of magic.

Barigaru points out that if there was magic technology or magic just anyone could use then a lot of people would be out of work. the schools and government all keep advanced magics classified and he thinks they're suppressing convenient magics.

Seina gets hungry and now that he knows barigaru isn't dangerous he eats some stew he makes for him.

Seina comes back from going to the bathroom and is surprised that there is a bidet, barigaru

explains that there is a thing called magic crystal technology and that seina owes him a pretty substantial debt so

he can eat all he likes. he gets back to talking about ow he thinks there's a conspiracy to hide high level magic and mentions

that he thinks gyokuren's country in particular has access to some magic it clearly isn't sharing and might have even used it on

gyokuren. he goes on about how magic is just a cheap substitute for science and explains that seina has a magic organ that's rather large

and that he should have told the government about him but hasn't, seina has been sick for over 20 days at this point the average length of a  magic cold is 3 days.

and the length of the cold determines magic capability. he then explains that magic crystals are formed from the blood of magic users and they form as one uses magic like kidney stones.

a blood clot can happen with the crystals causing an embolism. but wearing a ring made of magic crystals suppresses that.

The crystals can be used to make luxury appliances but their current supply is much less then demand so only the rich tend to have them for that.

They are used as currency as well, hunters usually can't make them and so they harvest them from monsters, goblins are thought of as cockroaches because they are useless for everything but their magic crystals.

science hasn't been able to analyze the crystals and when people with magic organs leave to science worlds they lose the organ, but it comes back when they return.

He explains that although magic is used to produce low level technological phenomena it's clearly only limited by the lack of imagination of its users,They can't do magic on the level of technology because they don't know the things technology even has to offer.In theory with enough magic you could make any scientific creation. also materials can be summoned.

orihalcum and mithril are a thing. rocks absorb magic but for some reason alloys lose their magic in most cases.No one ever tried using orihalcum in technology.mithril though produces a self healing material that feeds off of the users magic.

magic plants are kind of like a virus they come from microorganisms found drifting in comets in space and when they come to a planet if the conditions are right they quickly grow and overtake the planet.

magic planets can't be detected by scientific civilizations equipment. If science is advanced enough it won't grow.

It also rapidly evolves life specifically magic species and they mutate and can evolve into humanoid life in only 10000 years.

primitive humans tend to become elves and dwarfs and other creatures some remain human.

There are also slave hunters but it's really more like indentured servitude where they get out after a set period.

seina is sort of in that situation now because of his debt.

magic seems to be a terraforming technology that evolves life that was made to provide basic necessities for life for the evolving civilization

You can teleport and even go to other dimensions with magic, it's easier to pull from other dimensions then to teleport.

some monsters are pulled from other dimensions by summoners. Some elves and dwarfs have been summoned from other worlds too.

It's possible to call certain things from the astral sea itself, you can converse with them and even give them a sort of force Field body.

(This is how ryoko's summoning ability works) in theory you can summon the dead from the astral sea this way.

seina gets hungry again and goes to the bathroom and when he comes out the story picks up again

 Barigaru explains that magic crystals are used for record keeping and mundane things mostly and as backup for when magicians run out of energy. they also can make some powerful weapons with them, but there a bit of overkill and kind of dangerous. he then explains how much goblins and orcs are worth and explains that he got 30% of the chimera he slayed and it's in good condition so it will fetch a lot of money. barigaru gives seina two options to make money, Join the magical pharmacy guild which is led by a woman who is a closet pervert like airi, or become a hunter. wanting to avoid people like airi, he decides to become a hunter. someone comes in the room that looks exactly like him and his narrative ends for the rest of the book.

At the sham trial for the girls on renza all the nobles hurl insults and preposterous demands at the girls, kiriko loses her cool and breaks a very sturdy and expensive tank proof table in half. Miki takes over for her and begins to address the members of Renza's congress rather smugly. They insist that she has broken laws and she debates that no such laws were broken. she then calls their bluff tells them literally to go fuck themselves and points out that they have no power to make her or the girls do anything because there broke poor and don't have any ships that couldn't even dream to begin laying a scratch on the kamidake. She challenges them to a dual and dictates the terms out of the kindness of her heart because she secretly knows that kiriko actually received a mech of her own from washu and not the parts for her ship.  She demands that when they win renza formally apologizes and commends the kamidake for helping fight off the assault by himik not only that she demands full operation rights in renza, diplomatic privileges, and a budget for her activities as a fee. If they win they get to examine the kamidake and will have its technology disclosed to them.

Clay watches this in the dock where  Himik is being repaired a mysterious shadowed man talks to him. clay explains that the wager is actually one sided, even if they saw the inside and had its technology explained to them, they wouldn't know how to use it. he teases the man on his inability to comprehend science and the man tries to pull a knife out and shank him he ends up frozen.Clay plans to sabotage HIMC and threatens to go ask seina to hire him and leaves.

