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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / Re: summarization help
« Last post by Ricin on Yesterday at 07:41:14 PM »I hope to help out. I have to take care of some famiy stuff and then I can work on the GXP novels.
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / renza ark error correction and input needed
« Last post by Eff Efferson on Yesterday at 03:30:31 AM »So some of what i reported on gxp 16 and 17 was a bit off.
the clay x washu thing was definatly me misreading the google tranlate which was waaaaaaay off... if anything naja is the one who was tsundere towards clay.
and lizanna is his contracted sex worker like i thought, but he seems to keep her because of the facility he is using for accomidations is some kinda themed brothel hotel or something and requires her to be attached to him he uses her as a servant and for privacy rather then sex and she's more then willing to just ignore him when he asks her to leave him alone.
also I thought kirikos mech was called the wormwood wolf because lazy and that's how it kept coming out in the translator... but its actually well I'm not sure how to translate it's name. I need yalls help. its ヨモツオオカミ or this seems to be a katakana version of 黄泉津大神 or yomitsu kami, 黄泉yomi is hades and 津tsu is ferry kami is obviously god... so the word means hell ferry god,
Should I translate this as yomitsukami? should i change it to charon since clearly that's what the name refers to...?
not sure how i should localise this.
the clay x washu thing was definatly me misreading the google tranlate which was waaaaaaay off... if anything naja is the one who was tsundere towards clay.
and lizanna is his contracted sex worker like i thought, but he seems to keep her because of the facility he is using for accomidations is some kinda themed brothel hotel or something and requires her to be attached to him he uses her as a servant and for privacy rather then sex and she's more then willing to just ignore him when he asks her to leave him alone.
also I thought kirikos mech was called the wormwood wolf because lazy and that's how it kept coming out in the translator... but its actually well I'm not sure how to translate it's name. I need yalls help. its ヨモツオオカミ or this seems to be a katakana version of 黄泉津大神 or yomitsu kami, 黄泉yomi is hades and 津tsu is ferry kami is obviously god... so the word means hell ferry god,
Should I translate this as yomitsukami? should i change it to charon since clearly that's what the name refers to...?
not sure how i should localise this.
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / summarization help
« Last post by Eff Efferson on Yesterday at 02:35:17 AM »So I'm working on summerizing the entire kajishimaverse timeline... obviously this is a huge endevour, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to help, all you have to do is.. well watch one of the shows or one of the books and summerize the main plot of an episode. all of dual has been summerised so far but like i still need aggaruter issekai gxp 1-12 photon and tenchi ova 1-3 summerised
if it doesn't have anything to do with the over arching plot in general and is slice of life fluf you can summerize it in like one line... for example instead of writing the details of all the shenanigans yayoi does at kazuki's place you can summerize like a 3rd of her episode of dual as "yayoi starts intruding on kazuki's daily life at home and it bugs mitsuki."
for example the episode of OVA 2 I love tenchi can be compressed into something like:
one day tenchi is carrying carrots back from the feild when ryo-ohki trys to help by levitating him, but a car comes by and in a panic tenchi has her drop him spilling the carrots which he has to pick up and continue taking back home by himself, when he gets home he finds that ryoko has put on his mothers old outfit, as this happens sasami sends ryo-ohki up to get tenchi. Ryoko tears the outfit as she shows it off to tenchi and he yells at her, but ryo-ohki having popped in at the worst possible moment ,thinks she is talking to him. ryo-ohki goes running off in tears into washus lab where she encounters liforms known as the mass, whom she is partially made of, washu consoles her and she goes back up stairs, tench finds he and appologizes to her, ryoko finds him and appologizes to him by handing him the dress which is now poorly sewn back together.
