Role Play Room

[Trace Carter]

"welcome, but illegal," said Chibi-Z

[HotelKatz]

"Well, Z and Skuld could work up a disguise if she really wants to work on the car. All she needs to do is work up a cover story, let her claim to be a cousin of Kei or something." Urd said with a shrug.

[paladin313]

(Trying to get Auir in on this.)

[Trace Carter]

"I could do that," said Z

[Auir]

"It sounds fine to me." said Skuld, sitting down cross-legged.

[paladin313]

"So...you'd want to be made to look like an adult?" he asked.

(Oh, and how was the latest chapter?)

[Auir]

"W-well, looking like an adult is fine too...." she replied, scratching her cheek. She was too embarrassed to admit that she'd actually like it.

(It was good. I'm not use to the writing style but the storyline is good.)

[paladin313]

"Well, don't take too much advantage of it, kiddo," he answered, "You might find yourself in something you can't get away from all that easily."

(How would you describe my writing style?  I'm curious about that.  Is it too descriptive, less, could be more flowery, less...not sure.  Been told my stories read like a movie script.)

[Auir]

"Don't worry about that, I'm fully aware of how things turned out last time." she laughed.

(It depends. Some parts are too descriptive. In others, you repeated yourself. Accidental run-ons. Missing a word, added an extra word. I usually read those novels you find for 50 cents at bookstores so don't take my advice for the standard.)

[paladin313]

(What you read are rough drafts in actuality.  Haven't had a chance to clean them up.  Besides...nothing wrong with description.  Just read Poe, and you feel like you are there!)

"Hey, you're still a great kid sister to have...though, technically, you're older than me...I mean, you were born before me...man, this is awkward."

[Auir]

(Ah, well that's classic.)

"It's fine." she said, patting him on the head.

[paladin313]

(I try.)

"Hey, you must be tired," he said, "You've been up all night.  Let me at least get you to the trailer so you can get some sleep."

[HotelKatz]

"Yeah, Skuld. Either get some sleep or I can use one of my potions that has the same restoring effect as sleeping for 12 hours. Your choice," Urd said.

(I'm going to bed. See you all later.)

[Auir]

"Alright, I am pretty tired anyway." she yawned.

"I'll get some sleep." she gave Urd the 'I-don't-trust-you' face.

[paladin313]

Ian picked her up and said, "I'll get you to the trailer."
     As he walked, he looked at her wad and said, "Man...two stacks...not bad pay for the work you did."