He is greeted by his contracted sex worker lizanna who leads him through a jungle themed area through a jungle themed orgy to a jungle themed private residence where she serves him food and leaves. she comes back in while he is eating to deliver a payment card from the kamiki family, Kuisu panta, who seems to really be the real seto in this case not mirror seto, comes in dressed as a bunny girl and begins eating clays food, aggravating him, she badgers him a bit over why he is at such a place before getting down to business. She asks if the enemy knows where seina is and if he was the one to give them the pkw and if he wants to work with washu and naja or get revenge. They have no idea where he is and wouldn't pay clay to give them a system to find him, clay wants nothing to do with the two of them and doesn't believe naja is dead, he thinks seto is just like her but more toned down, he wants to little to do with them though that he keeps himself from realizing the realization he made when saying that. the real seto who is actually kuisu in this case, swears to herself that she wont get tsundere over him because of how much he seems to genuinely not want to deal with her,

In a building separate but next to the jungle brothel used by renzen royalty to sneak into renza, sansui who is hakuren's brother suffers from a hangover,  jitsui and rokubi two other princes console him.

his father ordered him to come to renza to make connections and the other guys are busy looking for girls to become their royal concubines before their arranged marriages happen,

sansui wants to secretly keep jitsuki's maid komekitsune as his mistress, however the other guys tell them that they know this and that his mother knows as well as her mother. They approve of it and as long as they keep their relationship under wraps for now it will be allowed. the speculate for a bit on why himik attacked so suddenly until komekitsune who has gotten a job on racepshi so she could be there with them comes in and informs them that his brother is ordering him to spy on kiriko and that gyokuren is to be crowned queen.'

sansui is ordered to attend a meeting with gyokuren, Sansui is very upset by this to the point of wanting to disobey orders.

The princes and komekitsune show up to an annex of the renzan palace and meet with the seto scouts in a private room .The girls let them know that they know that the princes are there to get information and they will cooperate.

They don't know anything about kiriko's mech because she hasn't even opened it,but they are sure it will be powerful because washu built it.

They brief them on washu and the galaxy academy and they are warned to keep their older brothers from insulting seina in front of kiriko. They have been inviting royals to talk with them to explain the galaxy federation to them.

because of the pirates between their borders there was never any solid information  that the two groups got on each other. so they explain just how much they are underestimating the academy and jurai and kiriko and how the trees have wills of their own so stealing zinv is a terrible idea. the boys leave terrified.

one of the successors to the throne comes into ekushito's office with a bunch of renzan princes and they act like thugs in an attempt to force racepshi to hand over kiriko. to which ekushito promptly reminds them that Racepshi is a nation because

It has extreme offensive capabilities and his office is the national capital and that he's more than happy to hand them over to pirates.

Ekushito turns on a broadcast of kiriko's new mech's unveiling to shut them up, the next of crown sends his prince goons to wait in the limo.

Maimu racepshi makihi's 6th daughter, and an aspiring reporter has miki sneak her into the dock where kiriko is opening her new mech, she isan incredibly sleazy reporter and as such gets frequently beat up by kiriko, kiriko is hesitant to open the container asshe suspects washu has snuck some not safe for broadcast things in the opening process and refuses to open it on camera when washu comes by ina chibi anime projection form and gives the ok to film, Dr. clay rushes downstairs to find lizanna to tell her to watch the broadcast.

kiriko opened the first lock on the package unveiling a big ryo-ohki type crystalwashu hands kiriko a magical girl transformation wand and kiriko does a transformation into askimpy magical girl skin suit. kiriko beats the chibi washu projection to death for this,This happens several times during the entire unveiling process.

after some more chat she realizes that washu was going to have kenshi wear the skimpy outfit originally and also that the outfit is 100% unnecessary to pilot the mech. washu poofs herself. then poofs back in and makes maimu do a bunch of stupid Japanese folk dances to wake up the sacred mechalord which she originally built for kenshi.

maimu's dancing is so good it captivates everyone despite how dumb it is, washu even sneaks in Halloween and Christmas dances and no one notices.

makihi calls in and explains that despite maimu's claims that she has no talent she actually just has a biased probability and so she never succeeds at anything in life but dancing, and she is actually on par if not better than her. maimu is the reason

that makihi thinks that seina and her families' children will make excellent performers.makihi openly regrets not sending her to do the courtship dance with seina and insists that if she had  maimu would already be pregnant. the girls

naturally insist that maimu never ever come near seina. makihi assures the girls that any children born from her family and seina would be spared .any political obligations. the container begins to swell and and opens like a flower to unveil an egg like a cocoon.
kiriko goes up to touch it and it becomes transparent showing off the skeleton like mech inside.The next of crown laughs because he thinks they gave her an incomplete mech, but washu explains that her mech is in fact not only as powerful as the kamidake, but it has subspaces for living in it and crafting new weapons too and the mech uses its cocoon fluid to dynamically create weapons and armor to adapt to any situation.

also it has a limiter on it, but obviously that can be taken off, so kiriko realizes that rea was right... if kenshi had used this mech he would have easily vaporize the entire surface of geminar when fighting against gaia.Kiriko figures she will return it after she is done but washu reads her mind and tells her that it's now hers for life because it's the sameas ryo-ohki and fuku and has accepted her as it's master.

Fuku sees it on tv and accepts that she is now a big sister, the cabbit girls watching with her welcome their new sister.mizuki confirms with kiriko that tsunami has allowed her to also have this mech, and tells her that it's name is Yomotsu ookami, the river hades ferryman wolf,I personally translate this as The Charon Wolf, so expect it to be referred to as that. seto already registered the name because it made her giggle and so kiriko had no say in it.maimu insists that kiriko switch back into her "sexy suit from earlier" and give them the scoop on the name, Kiriko beats maimu up and destroys her cameras for a second timeending the broadcast.