later that night ryo-ohki wants to go with tenchi but she makes her stay home because he doesn't want anyone seeing her levitating him again. Ryo-ohki runs to washu to ask her to help her with the situation but washu is busy, she goes to cry about it back at the tank filled with mass and the mass start paying attention to her, washu explains what they are and then ayeka calls her and ryo-ohki back to the house to watch soap operas, their soap operas are interupted by a gp anouncement that the gp ship shunga has been stolen, as they watch the mass combine and break out of the lab, they find out but can't find the mass, washu explains the mass to the girls and explains that they follow strong wills and must be following ryo-ohki, durring the explanation ryoko is knocked out for a bit. they check ryo-ohkis memories and realize that she wanted to go help tenchi in the feilds, they run out to save tenchi from the mass which is now shaped like a girl. when the mass gets near tenchi it senses his power and tries to attack him but ryoko comes swooping in late and distracts it, ryo-ohki jumps on the mass and assemilates it, she aquires two new forms, an adult hamoid form, which she has trouble walking in and a child humanoid form. From then on she has a form that she can help tenchi in the feilds with.
if it doesn't have anything to do with the over arching plot in general and is slice of life fluf you can summerize it in like one line... for example instead of writing the details of all the shenanigans yayoi does at kazuki's place you can summerize like a 3rd of her episode of dual as "yayoi starts intruding on kazuki's daily life at home and it bugs mitsuki."
for example the episode of OVA 2 I love tenchi can be compressed into something like:
one day tenchi is carrying carrots back from the feild when ryo-ohki trys to help by levitating him, but a car comes by and in a panic tenchi has her drop him spilling the carrots which he has to pick up and continue taking back home by himself, when he gets home he finds that ryoko has put on his mothers old outfit, as this happens sasami sends ryo-ohki up to get tenchi. Ryoko tears the outfit as she shows it off to tenchi and he yells at her, but ryo-ohki having popped in at the worst possible moment ,thinks she is talking to him. ryo-ohki goes running off in tears into washus lab where she encounters liforms known as the mass, whom she is partially made of, washu consoles her and she goes back up stairs, tench finds he and appologizes to her, ryoko finds him and appologizes to him by handing him the dress which is now poorly sewn back together.
later that night ryo-ohki wants to go with tenchi but she makes her stay home because he doesn't want anyone seeing her levitating him again. Ryo-ohki runs to washu to ask her to help her with the situation but washu is busy, she goes to cry about it back at the tank filled with mass and the mass start paying attention to her, washu explains what they are and then ayeka calls her and ryo-ohki back to the house to watch soap operas, their soap operas are interupted by a gp anouncement that the gp ship shunga has been stolen, as they watch the mass combine and break out of the lab, they find out but can't find the mass, washu explains the mass to the girls and explains that they follow strong wills and must be following ryo-ohki, durring the explanation ryoko is knocked out for a bit. they check ryo-ohkis memories and realize that she wanted to go help tenchi in the feilds, they run out to save tenchi from the mass which is now shaped like a girl. when the mass gets near tenchi it senses his power and tries to attack him but ryoko comes swooping in late and distracts it, ryo-ohki jumps on the mass and assemilates it, she aquires two new forms, an adult hamoid form, which she has trouble walking in and a child humanoid form. From then on she has a form that she can help tenchi in the feilds with.
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / Re: Comiket 97
« Last post by Monster Man on Yesterday at 02:16:15 AM »
New Comiket cover, Looks to have past art we've already seen otherwise I'm not sure of the exact contents.
Sasami looks like she has found a pathway to many abilities some would consider to be -- UNNATURAL.
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / Re: OVA 5 Subbing plans?
« Last post by Ricin on January 27, 2020, 10:54:33 AM »Damn, Thank you for looking into it for me.
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / Re: Comiket 97
« Last post by GP cadet 87 on January 26, 2020, 09:26:13 PM »Huh, funny that none of the first four girls (including the childhood friend) didn't get married first. Even when they LITERALLY got to the altar first lol.
Huh, interesting how Jovia is a magic user, apparently. Wonder if the elf girls who join Seina's harem later have some sort of abilities too.
I'm very interested in the new girls introduced in the Renza arc. Wonder what they add to the world building and plot of the GXP story line.