The next of crown leaves ekushitos office and talks with his men about sending assassins after kiriko and also equipping their mechs with special weapons. as he is talking with them he gets a call from associates

at the knights of himics dock, Clay goes back to the dock and puts the masked man from earlier who was talking to the next of crown into a trap that makes him do the bon dance, he then gets revenge by reversing some of the repairs made to the mechs to set them back an hour.

he leaves back to the jungle place, he doesn't want lizanna to try to sneak into bed with him but wants to take a nap so he finds a secluded place in the staff offices to sleep. he wakes up to find lizanna snuggling him he decides to break ties with the masked men because of this.

afterwards, Kiriko is escorted to a new section inside the kamidake that washu fixes in the same way the seasonal areas are fixed, they are essentially new bases for mech based anti pirate operations to be carried out inside the kamidake.  They get things set up as the staff from renza moves their stuff in. A strange robed woman aboard racepshi goes to a bar that shows public domain films and is shown a selection of mech shows from earth by the owner.

The renza crew tells Erma that Kiriko intimidates them, but they are assured that she's actually very nice. However, Kiriko gets a summons from the renzan battle ethics committee, she takes them along with her. When they board the ship the man they come to see is very rude to her and she proceeds to yell at him because he was really trying to lure her onto what is technically renzan embassy territory into a kidnapping / assasination trap and it is obvious to her, her guardians activate and take out the assassins and start broadcasting the exchange between the two, the man refuses to accept the terms of the battle that she set the other day so she begins to reveal his secret on air, which is that he isn't really supposed to be royalty and had genetic alterations done to get his position which is supposed to be inherited. She verbally beats the snot out of him and leaves.

The battle happens the next day, she asks kaguya what the most humiliating thing to do to a mech rider is, which is to decapitate them and steal their weapon, the next of crowns of the other nations  fight her with holy weapons and high level mechs,  they get cocky and put their mechs on auto fight mode since they don't actually know how to pilot them and they start off with a holy weapon attack and assume that it takes her out, however it doesn't and she proceeds to go on a rampage quickly cutting off the limbs and heads of each mech. in retaliation for defeating them in such a humiliating way they send out wave after wave of lower generation mechs at her and she decapitates all of them so many that she sets an all time record. She wins indisputably and shows off the immense power disparity between the two nations.

seto, azusa, and his wives watch this happen on tv and realize that the mech washu built originally for kenshi was way over powered and come to agree with rea that it's a bad idea to send kenshi over to geminar with one.





[/spoiler]
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 11, 2020, 04:59:52 PM
Ricin, as I imagine you have a registered account with Fandom, feel free to take a crack at uploading the summary for volume one. I have begun the page here (https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True_Tenchi_Muyo%21_GXP_1).

Eff, thank you for the 16 volume write-up I will look it over and let you know if there is anything that needs rewording. Much appreciate!
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 11, 2020, 05:11:35 PM
My summarys are basicly a script for a youtube vid series so hence it's not as serious / technical as a wiki entry


Paradise war translations summary:

[spoiler]
5 years after the start of gxp seina, age 20, gets word from seto that he has a new mission, because ryoko's grandfather gets ousted from his position as king of balta he comes close to starting a new major pirate guild, to prevent this seina is tasked with setting up for a proxy war to establish a new territory for the remaining pirate guild remnants. seina decides the only way he can do this without seeming weird , constantly swapping out wives, and having his luck getting in the way is to have his cabbit team back him up, they are turned white to make them seem more tropical. amane makes some hokey pamphlets to recruit earth Representatives because the earth is also going to be absorbed into the new nation seina gives some to his mother.

 5 year later or so around 2005 Shou is a living in the city one day he's hanging out with his friends and they ask him why he always wins at rock paper scissors. he has no idea why but he does.
when he gets home for dinner his mother asks him if he wants to go live on a tropical island. his mother received a pamphlet for a place called banjo island from her old friend, seina's mother,
They give him a choice. go live on an island or get a job and a place to live of his own, he leaves for the island. before he leaves he tells his longtime crush himeko that he likes her. She tells him that
she could never love him, because he is from a poor family. He's lead on a boat to the island on a ship piloted by seina yamada who is accompanied by his cabbits girls, but shou get seasick.

when he gets to the shore he's greeted by dird shank who is now a teenager and quite hyperactive, and alea balta, the sister in law of loretta, alan's wife who he ran off with after winning at racepshi.
Palty jurai and apuesta daruma greet him, palty is the black market sperm child that exists thanks to maya. apuesta is an orphan who is good at treasure hunting, no relation to daruma.
seina takes him to a medical bus for an examination where he meets the island nurse and teacher, miron, a science prodigy. Miron, desperately wanting to go to space, hits on seina to try and become his
next top waifu. He runs away leaving shou alone.

he finds his way to the school house where the girls explain to him that their all in the same class cause there's only one class, they take him to Tomi's shop.
Tomi is mikami. they look at the items there. he doesn't buy anything cause he has no money. alea jokes that she hopes he isn't a poor person and this hurts his feelings, apuesta gives him a bag of stuff she bought for him they go to head over to the town.
they pass through the village which is clearly masaki village which has been relocated to the island. they pass through a jungle to a beach where shous house is supposed to be only to find it never got made. shou's belongings were all left outside and had gotten rained on and moldy.
 the girls suggest he camp out till it's built and they show him how. they set up camp for him and camp with him. they teach him to hunt fish. then they teach him to make a fire, he sets his hair on fire. he starts a conversation about the houses when he notices apuesta talking weird, she communicates through her abacus and it creates a delay so her voice is unsynched with her mouth
shou assumes its ventriloquism. but the girls show him its a sort of handicap assisting device.

after they leave seina and mikami come by to apologize to shou and to bring a fax from his parents.
they explain that he should ignore any construction noises he hears.
Seina gives shou the kai special bike so he can get around the island easily.
he goes to bed but is woken by the sound that seina mentioned to him. he goes to a cliff to use the bathroom and sees dird in a strange state, she's hit by an energy blast that rips off her arm.
she jumps into the sea and disappears in it. alea flys down from the sky and tells him to be quite but he isn't and someone knocks him out.

miron takes him back to the bus and takes care of him she puts him back. the girls wake him up the next day dird makes him breakfast. they head to school.

2 and a half books more of this island rom com bullshit happens

Shou wins the proxy war, which the others decide will be done as a game of rock paper scissors, which he never loses. this aggravated those who felt the whole idea was just a sham to begin with and the pirate guild who were left out of the battle  come to earth .
Everyone on the island gets ready to fight because angry pirates come towards earth insisting they will have their new country established. the girls miron and shou stand infront of the trees of the forest and are transferred to the place they are supposed to use as a base during the proxy war, inside they find seina waiting for them.
Karuteia, who was introduced in the rest of the books that i skiped over, heads somewhere else.
The pirates from the remaining guilds left out of the war demand that shou surrenders his rights to represent the earth and instead give his right of representation to them. they give them an hour to meet their demands.
because earth was going to be Incorporated into the new territory that was formed by the proxy war jurai will not defend them and seina is not allowed to bring the kamidake in the fight.
Miron is mad and gets on the intercom to hurl obscenities at the pirates for ruining "shou proposing to her" which he wasn't. Seina takes the mic away from her.
seina gets permission from the islands owner to use all the forces available on the island including tenchi to fight off the pirates.
miron again picks up the mic to hurl obscenities and let them know that their going to fight.

Seina gives shou the key to start banjo island, he turns it on and realizes there on a ship's bridge, banjo island was really a camouflaged 4th generation royal tree ship the whole time.
seina lets them know that they have to take out the pirates without being noticed by the earthlings.

Mike, ichiro and karutea (all people who came after shou) announce that they have been evacuating all the people and wild live on the ship into a compressed space and that they were ready for take off.

Shou registers as the ships master and takes off they go invisible and jump behind the moon seina sends the cabbit girls to work the controls.

Karutia broadcasts the truth of the situation galaxy wide through the network that was broadcasting the battle. D and seina leave the ship to work from the ground.
From the depths of the blue hole in the ocean zinv emerges and puts up a privacy wall around the earth
Banjo island ambushed the pirates but doesn't attack and in the confusion the dirds  teleport onto the enemy ships and infiltrate them in an attempt to make the commanders surrender without harming the ships.
The dirds all get captured in a trap and held at gunpoint. they call shou and state their demands.
Miki whispers something to shou, the cabbits begin preparing for something, shou realizes what there doing and fakes surrendering, only to issue a command that cuts some sensors off on their acoustic weapons and broadcasts the feedback sound of nails on a chalk board... or rather the sound of a ship's hull being shredded. which causes the pirates extreme pain.

Fuku and kirche sneak onto the ship and self destruct their engines. the dirds knock out the pirates and seal them in containment gel. they take over the fleet and make them surrender.

they go back to earth and celebrate

miron asked if shou will take her into space but she declines and tell her he only thinks of her as a teacher. she is upset but says that has nothing to do with the question. so he agrees but only if the rest of the girls come too
shou is declared the national delegate of the new nation formed by him and the dirds by the galactic federation.

Miron brags about how she's going to be the first lady and the dirds drag her off to yell at her shou hides next to seina who tells him to get ready to visit the federation.

Alea  confronts show about an event which had been broadcasted, presumably while playing base ball he accidentally exposed the girls on live tv, she asks him to take responsibility.
he runs away as they chase him. technically by owning the ship shou becomes richer then any normal human on the earth besides seina.
the Earth Union State is established.[/spoiler]

My current draft of the script for the first part i.e cosmogony to the end of dual:
https://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/p/the-kajishimaverse-summerized.html
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 11, 2020, 06:55:30 PM
So you're writing summaries for the part of the GXP light novels that features Zinv / Primordial Earth from Dual! ?

edit: Here  (https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True%20Tenchi%20Muyo!%20GXP%2016)is the initial edit for the summary for Vol 16 at Fandom.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 11, 2020, 10:18:25 PM
So you're writing summaries for the part of the GXP light novels that features Zinv / Primordial Earth from Dual! ?

edit: Here  (https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True%20Tenchi%20Muyo!%20GXP%2016)is the initial edit for the summary for Vol 16 at Fandom.

nah im writing summeries of every part of the kajishimaverse with details one would only know by reading the whole things and putting things in chronological order....


so instead of summerising the true tenchi individually im  summerizing jurainan founding to the start of OVA 1
starting with the founding of jurai the summary of washu, summeriszing what we know happened after and seto's early life and battles and kagatos birth, then the flashbacks and backstory to the jurai novel and then the jurai novel events that happen to asuza followed by yosho and then what we know happend to airi up till yosho called and what happened after they were reunites all the way up to tenchi's birth and his mothers death all the way up to chibi the cat dieing lol....
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 11, 2020, 10:21:23 PM
these are some weird summaries, there close in parts but very off....
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 12, 2020, 12:50:27 AM
Yup, I'm just condensing the info into something for a fandom readthrough. I will look it over again sometime in the AM my time to see what I missed / mixed up.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 12, 2020, 05:06:39 AM
Thank you for helping out Eff.