Huh, interesting how Jovia is a magic user, apparently. Wonder if the elf girls who join Seina's harem later have some sort of abilities too.
I'm very interested in the new girls introduced in the Renza arc. Wonder what they add to the world building and plot of the GXP story line.
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / Re: Comiket 97
« Last post by Eff Efferson on January 26, 2020, 08:51:38 PM »Lots of interesting stuff in the new doujin, thanks a bunc, Eff.
Joivia is 1st wife, huh? Did the other Renza girls disrupt the wedding in the novels too, then? Though even in the anime, it's implied that all the girls were married to Seina in the final scene. Seems a bit weird that Seina was never officially married before he went to the Renza Union. Maybe we'll get some dialogue in OVA 5 talking about the Renza cast. Since Kiriko is apart of the story from ep 1 we can assume the plot and cast of GXP will have a significant presence. Really looking forward to that. Unlike OVA 4, 5 will be covering newer territory.
More Sekishi stuff is very interesting. I can't imagine the Kenshi harem's reactions if they were ti crossover into the Tenchi verse and meet the family. Let alone Tenchi's reaction to what his baby bro's been up to.
The girls didnt get legally married to him because the renza girl stole him before the vows, they had to distract from it by reveiling washu's survival. there's no molesty scene with the scouts in the novels they just tie gyokuren to him so he wont try and run away for fear of grinding against her. He marries them formally sometime after the renza arc which is why gyokuren is also his wife.
he ended up stranded on planet barrium after a battle with HIMC, she is the head of the magical medicine guild of the city he was taken to after passing out from a magic cold (he develops like redonculous magic capabilities)
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / Re: Comiket 97
« Last post by GP cadet 87 on January 26, 2020, 08:42:32 PM »Lots of interesting stuff in the new doujin it seems, thanks a bunch for the info, Eff.
Joivia is 1st wife, huh? Did the other Renza girls disrupt the wedding in the novels too, then?
Though even in the anime, it's implied that all the girls were married to Seina in the final scene. , which is novel 15, right? Seems a bit weird that Seina was never officially married before he went to the Renza Union. Maybe we'll get some dialogue in OVA 5 talking about the Renza cast. Since Kiriko is apart of the story from ep 1 we can assume the plot and cast of GXP will have a significant presence. Really looking forward to that. Unlike OVA 4, looks like 5 will be covering newer territory.
More Sekishi stuff is very interesting. I can't imagine the Kenshi harem's reactions if they were to crossover into the Tenchi 'verse and meet the family. Let alone Tenchi's reaction to what his baby bro's been up to.
Joivia is 1st wife, huh? Did the other Renza girls disrupt the wedding in the novels too, then?
Though even in the anime, it's implied that all the girls were married to Seina in the final scene. , which is novel 15, right? Seems a bit weird that Seina was never officially married before he went to the Renza Union. Maybe we'll get some dialogue in OVA 5 talking about the Renza cast. Since Kiriko is apart of the story from ep 1 we can assume the plot and cast of GXP will have a significant presence. Really looking forward to that. Unlike OVA 4, looks like 5 will be covering newer territory.
More Sekishi stuff is very interesting. I can't imagine the Kenshi harem's reactions if they were to crossover into the Tenchi 'verse and meet the family. Let alone Tenchi's reaction to what his baby bro's been up to.
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / Re: comiket 96
« Last post by Eff Efferson on January 26, 2020, 12:48:17 PM »I think maybe he was making a reference to Arale-chan from Dr. Slump in the middle of the last page there. With him being in a slump and all. Or maybe not and I'm just a dummy. Entirely possible.
Anyway, much love to you guys for all the work you do!
oh yeah that's who's in the pictures... and there bothy akira toriyama ding ding ding i think we have a winner!
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Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-ohki / Re: Comiket 97
« Last post by Harls on January 26, 2020, 07:43:33 AM »Translation done
highlights: it seems kajishima is promising us an issekai seikishi if next summer.