If somebody rewrites the summaries to be more structured and fix the grammar, we can use them for the Tenchi Muyo wiki.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 12, 2020, 12:01:57 PM
Sounds good to me, I want to edit the summaries with the more concise information. There is a way to revert to the previous edit so should not be too much of a hassle.

edit: GXP 15 has been reworded, let me know what you think.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 14, 2020, 02:41:43 PM
Sorry to double-post, just checking how the volume 15 article reads? Want to make sure I'm not glossing over too much pertinent info for the summaries.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 14, 2020, 07:48:14 PM
there getting better but it feels like your having a hard time grasping whats going on in the text...
and like dont get me wrong even i had a hard time in parts they take the weirdest literary diversions and i had to do tons of guesswork. but your summaries are super off.
Have you actually read through the translations recently?

Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 14, 2020, 08:32:07 PM
That's what made the bit of difference for the Volume 15 summary edit. I will check the other few translations over the weekend. Too bad we can't just interview the Kaj.  :discoursechef:
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 15, 2020, 01:02:09 PM
Eff, would you be willing to write drafts for wiki summaries that Waitokon can clean up the structure and grammar for?
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 15, 2020, 01:31:43 PM
I'm looking over the raw scans from Eff's post in October (https://www.uselesstenchi.org/Forum/index.php?topic=1496.msg49866#msg49866) to see if those are just the image inserts. Would help with beefing up the visual layout of the Fandom articles too if that sounds applicable.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 15, 2020, 07:08:08 PM
That may be a good idea. Just don't overdo it.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 15, 2020, 10:39:48 PM
Indeed. Eff did most of the work just by inputting the actual light novel script into machine translation. I imagine Ricin has some of the earlier volumes to complete the picture. But with that in mind, the Fandom summaries can and should encompass only as much as the other True Tenchi light novel articles on Fandom or Wikipedia. My hope is Seven Seas bumps up translations of the GXP arc into English, Spanish, the works, before the next OVA is out.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 16, 2020, 09:15:08 AM
I meant with the images.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 16, 2020, 02:06:42 PM
I'm looking over the raw scans from Eff's post in October (https://www.uselesstenchi.org/Forum/index.php?topic=1496.msg49866#msg49866) to see if those are just the image inserts. Would help with beefing up the visual layout of the Fandom articles too if that sounds applicable.

I'm not sure where i last uploaded all the images there sort of burried in my sites backgroudn files at this point lol
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 16, 2020, 02:08:12 PM
I want to antivasima i really do but i have a particular humor to my writing that is impossibel to write out.

I'm not the guy for the job. also im really reaaaaaaaaaaaly busy atm and need to put this whole workin on the tenchi scene down for a bit to focus on life.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 16, 2020, 03:35:30 PM
Fair enough, and considering there is hardly a Tenchi presence on r/anime and the like, tackling this content is a nice change of pace.  :ground:
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 17, 2020, 01:45:10 AM
No problem. Thank you for helping out.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 17, 2020, 03:46:36 PM
Okay getting the hang of the Fandom edits once again, and the permissions are green across the board. What other volumes do we want to include in these summary edits?
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 18, 2020, 02:43:16 AM
Preferably all of the GXP and True Tenchi volumes.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 18, 2020, 02:14:17 PM
Well there are now summaries for GXP volumes 13 through 16. I'm a little unsure about the first half in what Eff wrote regarding the tutorial Seina gets about magic, and how much Kiriko escalates the argument at the end into a mech action.

edit: thank you for updating #Novels on the GXP article page, Antvasima.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 19, 2020, 05:30:20 AM
Thanks. No problem.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 22, 2020, 02:42:09 PM
Hit me up through here or at Fandom with any pointers or questions, I'm updating GXP volumes 1 to 12 today.  :discoursechef:
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on February 22, 2020, 05:30:26 PM
Thanks a lot for helping out. It is very appreciated.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 23, 2020, 05:40:38 PM
Continuing the updates through tonight. Wondering if I should do the summaries in chapter snippets (see the GXP 1 fandom entry) or just one big blurb.  :eng101:
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 24, 2020, 12:11:10 PM
Quick followup question: what are some of the key differences between the GXP show and the novels? I want to make sure to mention some of them in the Fandom summary updates. Thanks!
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 24, 2020, 04:34:58 PM
Key differences justy off the top of my head:
GXP1:
Seina encounters Radi shank when first going into space.
seina's relation to kai kiriko and tenchi is clarified.
kiriko pursues seina into space but finds herself constantly one step behind untill she hacks the system to make her self assigned as seina's immigration consultant.
Seina meets the seto scouts before  meeting ryoko balta and gets to know them rather well.
The seto scouts have different and far more fleshed out personalities from the anime.
Seina's encounter with seto breaks the mirror aspect of mirror seto because she remembers meeting him before as a child but seto doesn't
minaho and kanemitsu talk about how his wife is pregnate and the baby is minaho's if it's a boy.

Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 24, 2020, 07:49:18 PM
Now granted that Seto has been active in that universe for a significant span of Earth's history, could she simply misplace Seina with all the other Yosho-lings that have sprung up?
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Ricin on February 25, 2020, 12:00:12 PM
Other things that crop up.

You see that the Renza Girls are more than attracted to Seina (Hakuren unprompted willing to protect him forever, Gyokuren asking Seina about Kiriko and being flustered by it because her ESP level insight was wrong)

Seina is shown as much smarter/more observant than your average ecchi MC, the ability to make the connection with the dorm room number and Ikkyo-san, The rotary phone on the GP ship.

Mitoto, Hakuren and Surien know Seina is hung like a horse. The Hakuren disrobing scene where Mitoto comes back and says "Oh ... He's Big!".

The concept of the Fan clubs get introduced and that Ryoko Balta is #3, (Implied Amane and Kiriko are #1 & 2)
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on February 26, 2020, 04:55:32 PM
These would be great things to include in the main GXP anime article, or the category Continuities.

Antvasima, can you double check my formatting for the newest update (GXP volume 3 (https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True_Tenchi_Muyo%21_GXP_3))? I want to know if the header labeled 'Summary' is styled correctly. Mainly, I'm seeing a green fill effect on my browser while the other volumes do not have this. Thanks in advance!
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on February 26, 2020, 09:15:54 PM
GXP 2 main differences: Kenneth and rajau explain that nb is made out of a shape shifting alloy used in cyborg porn.

Widow, the mass murderess who singlehandedly sent airi's nation into a state of collapse infiltrates the academy and comes after seina but he is not what she expects he is selfless and risks his life to save hers and she is suddenly overcome with emotions for the first time, she decides to protect him however she can so she turns herself in to be put to death, designates seina her heir and designates him as her capturer so he inherits alll her massive amounts of propert and alll the massive bounties on her. widow also encourages mikami to go after seina romanticly.

Seina is trampled and dragged into a jungle like area on his way to the dorm and encounters the rare bird which is a delicacy in the academy.
 
The selling of the picture of ryoko balta by the 3 idiots results in a cult being started, the idiots spend all the money and go into debt, the cult falls apart after being taken over by widow,

A massive outbreak of chaos happens because of seina and widow as he leaves to the city, specificly seiryo drives a massive battleship into the city to go after seina.

Raireza one of the key engenires of the gaurdian system and the rincarnation of akane yamano is introduced.

seina's personal data kiddinaps an ai celebrity news host kirche when it gets out in the network and she and seina's personal data construct form a home in Seina's NB, seina's personal data construct is isolated and captured when kirche alerts reireza to her presence.

kiriko pays for a program that removes dr.clays probes marks from seina's head for the introduction ceremony.

Kiriko and amane have drinks and talk about the seina situation one on one at kiriko's house while drinking sake drugged with nano probes that put them to sleep. this drugged sake shows up again later.

there is a flash back chapter to when kiriko was a girl, the shank guild hurled a bio weapon at japan and she learned of this by eaves dropping on her mother and seto, she suspected seina would be it's target and she was right she took it into herself to save seina and it took over her arm and started speaking to her as it took over her body, seto saved her just in the nick of time adn this is why she speaks to her hand sometimes and why she knew at a  young age that she was an alien.

 

Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on March 01, 2020, 07:40:00 AM
Antvasima, can you double check my formatting for the newest update (GXP volume 3 (https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True_Tenchi_Muyo%21_GXP_3))? I want to know if the header labeled 'Summary' is styled correctly. Mainly, I'm seeing a green fill effect on my browser while the other volumes do not have this. Thanks in advance!
I fixed the formatting.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on March 01, 2020, 08:03:04 PM
Awesome, thanks both of you.  :sus:
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on March 04, 2020, 02:30:05 PM
Well just a quick follow-up ping. I want to give Antvasima a chance to describe the move process over at the Fandom pages. And as mentioned in the Shout Box, the following part of the Tenchi Fandom ( https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/Tenchi_Muyo_Continuities#Kajishima_Universe ) is getting updated with summaries for Jurai, Yosho, and Washu relatively soon. I got written permission from Seven Seas to include some juicy snippets from the mass market edition.

edit: Volume One (https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/True_Tenchi_Muyo%21_Volume_1:_Jurai)
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on March 05, 2020, 03:56:03 AM
Thank you for helping out.

What do you need help with?
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on March 05, 2020, 11:35:16 AM
Just to double check if atFandom whether the Tenchi or the VS Battle sections are getting moved to a different registration process. I read through the announce and just wondering if that messes up the existing edits.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on March 12, 2020, 03:03:24 PM
GXP light novel summaries are mostly complete.

Still reading through Eff's posts for volumes 5, 6, 7, 11, and 12. Those might post later today, but just want to give Eff a chance to browse through the previous updates (https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Tenchi_Muyo!_GXP_novels) and provide feedback.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 13, 2020, 06:03:52 AM
GXP light novel summaries are mostly complete.

Still reading through Eff's posts for volumes 5, 6, 7, 11, and 12. Those might post later today, but just want to give Eff a chance to browse through the previous updates (https://tenchi.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Tenchi_Muyo!_GXP_novels) and provide feedback.

i'm a bit busy working on my own orignial work at the moment but ill look over it when i get the chance
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 14, 2020, 01:12:44 PM
waito... your summaries are terribly off but I really do admite the basic skeletons you've laid out

here's what I'd change for

GXP 3

In a display of behavior reminiscent to the opening of OVA 4, Ryo-Ohki is going about the upstairs waking up the family.

Meanwhile, Tarant Shank attends a meeting via holo-image. Before him is a large gathering of pirates sharing news that the illustrious Science Academy defense capabilities are compromised, prompting him to plan a raid on the academy without the guilds permission.

Seina wakes up to start the day as he and his dorm mates get ready to attend the entrance ceremony for the very same Academy. On Television, a robotic greeter known as Kirche provides a unique welcome to the foot traffic thanks to an intelligence imbued with a soul. After the ceremony Seina meets Miki Seinbeck, A popular uperclassman who takes a liking to him.
Tsukiko, Having begged seto to send seina back to earth to become her husband and failed informs her daughter Kiriko of her plans for marriage with Seina.

Because of the chaos that the hunt for Seina the previous night caused, Seina can't undergo bio-enhancement but has to attend nothing but Phisical Education classes led by Seiryo Tennan who uses this to torture him.  Kiriko refuses to step in, but Miki does, eventually he is whisked away in a medical capsule and wakes up in a lab, where he meets Miki's father, Hiroshi Manada, who's attempted experiments on seina lead to an explosion of his lab.

Later the following day, Seina catches up with Kiriko after she has finished repairing the Academy computer systems to normal. They spend time looking out at the Academy's harbor, She is adamant about his return to Earth, but Seina has developed a strong opinion on the matter: he is staying. Seina proceeds to undergo bio-enhancement.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 14, 2020, 01:27:16 PM
gxp 1 should be (check for spelling errors pls)

Seina Yamada is taking a slightly more dangerous bike route to go see his friend Kiriko Masaki. He thinks back to his distant relative Tenchi, whose farm recently took on an explosion of carrot growing hectares. Then his bike starts to wobble, and he suspects a flat tire.

Seina finds himself at the Masaki estate where he uses the water in the pond to find the hole in his tire. That's when something enormous crashes into the nearby lake, engulfing Seina and almost drowning him.

He is revived by a strange blond woman in a bodysuit. She straightens out his garb, and asks if he was the one waiting to join the GP before handing him an application and quickly leaving.
Seina's immediate family corral him into signing the GXP application without giving him a chance to even skim the information pamphlet attached to it.

Seina relents, and eventually retires for the evening, thinking of Kiriko.

When he awakes, thinking he was dreaming all of the previous events, he finds a relative of Mihoshi watching over him. There is a brief exchange with family members over a video connection. He has many questions, but they have to wait.

Seina is given a brief tour, landing him on the bridge of a GP starship. Mihoshi's relative accompanies him, constantly petting his head. Seina is convinced that this is an elaborate hoax that was so well done it even involved his family connections.

His thoughts derail when Mihoshi's relative, then identified as Mitoto-sama, begins debating with the ship's captain on how to convince Seina that he is aboard a starship.

They disengage the ship's gravity, and Seina flails about before finally accepting that he is indeed in outer space. When it's turned back on he accidently opens the ships hailing channel and no one notices but some pirates.

As far as he is aware, the ship's commanding officer Onnainin and the Seniwan assistant Mitoto are aliens. He asks Mitoto about her rank in this organization, and Mitoto clarifies that she is just there to clean things. Seina cannot help but notice how dirty the ship's bridge actually is and that she is being kept from actually cleaning.

After a bit, Seina learns how to work the ship's communications, and considers dialing for home. He imagines how to impress Kiriko with his new line of work. But when the Masaki residence receives his call, it sounds like the answering machine. However, a video springs up, and Seina realizes it is his classmate Kai. Kai cannot see the video on his end, and is shocked when Seina plays a prank on him using the video feed's vantage point.

The ship prepares to enter hyperspace, so Seina must hang up and brace for the unexpected. It is a complete letdown. After, he is asked to retire to his quarters, giving him a chance to phone Kiriko instead of Kai this time.

When the call connects, he is bounced around over to several family members and it appears Kiriko just left the locale. But she returns during Seina's frantic instructions, and as she takes the call it disconnects as the ship is put under emergency lockdown.

The ship is under attack. Seina rushes to the bridge. Onnainin is convinced this encounter was highly unlikely.

After more pirates join the fight, the GP ship intends to retreat. It is chased through several hyperspace jumps until it no longer can jump due to being too close to Radi Shank's ship.

Fortunately, Seto Kamiki Jurai appears in her resplendent royal ship, and shuts down the enemy pirate activities.

Seina discovers firsthand the ornate layout and devastating capabilities of a Juraian Royal Ship. It is identified as the Mikagami, Seto's personal ship. Crew members accidentally let slip about her reputation, that she is none other than the devil princess of Jurai.

Outside of the area of effect of the Mikagami's signature attack, Ryoko Balta assesses the aftermath. They are missing some of their quarry, but dare not intrude on the current Juraian presence.

Seina meets Seto in person, after getting to know a group of four of her staff members for a while, repairs are underway for the damage sustained during the GP ship's escapade.

Seina discovers that the Mikagami's interior is detached from normal space, allowing adequate room for a standalone biosphere comparable to actual planets. It is unquestionably vast for something serving as living quarters for the Mikagami's minimal crew.

While aboard the Mikagami, Seina is shown to a guesthouse. Its dimensions approach half a football field in any direction, allowing for more furnishings than a visiting guest would know what to do with. He soon takes the opportunity to phone his relatives back home.

Once the dust settles, Seto grants Seina a chance to stay in space by joining the Galaxy Police.

The dinner concludes with pudding, before Seina is shown back to the guest house.

Seto hails Ryoko Balta's ship in the distance, and beckons her to come meet seina, after seto leaves she comes aboard the ship peacefuly and is surpised by the kind of person he is.

Eventually, Seina is received at the GP's immigration office. While his thoughts dwell on the promise he made to Seto, he is amazed to find Kiriko working behind the desk. Kiriko is outraged that he was whisked into GP training due to Amane's mishandling, while Amane is pleased to see her account replenished with the completed referral.

After a brief transfer, Seina is introduced to Airi and he meets Seiryo Tenan, who has a predjudice against earthlings but been appointed to teach Seina during the next leg of his training with the GP. Seina goes with airi to try on uniforms where he meets erman, after that he is dropped off at his dorm
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on March 14, 2020, 01:37:22 PM
Much appreciated, have updated 3 and looking at 1 now.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: antvasima on March 15, 2020, 09:44:32 AM
Thank you both for helping out.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 17, 2020, 01:49:27 PM
GXP 2 is pretty good but i noticed some things that needed correction

gxp 2

To date, there are seventeen volumes in the True Tenchi Muyo! GXP series of light novels. The second volume in the series was written by Masaki Kajishima and revisits some of the events starting in episode 4 of the GP anime itself. This volume is only available in Japan.
Summary

While Seina familiarizes himself with the GXP Academy grounds, Kiriko gets into discussing with Seto his reward bounty for helping intercept the scores of pirates earlier. Seto ultimately wires over an exorbitant sum, shocking Kiriko senseless.


Seina meets some of the fellow academy students, several of them introduced as dorm mates. Antics ensue, when Seina is houded for an interview about how he knows kiriko and amane. Airi interupts his interview while in the middle of her bath and tells him not to reveal any classified information.

--ricin the mooning was a gag with kenneth not seina... shouldnt be in the summary ---

A little while later, the evening inspection occurs, and Seina along with his dorm mates must stand in glowing circles for an uncomfortable span. Then, once the halls quiet down closer to curfew, they make a plan for sneaking around undetected.

Kiriko makes a call to Seina's new dorm, only to discover the boys have left stuffed decoys in their beds. An alarm goes out, and security drones buzz around marking the students out of bed. Kiriko however gains access to the security mainframe and redirects drones away from her friend Seina, who gets out of the ordeal mostly intact.

In the aftermath, while Seina's dorm mates wear bags over their heads to cover up fresh markings, Kiriko must contend with a report of human hunters on the grounds.

Seina continues leading his dorm mates on an excursion, now milling about in the city surroundings. Seiryo is rebuffed by Amane's fanboys, and in his rage decides to track the boys down, bringing his family's prized battleship into low orbit over their last known location. Amane covers for Seina to some extent, and someone reports the incident, causing the GXP to deploy a massive force to stop the battleship from causing any damage.

Mass murderer Widow is at large, and intercepts Seina's reconnoiter of the surface streets having caught up to Seina and his dorm mates while they are recollecting themselves in a luxurious hotel.

The hotel balcony collapses as Seina and widow talk and Seina selflessly sheilds her from the fall, in doing so Seina convinces Widow to turn herself in, and she spends the downtime while the GXP process her arrest having tea with Mikami. Amane finds Seiryo and knocks him unconcious.

Seina's escapade winds down as Erma gives his group a ride back to the dormitory. Kiriko gives up on trying to find seina when she learns things have been taken care of. Kiriko goes back home and remembers the incident that caused her to find out about her alien heritage.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on March 17, 2020, 05:32:34 PM
Domo arigatou, changes made Eff!
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 18, 2020, 03:27:55 PM
4 is a mess,the best i can do is:

Seina moves in with the girls and they go shopping but their trip is interupted when seiryo shows up and causes a scene gettting them kicked out.
They go to eat at naashisu and seina finds out it is now run by airi after he gets tricked into calling her granny.
They come back home to find the seto scouts have been designated as maids around the house for security reasons antics ensue.
Miki's team goes for lunch with seina's team and he learns that miki will be going off planet on a dangerous training mission soon.
Miki manages to scoop seina away from the watchfull eyes of everyone and takes seina on a date to her secret spot. She begs him to take care of her father while she's gone.
after she leaves an incedent occurs and Nb trys to transform into her but fails to fully take her form. seina is informed that she and everyone aboard the space station she was working on had been murdered in a pirate attack. the girls decide to rush him into a second round of bioenhancement to keep him busy.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Eff Efferson on March 18, 2020, 03:31:03 PM
gxp 5: no comments this is very spot on. a very light summary but accurate.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: WaitoKon on March 19, 2020, 12:48:33 PM
Thanks, updates made to 4!
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Ricin on March 20, 2020, 06:01:05 PM
I thought I would have more time to work on this but I tried summarizing book 1. Made it 3/4's of the way and got to 11 pages before I called it quits. I want to much in the summary like chapter 3 in my summary was 9 pages.
Title: Re: Tenchi Summerization Project
Post by: Nonsuch Ned on October 16, 2020, 08:31:43 AM
I guess I've never mentioned here. Did some work on them. Possibly over-long but I figure most people will never search them out, so the summaries SHOULD tell a cliff notes story. Made a summary for 17, working off the Machine translations - oof. The part about Jovia's intro was really confusing.

Redid Vol 1, decided to put in chapter separators to make it more readable.
Also did Vol. 4. That was getting long too. One solution was to really skimp on parts covered in the anime.

And Paradise Wars Vol.1
And unedited first "episode" of Vol.2 is in my sandbox. I got burned out on reading the machine stuff and haven't continued for a couple weeks now.

And added a summary of my machine read of the first chapter of GXP 15. Which really should get translated at some point. Yes, it will be covered again, but not from Airen's perspective. And once she stops whining about the desert, being invited to parties, and her boobs- she's pretty interesting.